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Category:
Erotica › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
2
Views:
7,280
Reviews:
16
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
Morning Bliss
Hey everyone! This is my first story ever, so don't be too brutal with me. However, just because I ask you not to be cruel, doesn't mean that I'm afraid of some critisism. If you see something wrong with my work, then please tell me. I'd appreciate it very much and I'd strive to fix it. THAT DOESN'T MEAN YOU HAVE TO YELL AT ME OR THREATEN ME!!!! A simple statement would work. Thank you for reading this small note! Enjoy the story!
DISCLAIMER: This story is MINE and mine alone! All characters in here are created from my own imagination and should not be stolen from here! Thank you.
CHAPTER 1: Morning Bliss
The morning sun fluttered over the room, illuminating the small area. My eyes opened to the glorious sight of my first and only lover. His brown hair seemed to glow from the sun light. Those perfectly formed lips were parted ever so slightly, tempting me to taste them. One of his arms was wrapped around my waist in a sweet embrace. The warmth of his bare chest could be felt up against my own. His scent flooded my senses, clouding my mind. My finger tips instinctively ran up his strong arms slowly and softly.
I paused only a moment at his parted lips. With the tips of my first two fingers, I touched his reddened lips. His eyes opened slowly at my touch. A gentle smile graced his lips. I blushed slightly and tried to pull away. He tightened his grip on my waist and held me close to him, kissing me sweetly. I rested my hand on his chest, deeply enjoying his kiss. He took the opportunity to let his tongue slip out of his mouth and run across my bottom lip. My own two lips parted in welcome at such a delicate and intimate gesture. Once his tongue slipped into my mouth, our tongues began that age-old dance for dominance. A few moments passed before we pulled away for air. He looked deeply in my eyes and whispered the three words every girl desires to hear: “I love you.” His piercing blue eyes never failed to hypnotize me. I gave a sheepish smile and returned my own “I love you.”
Without a moment’s hesitation, we were in a heated kiss once again. Things only grew more passionate from there. One of his hands moved to my lower back, never breaking the kiss, as my arms snaked around his neck, pulling him closer to me. His thumb began to move in small circles on my low back, sending a wave of shivers up my spine. He pushed me back gently and lay on top, our naked bodies pressed against one another. Suddenly, his lips left mine and he began planting butterfly kisses from my cheeks down to my neck and shoulder. I whispered an almost inaudible moan as his heated tongue ran over my neck with great skill. Upon hearing my moan, his hand found its way to my chest and he began to massage one of my breasts in a very loving manner. Both my hands moved to his back, gently letting my nails scrape up and down. Not wanting to be unfair, he switched hands and began the same massage on my neglected breast.
I kissed his neck several times before sucking on it lightly, leaving a small pink spot when I pulled away. Wanting to hear me moan again, he moved his hand further down my body and began to rub on a sensitive area right above my most sensitive body part. I bit my lip hard enough to keep silent, wanting to see if he’d continue to try and hear me moan or not. Giving a knowing smirk, his hand lowered even more, but didn’t move. I whimpered and pressed my glistening, heated core against his hand. Sensing what I wanted, he plunged a finger deep inside of me, forcing me to call out his name in pure pleasure.
He smirked in satisfaction as I leaned my head back, gasping for air. I gripped onto his shoulder, greedily begging for more. His gruff moan could be heard before he inserted another finger. My grip on him tightened as I tried to stifle another moan. His movements slowed as he leaned close to my ear and whispered: “Moan for me! If you don’t or if you try to stop them, I’ll stop.” I whimpered and squirmed underneath him, silently asking for more. His movements stopped all together and he began to pull his fingers out of me slightly. Instinctively, I wrapped one leg around him and pulled him closer to me. He gave me a serious look saying “I’m serious. I’ll stop if you hold back.” I nodded dumbly as my only response. I was breathing heavily by now, my chest constantly rising and falling. It seemed to distract my lover for a few moments. It wasn’t until I whimpered that he regained focus.
Suddenly, he plunged his two fingers inside of me again. My back arched from the spontaneous movement. The sound of my moans escaladed as his fingers moved faster and harder inside of me. I knew what he wanted from me…he wanted me to scream for him…to beg for more. And without any hesitation at all, I gave him everything he wanted.
