Moonlit Memory

My friend, well, g/f (lol) wrote this. she doesn't think it's awesome and i disagree. i'm going to leave it up to you all to decide so please review or rate this. hehe. it will be highly appreciated especially since we have a bit of a bet going on. thanks a bunch and totally enjoy.


It was a warm night. The breeze was filled with the smells of green things underlain with the sweet rotting smell of old leaves and the fragrant zing of African violets lingered after the air quieted. Raine walked under the rustling foliage of the giant trees whose trunks three men couldn’t wrap around. Her sandaled feet stepped delicately through the calf-length spring grass, still soft with youth. Next to her walked her greatest friend and companion, her comrade-in-arms and confidant, her rival and lover. She walked with the liquid grace of a wild animal just containing itself from running in joy through the wilderness.
Raine smiled at her friend with love and devotion, her eyes speaking volumes to the other woman. Faith looked up from her study of the rippling shadows and dappled light of the moon through the leaves to catch the look and return the smile. Her hand reached the short distance between them to cup Raine’s and gently intertwine her supple fingers with hers and rub at the silky skin with a thumb.
Raine tightened her grip on Faith’s hand and closed the distance between them until their white-clad bodies touched at the shoulder and all down their arms. The wind blew gently at them and Raine watched her companion’s fair curls dance around her face, the silky texture catching the moonlight delicately and highlighting her complexion and blue eyes. She noticed the unique glow of her eyes, like a wolf’s, and smiled at a memory that flitted momentarily across the surface of her thoughts like a butterfly.
“I love you,” Raine whispered softly.
Faith smiled at the one she’d fought so hard and long for, feeling a trill of excitement deep down at hearing those words spoken to her from those beautiful lips. The moon was shining on her face, perfectly illuminating the crystalline green eyes and elegant face.
“I love you too,” Faith replied, feeling the truth of that simple statement in the marrow of her bones and the center of her heart.
Raine smiled at her, letting her eyes close in content as they walked further into the gentle wildness of the woods. They continued walking, listening to their footsteps and singing of the insects and late birds in the grass and trees. The sounds were soothing as was each woman’s presence for the other and they were completely content in their aloneness and isolation from other people here in the darkening forest.
Suddenly Raine turned and pressed her lips against Faith’s, letting them linger for a moment before pulling back and grinning impishly at her lover’s slightly astonished look. Then she started running down the path in front of them, pulling her hand swiftly from Faith’s. Faith stared in confusion for a moment, her head still swimming from the unexpected kiss. Raine was already several feet ahead and she rushed to the chase when she recognized the game.
The pursuit was playful, more dodging and laughing than desperate running, and the game continued longer than it would have if either one was really trying. Their path wound through the trees and took them past the moss shrouded trunks and around the berry-laden bushes filling the spaces between.
The sheltering roof of leaves came to an end and they ran into a space filled with moonlight, shining in a silver veil in a seemingly tangible curtain in the air. Raine paused in her flight to gaze in wonder for a moment before Faith tackled her in a tangle of clutching arms and fragrant grasses. They lay, panting and laughing, upon one another neither wanting to move.
“Good chase,” Raine panted.
“What’s my prize?” Faith asked huskily, her arms wrapping tighter around her waist.
“Oh, I don’t know,” Raine began, leaning closer to her lover and placing her face closer to hers. “Maybe I didn’t have one in mind.”
“Do I get to pick then?”
“And what would you want if I let you?”
Faith laughed and pulled Raine solidly against her.
“You.”
Raine felt a trill go through her and took a moment to pretend to think it over, trailing her fingers along Faith’s side and chest and smirking when she heard her soft moan.
“I think I can deal with that quite well,” she said, and pressed her lips gently but solidly against Faith’s, enjoying the taste of her mouth.
Faith made a sound of enjoyment and rolled Raine on top of her, running her hands over her back. She traced the muscle outlines up to her shoulders, along her arms, back down her sides to her buttocks where her hands lingered.
Raine shivered in pleasure at the light strokes of Faith’s fingers and deepened the kiss some, teasing her lips with her tongue. She could feel the changes in the body beneath her and she let her hands wander to bring about more pleasant tensing beneath her. She shifted and placed a knee on the ground to give her room to play with Faith’s firm breasts. She ran her hands lightly over them, feeling Faith’s intake of breath at the sensation and reveling in it before reaching for them more firmly.
