My first attempt
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Category:
Erotica › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
1
Views:
2,409
Reviews:
0
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
My first attempt
This is my first attempt into writing something like this, so please, be gentle with it. Reviews would be gladly appreciated, since that would help be develop this story. Also, English is NOT my mother tongue, so excuse me for any mistake. If you’re feeling too hasty for the snuggling part, just scroll down to this part,
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but then you’ll miss the whole context!
Thank ye!
Chapter 1
I’ve been dating my boyfriend for 4 months. We met through an online community, but there wasn’t anything dangerous about it – we were in the same high school, but never talked to each other. Soon we found out how much we were alike – from gastronomy to musical tastes. So I decided to take the plunge and invite him to a date. And how gorgeous he was! Not very tall, thin, with big brown eyes and strong, short black hair, faint stubble around his chin and a faint moustache as well. Yeah, not exactly prince charming for you maybe, but to me, his appearance and personality were both delightful. After some months, he declared his love to me, so I confessed mine. And then we started dating regularly.
So here I am today, narrating my relationship from the start. I’ve been very happy by his side, since we always support ant talk to each other every day. The big problem is, he never actually tried to advance on me – it’s not like I’m some horny bitch! It’s just that it isn’t normal for a guy of his age (near 20) to be so calm when I try to provoke him. He once touched lightly my breast without wanting to, and he just said “sorry!” This had to change!
Yesterday, my mother told me she wanted to meet my boyfriend, and since my godmother let her borrow the keys to her summer house, we could spend the day in there. It’s a nice house, with a barbecue, a garden and a pool. I told my boyfriend about it, and he agreed to come.
During the morning nothing special happened. My mother and my stepfather loved him, and we had a nice lunch. But then, during the afternoon, they had to do a favour to my godmother- they had to go buy some special medicine for the grass, so my mother agreed that we could stay home, since they had to go far away – they’d return at dinner time though.
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We stayed on the couch watching TV, but then he suggested that we could go for a swim in the pool. I was a bit shy at first – I’m not properly Miss Universe: short, a bit chubby, but I do like my chestnut hair and my big, round, brown eyes and my round, big breasts. We entered the pool, and then he came near me.
- Hey dear. I’ve wanted to tell you this for a while. I…I do really love you…
- I know that love. I really love you as well…but… what do you really mean?
- I’ve been trying to hold myself back…you’re so hot and at the same time so over protected…
And with that he started to kiss me deep, while he rubbed my waist with both hands.
- Wait love…why are you acting like this today? You never dared to touch me! And believe me, this has been making me feel very frustrated!
He just didn’t answer. He cornered me in the pool forcefully, and started kissing me deep once again. His tongue was so slippery with the water! Then he lifted one of his knees and held me in my centre with it. I could feel my inner parts getting wet and I moaned in his mouth,; I couldn’t be more embarrassed.
- Oh baby, don’t worry. This is just the beginning, and believe me, you’ll be MUCH WETTER soon enough…just leave everything to me! – he said, grinning with his sexy smile.
He pulled my right breast with his left hand out of my bikini top and teased my nipple with the tips of his fingers. With the other hand, he started to move my waist, so that I was dry-humping his leg. OH GOD, I was feeling so hot, as if I could burst! The hand that was applying a soft pleasure to my nipple soon abandoned it, only to dive into the pearl of my inner parts. As I started moaning by my own, I could already see the 7th Heaven into the distance. He bit and licked my collarbone and my neck as I grabbed his hair forcefully; then he inserted a finger into my hole while he furiously rubbed my pearl with the thumb, which was enough to crash me into the pleasures of Heaven. I screamed and he kissed me to cover the noise.
- Ahh…huumm…I never thought you’d be capable of doing this….hmmm…. you’re so…..so mean…teasing me all this time!
- If I acted like this before you’d probably slap me and call me a pervert!