As his speed increased, so did the volume of my moans. The little feeling in the pit of my stomach began to grow dramatically. There was a knot forming in my stomach now. It became more complex and tangled with each passing second. The twisting and churning of the knot made me beg and plead to my darling lover to release me and put me on cloud 9. Withdrawing his fingers, he began to kiss from my neck, down to my chest, quickly licking over the forgotten nipples. From there, he moved to my stomach, where he planted a series of butterfly kisses and sensual nips on my body. He paused for a moment to swirl his tongue around my belly-button ring, one of his favorite toys. I giggled with delight at the sudden ticklish sensation. He smirked in satisfaction before continuing his journey downward.
Once my beloved reached my heated core, his tongue slid out of his mouth and gently flicked over my clit. My eyes instantly shut tightly, trying desperately not to overflow until he finished having his fun. My lover always did enjoy teasing me this way. It was as if he were trying to prove his love with every touch, every motion he made. Of course, I was more than willing to wait in this state of pleasure until he felt he finished his “explanation.” He continued to lick at me, letting his tongue plunge inside of me every once in a while just so he could hear me scream. It was becoming harder and harder to concentrate on not overflowing until, finally, I came. His name passed my lips as he greedily lapped up my juices like a dog deprived of water. He gave a few more loving licks before I had regained enough strength to flip us over so I would be on top…Now…it’s my turn to have some fun!
NOTE: In my disclaimer, I stated that all the characters here and from my own imagination. Please note that I haven't said their names yet...it's not a mistake, I did it for a reason. This is just the first chappie! There's more to come! Review if you want more!!!! And remember, critisism is very welcome here, but threats aren't.
ANOTHER NOTE: Hey guys and gals! I just got on and read the reviews that I recieved. I wanted to say THANK YOU SO SO MUCH FOR THE CRITISISM. I didn't even notice it was all in one block...guess that's what I get for uploading it so late at night. Anyways, I've gone back and fixed it ((in case you couldn't tell)) so it should be easier to read now. Thanks again for telling me about it.
oh yeah, I don't want to post the second chappie quite yet. I want to get a few more reviews so that I know what I need to work on before I submit the next part. This way, I'll improve as an author and...well...you know the rest. If you have any friends who are on this site and you know they enjoy this type of stuff, then please reffer them to my story!!!! It would be greatly appreciated. See you soon!
~*TimsStrawberry*~
DISCLAIMER: This story is MINE and mine alone! All characters in here are created from my own imagination and should not be stolen from here! Thank you.
CHAPTER 1: Morning Bliss
The morning sun fluttered over the room, illuminating the small area. My eyes opened to the glorious sight of my first and only lover. His brown hair seemed to glow from the sun light. Those perfectly formed lips were parted ever so slightly, tempting me to taste them. One of his arms was wrapped around my waist in a sweet embrace. The warmth of his bare chest could be felt up against my own. His scent flooded my senses, clouding my mind. My finger tips instinctively ran up his strong arms slowly and softly.
I paused only a moment at his parted lips. With the tips of my first two fingers, I touched his reddened lips. His eyes opened slowly at my touch. A gentle smile graced his lips. I blushed slightly and tried to pull away. He tightened his grip on my waist and held me close to him, kissing me sweetly. I rested my hand on his chest, deeply enjoying his kiss. He took the opportunity to let his tongue slip out of his mouth and run across my bottom lip. My own two lips parted in welcome at such a delicate and intimate gesture. Once his tongue slipped into my mouth, our tongues began that age-old dance for dominance. A few moments passed before we pulled away for air. He looked deeply in my eyes and whispered the three words every girl desires to hear: “I love you.” His piercing blue eyes never failed to hypnotize me. I gave a sheepish smile and returned my own “I love you.”
Without a moment’s hesitation, we were in a heated kiss once again. Things only grew more passionate from there. One of his hands moved to my lower back, never breaking the kiss, as my arms snaked around his neck, pulling him closer to me. His thumb began to move in small circles on my low back, sending a wave of shivers up my spine. He pushed me back gently and lay on top, our naked bodies pressed against one another. Suddenly, his lips left mine and he began planting butterfly kisses from my cheeks down to my neck and shoulder. I whispered an almost inaudible moan as his heated tongue ran over my neck with great skill. Upon hearing my moan, his hand found its way to my chest and he began to massage one of my breasts in a very loving manner. Both my hands moved to his back, gently letting my nails scrape up and down. Not wanting to be unfair, he switched hands and began the same massage on my neglected breast.
