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Roommates Suck!

By: JDWhiskey79
folder Erotica › Threesomes/Moresomes
Rating: Adult +
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Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction or poetry; that any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental;

Roommates Suck!

Brandi was a bit panicked and understandably so, after all, tonight was a big night and she wanted it to be perfect. She had been seeing Jack now for a few months and things are really moving along nicely. Not too hurried, a date here, a movie there, a dinner one night, a coffee the next. Her feelings for him grew from a small fascination to udder maddening desire. He hasn't never spurned her advances, in fact, they have done a lot....just not all of it. Jack has been the first person Brandi has ever dated that she actually wanted to wait to fuck him, like waiting for Christmas morning.......

A voice yells from the kitchen, “Hey, you gonna finish this?”

“What the fuck are you still doing here?!?”, Brandi snaps back. Kevin, her rude, lazy, pothead of a roommate.

“I live here, remember? Fuck, and I thought I was the stoned one, what've you been smokin?”

Brandi replies, “No, I mean why are you still here, I'm making dinner for Jack tonight, remember? You can't be here!”

Kevin pauses, “.......right, I'm leaving, I'm just wondering if you were going to finish this pizza?”

“NO, fuck, take it with you, just leave!”

“Shit, fine, I'm gone, do me a favour and get laid will you? Take some of that edge off.”

Brandi stops, “I can't believe I'm going to tell you this, but that's the idea. Jack and I have done damn near everything, he is a great kisser, wonderful with his hands and has plenty to play with downstairs, but we have never actually had sex yet. That's why I want tonight to be perfect. Now that you understand what's going on tonight.....GET THE FUCK OUT!!!”

With that, Kevin gave a quick smile followed by a wink and left. 'What a fucking idiot', she thinks to herself, 'He'd be cute if he wasn't such an asshole'. With a quick glance at the clock, her heart skips a beat, she told Jack to come by around 6:30......its 6:27.

Quickly, she runs into her bedroom, check herself in the mirror. Her long light brown hair resting softly on her one shoulder, down to her chest, just barely covering the top of her dress. The dress, a simple, yet shapely red number, hugging her C-cups and slim body comfortably, flowing down to just above her knees. She's always loved this dress, its dirty and simple, not too much, but shows off her great 34 inch legs. She snaps her head up, looks herself in the mirror, her jet blue eyes stare back, moving from piercing to piercing. Left eyebrow, right nostril, 4 in the left ear, 3 in the right, finally darting out her tongue, exposing a barbell she got a few years back. Her lips, dark red, matching her dress.

Ding Dong

“He's here!” She says to herself. Quickly she runs to the door, grabs the door handles and pauses....takes a breath and opens the door.

“I'm I on time?”, Jack smiles. He stands there, 5'9”, short dark brown hair with deep blue eyes. He works as a masseuse at the local gym which keeps him in shape. Dress shirt, black jeans, faded black motorcycle boots.

Brandi eyes him up and thinks to herself, 'He could make a mascot suit look good'.

“Come in! Dinner is almost ready.”

Jack kicks off his boots and sits down at the kitchen table. Brandi spins toward the stove, housing the roast for the evening, only to find its on counter. Kevin removed it to warm up his pizza and didn't put it back.....its only half done.

“Oh my god, I can't believe it. My roommate ruined my dinner!!!”

“What do you mean?”

“Kevin.....he wanted to eat something before he left. I told him he could have it, he must have pulled out my roast and left before he put it back. I wanted tonight to be perfect, now its destroyed!”

“The nights not over you know, its far from destroyed”, Jack replies, “To be honest, I didn't come over tonight for dinner.....”

“You didn't? I thought you might like to eat something....”

Jack stands up, walks over to Brandi and wraps his arms around her. Looks straight into her eyes and smiles, “Well I do plan on 'eating' something, and I know it's already hot.”

There lips meet in a hurried frenzy of passion. Each others tongue wrestling to cover more ground, probing, prodding. Brandi feels her knees buckle, if it wasn't for the fact he was holding, she surely would have hit the floor. Feeling the sudden weight, Jack takes the cue and cradles her in his arms and begins to carry her from the kitchen into her bedroom, constantly locking eyes with hers.

Entering her bedroom, he gently places her on the bed. Brandi reaches up and begins to unbutton his shirt, upon reaching the final button, Jack removes the clothing as she continues to his jeans. Suddenly her eyes catch something new, something she has never seen or noticed before, a tattoo, on his left shoulder.

Brandi jumps to her feet and locks lips with him once again, taking control, if only for a moment, turning him around and throwing him onto the bed. Reaching backward, grasping the zipper, she begins to undo her dress as she feels his hands begin to wander up her legs. With the zipper all the way down, the red fabric flies across the room, exposing her body to the energy in the air. She wasn't wearing anything underneath, Brandi has always felt comfortable with her body, she'd shop naked at the mall if she could.

