Dante my lover

A/N: This is the first story i have written and posted. I welcome constructive criticism but don't just tell me you think my story sucks. i do not want to hear it.

My name is Ash and when I turned nineteen I was murdered and turned into a vampire. Unlike most people, I was turned by a female I considered to be a close friend. She had found me half dead, lying in a pool of my own blood, after I had been struck down by the car of my enemy. While we were growing up me and a boy named Raven were close friends, until my parents accidentally killed his dog while it was crossing the street.

That day he  vowed that he would get his revenge on me for something my now dead parents had done. I never thought that he would try to kill me , so when I crossed the street I didn't think twice about the car that was stopped down the road. After he hit me with the car he drove off and my friend Laney found me. When she saw that I was injured to a point where I would be crippled the rest of my life, she gave me two options. She said that she could either end my suffering or that she could turn me into a vampire, left to live for an eternity.

Being that I was only nineteen and really starting to enjoy my life, I picked the obvious answer. I wanted to live forever. Before that day I had never truly known pain, getting bitten by a vampire and turning is the most painful thing I had ever experienced. The pain was so bad that I ended up passing out. When i woke up i noticed that Laney was no where to be found. She had left me all alone. When i looked around for her i noticed that the sky was beginning to turn lighter with the start of a new day. I knew that i needed to get inside. A good thing about growing up with an interest in fantasy, i pretty much knew some of the ground rules to being a vampire.