I kissed his neck several times before sucking on it lightly, leaving a small pink spot when I pulled away. Wanting to hear me moan again, he moved his hand further down my body and began to rub on a sensitive area right above my most sensitive body part. I bit my lip hard enough to keep silent, wanting to see if he’d continue to try and hear me moan or not. Giving a knowing smirk, his hand lowered even more, but didn’t move. I whimpered and pressed my glistening, heated core against his hand. Sensing what I wanted, he plunged a finger deep inside of me, forcing me to call out his name in pure pleasure.
He smirked in satisfaction as I leaned my head back, gasping for air. I gripped onto his shoulder, greedily begging for more. His gruff moan could be heard before he inserted another finger. My grip on him tightened as I tried to stifle another moan. His movements slowed as he leaned close to my ear and whispered: “Moan for me! If you don’t or if you try to stop them, I’ll stop.” I whimpered and squirmed underneath him, silently asking for more. His movements stopped all together and he began to pull his fingers out of me slightly. Instinctively, I wrapped one leg around him and pulled him closer to me. He gave me a serious look saying “I’m serious. I’ll stop if you hold back.” I nodded dumbly as my only response. I was breathing heavily by now, my chest constantly rising and falling. It seemed to distract my lover for a few moments. It wasn’t until I whimpered that he regained focus.
Suddenly, he plunged his two fingers inside of me again. My back arched from the spontaneous movement. The sound of my moans escaladed as his fingers moved faster and harder inside of me. I knew what he wanted from me…he wanted me to scream for him…to beg for more. And without any hesitation at all, I gave him everything he wanted.
As his speed increased, so did the volume of my moans. The little feeling in the pit of my stomach began to grow dramatically. There was a knot forming in my stomach now. It became more complex and tangled with each passing second. The twisting and churning of the knot made me beg and plead to my darling lover to release me and put me on cloud 9. Withdrawing his fingers, he began to kiss from my neck, down to my chest, quickly licking over the forgotten nipples. From there, he moved to my stomach, where he planted a series of butterfly kisses and sensual nips on my body. He paused for a moment to swirl his tongue around my belly-button ring, one of his favorite toys. I giggled with delight at the sudden ticklish sensation. He smirked in satisfaction before continuing his journey downward.
Once my beloved reached my heated core, his tongue slid out of his mouth and gently flicked over my clit. My eyes instantly shut tightly, trying desperately not to overflow until he finished having his fun. My lover always did enjoy teasing me this way. It was as if he were trying to prove his love with every touch, every motion he made. Of course, I was more than willing to wait in this state of pleasure until he felt he finished his “explanation.” He continued to lick at me, letting his tongue plunge inside of me every once in a while just so he could hear me scream. It was becoming harder and harder to concentrate on not overflowing until, finally, I came. His name passed my lips as he greedily lapped up my juices like a dog deprived of water. He gave a few more loving licks before I had regained enough strength to flip us over so I would be on top…Now…it’s my turn to have some fun!
NOTE: In my disclaimer, I stated that all the characters here and from my own imagination. Please note that I haven't said their names yet...it's not a mistake, I did it for a reason. This is just the first chappie! There's more to come! Review if you want more!!!! And remember, critisism is very welcome here, but threats aren't.
ANOTHER NOTE: Hey guys and gals! I just got on and read the reviews that I recieved. I wanted to say THANK YOU SO SO MUCH FOR THE CRITISISM. I didn't even notice it was all in one block...guess that's what I get for uploading it so late at night. Anyways, I've gone back and fixed it ((in case you couldn't tell)) so it should be easier to read now. Thanks again for telling me about it.
oh yeah, I don't want to post the second chappie quite yet. I want to get a few more reviews so that I know what I need to work on before I submit the next part. This way, I'll improve as an author and...well...you know the rest. If you have any friends who are on this site and you know they enjoy this type of stuff, then please reffer them to my story!!!! It would be greatly appreciated. See you soon!
~*TimsStrawberry*~