With a firm grip on his jeans, she removes them with a quick yank, revealing his boxers, already stretched with the manhood within. Climbing onto of him, they kiss, its hot, wet and hurried again. Her lips abandon his, only to explore new flesh. Moving from his chin down his chest and past his stomach. She feels his legs flex and abs tighten has she nears her final destination. Brandi pulls back his boxers to member. Think, hot and hard, she licks the base of his cock and drags her barbell up his shaft. Jack lets out a groan as she takes his head into her mouth, sucking hard and using the foreign metal in her mouth to the best of her ability. Thrusting up and down, feeling every ridge, every flex, every pulse, she savours his taste and listens and Jacks breathing becomes heavier and faster.

“Ok, that's it. I said I was here to eat something....”, and with that quick joke, Brandi finds herself pulled upward and flipped over. Jack lifts both her thighs and wastes no time, licking, sucking and nibbling her throbbing, wet pussy. She lets out a scream as the sudden stimulation overcomes her. She feels his lips and tongue travel everywhere, up and down each thigh, up to her pelvic bone, over her clit, down her ass and back again.

Brandi can't contain herself has she begins moaning, grinding and bucking into his mouth. A tremendous feeling starts to build inside, she knows shes about the cum, but never this strong before. With continued pressure on her clit, Jack slips two fingers inside her moist slit and applies a circular motion to her g-spot. She screams as it sends her over the top. Her body tenses up and she thrashes at the covers on the bed. She shakes as her climax ends and the world returns to her with Jack still tending to her wanting pussy.

“HEY, mind keeping it down?”, a voice from the other room.

“What?!? Kevin, is that you?”, Brandi screams.

“I said shut up. I don't want to hear it unless you want to share it.”, Kevin says from the kitchen.

“Fine, get in here and stick your cock in my mouth or you can just fuck off!”

A hush takes over the home....Jack stops and looks upward and the incensed woman he's been servicing. Kevin walks into the room with a puzzled look on his face, “Are you serious?”

“Listen asshole, you damn near ruined my night with your little pizza stunt. I'm having the best night of my life right now and I'll be damned if I will let you ruin this. Now show me your cock or fuck off.”

With that, Brandi rolls over and waves her ass towards Jack. She looks back at him, “Fuck me, fuck me now! Kevin, give me your dick, right now, before I change my mind.”

With that, Kevin awkwardly pulls down his shorts, “You never were very graceful.....”, Brandi comments. With one hand she grabs his half hard unit and begins to stroke it. Paying attention to the new meat in front of her, the entry of Jacks 8 inch rod sends shivers up her spine. She gasps as Jack wastes no time yet again, setting a rhythm and thrusting deep inside her. The power of the room has shifted and they all know it, Brandi is in charge now and they dare not question it.

Kevin's cock is finally ready, 6”, slim and probably never seen the light of day, she gobbles it whole. Kevin yells, as if he just stubbed a toe, Brandi pulls him closer. The feeling of power and control...the two different dicks filling her.....the sounds of two men being pleasure by her sends her into another towering orgasm. Her body tenses yet again, clamping down on both Kevin and Jack, making it seem as though their dicks grew in size instantly.


Very little effort is required of Brandi at this point, Jacks body slapping against her ass is providing the momentum needed. Every time he plunges deep inside, it bounces her whole body forward, forcing Kevin's prick hard onto her tongue. She can feel him slide back and forth on her barbell, adding the extra stiffness and sensation that drives her roommate crazy. All three now, yelling, groaning and getting lost in the situation provided by this Brandi.


Kevin's breathing becomes laboured as she begins to feel his wood flex and suddenly the sensation of his cum hits the back of her throat. Brandi sucks hard to get it all, still over come with the feeling of Jack reaching deep inside her. Kevin lets out a yell of pure enjoyment and she cleans him out. Jacks cock begins to reach deeper than before as he picks up speed. Brandi begins to feel her own wetness leak out of her. The feeling of power and satisfaction is a drug to her, and she peaks once again, sending another burst of energy through her, squeezing Jacks cock again.

He changes his thrusting pattern, suddenly going twice as fast with a final deepening injections, filling her pussy with hot cum, shot after shot after shot. With every additional dose, a wave of energy runs through her, one after another, filling her more and more until she feels his juice start running down her legs.

Brandi collapses on the bed and looks around, Jack behind her, flashing a smile, Kevin leaning against the wall with his dick in his hand, still with a bewildered look on his face.

She gets up from the bed and leans into Jacks ear, “That was incredible, thank you.” Then turns to her stunned roommate. With a smile on her face, she grabs his hand and slyly says, “And if you ever fuck with my night again, I will kick your ass out.”