- Well, it just depends on how you’d approach the subject…
- C’mon now. I’ve got many things to teach you…
Reviews please! I hope it wasn’t too corny or long… I already have chapter 2 in mind, but all of it will depend of your reviews! Thank ye !! :)
~~~~~~~~~
but then you’ll miss the whole context!
Thank ye!
Chapter 1
I’ve been dating my boyfriend for 4 months. We met through an online community, but there wasn’t anything dangerous about it – we were in the same high school, but never talked to each other. Soon we found out how much we were alike – from gastronomy to musical tastes. So I decided to take the plunge and invite him to a date. And how gorgeous he was! Not very tall, thin, with big brown eyes and strong, short black hair, faint stubble around his chin and a faint moustache as well. Yeah, not exactly prince charming for you maybe, but to me, his appearance and personality were both delightful. After some months, he declared his love to me, so I confessed mine. And then we started dating regularly.
So here I am today, narrating my relationship from the start. I’ve been very happy by his side, since we always support ant talk to each other every day. The big problem is, he never actually tried to advance on me – it’s not like I’m some horny bitch! It’s just that it isn’t normal for a guy of his age (near 20) to be so calm when I try to provoke him. He once touched lightly my breast without wanting to, and he just said “sorry!” This had to change!
Yesterday, my mother told me she wanted to meet my boyfriend, and since my godmother let her borrow the keys to her summer house, we could spend the day in there. It’s a nice house, with a barbecue, a garden and a pool. I told my boyfriend about it, and he agreed to come.
During the morning nothing special happened. My mother and my stepfather loved him, and we had a nice lunch. But then, during the afternoon, they had to do a favour to my godmother- they had to go buy some special medicine for the grass, so my mother agreed that we could stay home, since they had to go far away – they’d return at dinner time though.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
We stayed on the couch watching TV, but then he suggested that we could go for a swim in the pool. I was a bit shy at first – I’m not properly Miss Universe: short, a bit chubby, but I do like my chestnut hair and my big, round, brown eyes and my round, big breasts. We entered the pool, and then he came near me.
- Hey dear. I’ve wanted to tell you this for a while. I…I do really love you…
- I know that love. I really love you as well…but… what do you really mean?
- I’ve been trying to hold myself back…you’re so hot and at the same time so over protected…
And with that he started to kiss me deep, while he rubbed my waist with both hands.
- Wait love…why are you acting like this today? You never dared to touch me! And believe me, this has been making me feel very frustrated!
He just didn’t answer. He cornered me in the pool forcefully, and started kissing me deep once again. His tongue was so slippery with the water! Then he lifted one of his knees and held me in my centre with it. I could feel my inner parts getting wet and I moaned in his mouth,; I couldn’t be more embarrassed.
- Oh baby, don’t worry. This is just the beginning, and believe me, you’ll be MUCH WETTER soon enough…just leave everything to me! – he said, grinning with his sexy smile.
He pulled my right breast with his left hand out of my bikini top and teased my nipple with the tips of his fingers. With the other hand, he started to move my waist, so that I was dry-humping his leg. OH GOD, I was feeling so hot, as if I could burst! The hand that was applying a soft pleasure to my nipple soon abandoned it, only to dive into the pearl of my inner parts. As I started moaning by my own, I could already see the 7th Heaven into the distance. He bit and licked my collarbone and my neck as I grabbed his hair forcefully; then he inserted a finger into my hole while he furiously rubbed my pearl with the thumb, which was enough to crash me into the pleasures of Heaven. I screamed and he kissed me to cover the noise.
- Ahh…huumm…I never thought you’d be capable of doing this….hmmm…. you’re so…..so mean…teasing me all this time!
- If I acted like this before you’d probably slap me and call me a pervert!
- Well, it just depends on how you’d approach the subject…
- C’mon now. I’ve got many things to teach you…
Reviews please! I hope it wasn’t too corny or long… I already have chapter 2 in mind, but all of it will depend of your reviews! Thank ye !! :)