Faith gasped as Raine’s fingers gripped her nipple through the fabric of her shirt and moaned as she turned that gasp into a deeper exploration of her mouth. She was feeling almost drunk with the intoxicating taste, smell, and feel of the woman on top of her and she loved the dizziness of it. And suddenly she wanted to feel the intimacy that could only be achieved during the touch of skin against skin.
She tugged at the cloth belt keeping Raine’s loose dress pressed against her frame and grinned against her lips as it came free. She temporarily lost her focus on removing the garments as Raine’s tongue began a battle for dominance but the appeal of Raine’s naked silhouette won over the enjoyment of the game going on between their two mouths and the kiss was soon being broken to tug the length of fabric over her head.
Raine smiled down at her, her dark braided hair falling over her shoulder, and began taking Faith’s clothes off as well. First the shirt and then the skirt were removed from her frame, and since she disdained undergarments, she lay directly on the soft sweet-smelling grass that carpeted the moonlit clearing.
Faith now felt that the game was uneven for she was fully exposed but her lover retained coverings in the important places. She wanted them gone to see the full magnificence of the figure so jealously guarded from other eyes. Raine complied as she sat up and divested her of them, switching positions in the meantime so that she dominated the forest-complexioned woman. She paused a moment to enjoy the view and laughed lightly at the red blush appeared on her cheeks before burying herself in the crook of her neck and letting her mouth begin its ministrations to her soft skin.
Raine cried out at the feel of Faith’s lips, tongue, and teeth working on her tender flesh at her neck and down her chest to the valley of her breasts. Her hands were rubbing everywhere they could reach and a thigh was tantalizingly close to her center, teasing her with its closeness but not touching. She clutched at Faith’s back with her nails as her mouth captured a nipple and began enticing it into a firm cylinder. The other nipple, in turn, was submitted to the same attention and Raine was gasping for air when Faith moved lower.
Raine felt the need to arouse her lover as well now that she was feeling so much fire between her legs and her fingers found there way to Faith’s nipples where they began pinching and rolling them until they were as hard and raised as hers had become and the breath came out of her lover’s mouth in a melodic moan, flavored with desire.
Their touches were more desperate now and their breath came in fast bursts interspersed with moans and gasps as the other’s fingers, thigh, or mouth hit a sensitive spot. Then in mutual, unspoken agreement, they maneuvered themselves into position so that both could pleasure the other at the same time.
Raine nibbled gently on the lips of Faith’s flower while her fingers tickled the inside of her thighs and Faith began lapping at the wetness coating the inside of Raine’s mound her tongue just touching the surface of her clit. Then Faith’s mouth was buried completely inside her and her tongue was working fiercely to bring her lover up to a climax. Raine gasped loudly at the unexpected surge of pleasure and buried her own mouth and tongue in the entrance to Faith’s warm center, the source of her sweet juices, and swirled it around the entrance and moved in and out of the smooth tunnel, enjoying the sounds of Faith’s answering moans.
Then, her burst of initial playfulness done, Raine moved to the clit and took it all into her mouth, sucking gently as if giving head to a man. Faith paused in her playing to pant and moan before attacking Raine’s clit even more fiercely with a swiftly moving tongue. Raine moaned against her clit, vibrating the sensitive organ and ran her tongue all over the slight bump shape of it, trying to increase Faith’s excitement as much as her own was soaring.
The crescendo of pleasure was quickly becoming too much for Raine and despite her attempts of hold it off, the orgasm rippled through her body in a continuing wave as Faith sustained her tongue’s movements despite her bucking body. When she finally stopped, Raine had to take a moment to catch her breath from the scream of intense pleasure that had escaped despite her best efforts.
Faith wiped her mouth in satisfaction and rested her head against Raine’s thigh to wait. She jumped in surprise and moaned when Raine had recovered and began pleasuring her in earnest. Before it had been a slow build up and now it was fast because she had nothing to concentrate on but her own pleasure. In a few moments she was rocking with the force of Raine’s pleasurable ministrations and saying her name over and over in a chant of want. The burning was building up fast and all she wanted was the explosion waiting at the end of that build up. Then in a sudden burst it hit and her body shook with the force of its movement through her body and she called out her name.
She slumped forward and panted heavily for breath as Raine rolled her over and crawled shakily up to her. She laid on the soft grass and Faith tiredly rolled onto her offered arm and clutched at her waist, reveling in the closeness of the contact through her weariness.
“Was it good?” Raine asked.
“Most definitely,” Faith panted.
“Good,” Raine replied. “Because you were amazing.”
And they snuggled into one another’s company and fell asleep under the watchful eye of the silver orb and its sparkling companions in the sky.