Dark Legend (Repost)
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Category:
DarkFic › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
2
Views:
1,220
Reviews:
0
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
Disclaimer: I own the characters and content, that it is a work of fiction, and that any likenesses to unoriginal characters or real persons is coincidental
Prologue
A/N:
This has got to be at least the 7th rendition of my novel. Reason why I rewrote it so many times, is cause when I look back on the chapters and re-read them to see how it sounds, I cringe and tell myself that it's crap.
A few of my friends have already taken a look at this and said that I was nuts to think it was utter crap and should be trashed, and they recommended that I post it up somewhere to get more opinions about it. So that's what I'm doin'! :D
There is going to be a bit of Japanese in here, but it will all be explained at the A/N of the bottom of each chapter.
This has a lot of mystery elements to it, and it would please me to no end if you guys try to guess things out! Though on the other hand if it is TOO obvious, let me know so I can rectify it. I really don't want it to be overly obvious......
Lastly.....
I hope to get this professionally published one day, so reviews from you guys are WORSHIPPED. *bows down* I don't plan on giving this manuscript to a publisher though until it's fully completed. And I warn you all now, that that is going to take quite a bit of time....
So sit back and enjoy. At least try to. :D
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Prologue:
"What in the bloody hell is your problem?!" a man near-screamed, eyes wide and wildy staring at the person at whom he was screaming. His opponent merely stared at him.
"...Obviously, you are." The girl responded. Her tone was icy cold and chillingly calm, and the expression in her dark red eyes spoke of loathing and utter distaste for the man yelling at her. He shook his head.
"You're nothing but a freak! Get the fuck away from me!" He yelled, backing away from her piercing gaze, all the while stumbling. He couldn't get away from her fast enough; when he felt it was safe to assume that she wouldn't be able to hurt him if he turned his back, he did just that and bolted as if his life were on the line. He didn't dare look back.
"Moron." The girl gave an audible sigh as she shook her head, running a hand through her long, unruly hair. Suddenly, a slow clap-clap-clap broke the stillness of the air.
"That was quite the impressive display." A new voice spoke as its unnoticed owner stepped out of the shadows. The man stepped towards the girl as if to observe her more closely.
"Shut it. I suggest you just leave me alone." The girl snarled defensively in response. She really wasn't in any mood to socialize.
"As you wish..." The man began as he made to walk past her. Just as he had passed her shoulder, he leaned in ever the slightest and breathed out "...Youkai-san." Her eyes widened considerably upon this utterance, and she whipped her head around to try to get a better look at the stranger who knew her name. All she saw though, was an empty dark alleyway.
She stared at it for a few minutes before furiously shaking her head.
"I need a drink." She muttered, walking away.
"Edward, you need to stop doing that to people." A male voice, different from that owned by the stranger just on the street below, reprimanded. Two figures stood next to each other on the roof of the building overlooking the alleyway. 'Edward,' the first man, grinned at his partner.
"I can't help it; it's in my nature." He responded. "Besides...." He trailed off, looking down at the spot where the girl had been standing. "...It has begun."
With a strong gust of wind, the two men simply vanished.
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A/N:
Youkai - Japanese for "Demon", or "Devil".
'San' - Japanese honorific system. Equivalent to Mr. and Ms. in the English language.
This has got to be at least the 7th rendition of my novel. Reason why I rewrote it so many times, is cause when I look back on the chapters and re-read them to see how it sounds, I cringe and tell myself that it's crap.
A few of my friends have already taken a look at this and said that I was nuts to think it was utter crap and should be trashed, and they recommended that I post it up somewhere to get more opinions about it. So that's what I'm doin'! :D
There is going to be a bit of Japanese in here, but it will all be explained at the A/N of the bottom of each chapter.
This has a lot of mystery elements to it, and it would please me to no end if you guys try to guess things out! Though on the other hand if it is TOO obvious, let me know so I can rectify it. I really don't want it to be overly obvious......
Lastly.....
I hope to get this professionally published one day, so reviews from you guys are WORSHIPPED. *bows down* I don't plan on giving this manuscript to a publisher though until it's fully completed. And I warn you all now, that that is going to take quite a bit of time....
So sit back and enjoy. At least try to. :D
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*
Prologue:
"What in the bloody hell is your problem?!" a man near-screamed, eyes wide and wildy staring at the person at whom he was screaming. His opponent merely stared at him.
"...Obviously, you are." The girl responded. Her tone was icy cold and chillingly calm, and the expression in her dark red eyes spoke of loathing and utter distaste for the man yelling at her. He shook his head.
"You're nothing but a freak! Get the fuck away from me!" He yelled, backing away from her piercing gaze, all the while stumbling. He couldn't get away from her fast enough; when he felt it was safe to assume that she wouldn't be able to hurt him if he turned his back, he did just that and bolted as if his life were on the line. He didn't dare look back.
"Moron." The girl gave an audible sigh as she shook her head, running a hand through her long, unruly hair. Suddenly, a slow clap-clap-clap broke the stillness of the air.
"That was quite the impressive display." A new voice spoke as its unnoticed owner stepped out of the shadows. The man stepped towards the girl as if to observe her more closely.
"Shut it. I suggest you just leave me alone." The girl snarled defensively in response. She really wasn't in any mood to socialize.
"As you wish..." The man began as he made to walk past her. Just as he had passed her shoulder, he leaned in ever the slightest and breathed out "...Youkai-san." Her eyes widened considerably upon this utterance, and she whipped her head around to try to get a better look at the stranger who knew her name. All she saw though, was an empty dark alleyway.
She stared at it for a few minutes before furiously shaking her head.
"I need a drink." She muttered, walking away.
"Edward, you need to stop doing that to people." A male voice, different from that owned by the stranger just on the street below, reprimanded. Two figures stood next to each other on the roof of the building overlooking the alleyway. 'Edward,' the first man, grinned at his partner.
"I can't help it; it's in my nature." He responded. "Besides...." He trailed off, looking down at the spot where the girl had been standing. "...It has begun."
With a strong gust of wind, the two men simply vanished.
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A/N:
Youkai - Japanese for "Demon", or "Devil".
'San' - Japanese honorific system. Equivalent to Mr. and Ms. in the English language.