Girl Interupted

quick note just wanted to say to everybody yes I am a new author and yes this is my first story, and i don't mind flams. this is just a pre-chapter so if you totally hated it think i'm a bad writer it's okay tell me. If you liked it and think i should continue on with the story the PLEASE say so! hope y'all enjoy!

She hugged her over-sized sweeter tighter to her body as she walked down the street; it was winter in east Texas and colder than ever for some reason. She wasn’t the typical girl you’d see walking down this sort of street, she didn’t have on booty shorts and tub top like must of the hookers. But she also didn’t have on tight leather pants and some sparkle Paris Hilton halter, like she was one her way to some club with the other seventeen and eighteen- year olds. No she wore a big over sized sweeter and just plan blue jeans, some one might even have mistaken her for a community college girl on her way back home if it wasn’t for the humongous black eye she was sporting. It was just more evidence that when you lived in bad part of town, nobody really gave a shit if you had a boyfriend who beat the hell out of you for the fun of it. Or at least that’s the way her ex-friends had described it the first time they a saw a hand print on her face, unfortunately for her it wasn’t the last time. Ex- friends as in she had stopped talking to them after her boyfriend had decided that he didn’t like the way that they where pulling the two of them apart. Code for he half strangled her to death then sort of apologized saying that he only did these things to her because he felt as if it was the only we that she’d still love him with her friends trying to manipulate her into hating him. Any normal girl would have said to herself at this point most likely even before this point something is defiantly wrong with this guy and I should get the hell out of here while I still have the chance.

But Gabriela Hernadez was no ordinary girl, she’d been raised not really knowing her father and having a very distint mother who worked pretty much twenty-four seven to support her three children. Gabriela had never really felt what it was like to be loved and it seemed as if Isaac, her boyfriend genuinely loved her from the bottom of his heart, so as far as she was consernded she’d take the goodwith bad even ifthat ment getting a black eye, or swollen lip, or even a brused rib or two. Gabriela just couldn’t find the courage in herself to leave the one man, the one person who had ever told her they loved her. Even though all of Gabriela’s friends had told her time and time again to stay away from him, to dump him, to at least tell some one who could really do something about it. But she wasn’t going to listen to them because in Gabriela’s mind it would all work out in the end Isaac would stop hitting her just quick as he had started and then they would spend the rest of their lives together loving each other with every thing they had. Looking back on this though one might think how very naïve of a seventeen year old girl to think such a thing but in terms of love Gabriela was just seven years old again when her father had officially cut her and her two younger siblings out of his life for good. The day Gabriela’s father stopped loving her was the first day that Gabriela lost all hope. Unfortunatly there where many more days to come in Gabriela’s life when she would loose all shred of hope, and every time she would ask herself the same questions: when is it finally going to be over? How many more times is my heart going to be able to break before it breaks forever? And the one question she asked herself every morning when she found out that yes she had actually woken up alive; Why me?

A/N ok thats the little prechapter for ya hope u enjoyed don't forget to r/r!!