Watch Me

Let me know what you think! My friend set this as a challenge for me. She wrote the very last 4 lines and told me to write the rest. I could put her stanza in wherever I felt that it worked, but it /had/ to be in it.
Please R&R! Thanks!
*Bites'n'Nibbles*


Watch me turn upon my heel,
See the way I look and feel.
Watch the way I turn my head,
See my face, the living dead.

Watch me as I turn away,
See the tears I keep at bay.
Watch my heart as it shatters,
See the way it does not matter.

Watch me walk away from here,
See me go from here to there.
Watch my face as I die,
See my soul soar to the sky.

Watch the night turn into day,
See the words I'll never say.
Watch the day turn into night,
See my face turn from the light.

Watch me as I never die,
Watch the way I speak and lie.
See my body as I sway,
See my hands, they way they play.

Watch me turn upon my heel,
Watch the way I look and fell.
See my hands above my head,
See my face, the living dead.