Disaster of Bantora

In the world of Bantora lived a beautiful angel named Neveah. She was an Angel of peace. For her God had named her to keep peace over the world of Bantora. She was the most beautiful angel in all of Bantora. For there are many angels in the world but it was Neveah that everyone talked about. Her beauty made others jealous. She had long wavy golden blonde hair. It went down to behind her knees. She had soft fair skin. Her eyes shown in a mixed color of brown and green that no one in the world had ever seen before. Her eyes were unique and caught a lot of attention. No one in the world had those color eyes. She was said to be the daughter of God but nobody knew for sure. She watched over Bantora and kept the world full of peace and beauty. Many different creatures lived in Bantora. It was a world full of beauty and magic.

For 98 thousand years Bantora had been evil free. But that changed one spring day. For there was world called Moetan. The lord of the planet was named Cinder. He was undoubtedly handsome. He had dark hair that curled slightly. He had pale skin that looked of alabaster with pale blue eyes that when angry looked like ice. He had a strong build and was the strongest in the world of Moetan. He stood at 5 foot 9 inches and was a unique being. For he transformed into a dragon when angry or being attacked. Cinder heard of the world Bantora and had heard of the angel of peace named Neveah. He decided then that he wanted that world as his and to get rid of Neveah. He wanted complete control of the world Bantora for he knew that there was great magic in the world and he wanted it to be all his.

Cinder called upon his closest friends to fly with him to Bantora. For he was the only one with the special power to turn into a dragon but his friends whom all had there own special powers would fly there on Cinders back. His friend Thor was known for being able to cause sever storms. Cinder decided it would be a good idea to bring him on his quest to Bantora because Thor could start a severe storm upon Bantora destroying its beauty and give them advantage in taking over the world. He called upon Kindle who could start fires and help Cinder spread fires all over Bantora. Tiger was his last friend he called upon to come on the quest with him. For Tiger had great fighting skills and could beat everyone in the world of Moetan except for Cinder.

Neveah could feel that trouble was coming. Her dear friend Olina came to her telling her she felt a bad presence coming towards the world of Bantora. Neveah told her friend to gather all the angels for an emergency meeting. At the meeting she told her fellow angels to get all the children and hide them. They would put a magical shield of protection around all of the children. She called upon her friend Freya to stay with all of the children.

As her duty Neveah was determined to not let the peace be ruined on the world of Bantora. When Cinder and his friends arrived they landed in front of Neveah. “What are you doing here? You have no business on Bantora.”
“That is where you are wrong. Bantora holds something I want. I will not stop until I get it.” Cinder answered.
“Whatever it is take it and leave. We do not want any trouble here.”

Cinder walked up to Neveah looking her in the eyes and told her “Don’t think you can get rid of us that easy beautiful. I will not leave until I do I what I set out to do.” and with that he walked away. He beckoned his friends to follow. He told them he would not start any trouble tonight but tomorrow.

Cinder left Neveah standing there oddly confused. She knew that man or dragon or whatever he was is the enemy. Yet she couldn’t get over how handsome he was. He took her breath away. She knew this was not a good thing and knew she had to get him out of her world as soon as possible. She knew he was going to be a lot of trouble.

Cinder had found a cave to stay in for the night. He was quite taken back by how beautiful Neveah was. He had heard that she was beautiful but he hadn’t expected her to be that beautiful. “It’s a shame I’m gonna have to kill such a beauty such as her.”
“Lord are you still going to go through with it? She said to just take what you want.” Said Kindle. Kindle liked to avoiding fighting as much as possible but was a good warrior when need be.
“Yes!! I came here to take over this world and to kill Neveah. That is just what I am going to do.”
Cinder wasn’t totally sure if that was what he had wanted to do though. That night he stayed up trying to make plans for the next days attack. Yet he couldn’t seem to get a pair of beautiful eyes out of his head. He decided then and there that he must kill her before something unacceptable happened.

Early that morning Cinder and his friends sent out to start some destruction when they realized something wasn’t right. As they started to leave the cave they saw about fifty angels in the sky. Seeing so many beautiful angels made Cinders friends a little uneasy. They didn’t like the thought of killing anyone as beautiful as the angels upfront of them. Cinder was so surprised by seeing Neveah again he lost his train of thought.

“I told you to take what you wanted and leave. We do not want any problems.” Said Neveah.
“It’s not that easy darling. For I want your world. I want to control all of it.”
“I was afraid that was what you wanted. Well that is one thing you can’t have and I was really hoping I wouldn’t have to do this but now I must.”

With that Neveah shot a ball of magic at Cinder throwing him off guard. With that he turned into a dragon and told his men to go after whoever they could for Neveah was his. Within Five seconds a massive thunder storm was started and fire was every where. Balls of magic were flying through air. Cinder knew his friends had no chance of winning let alone living. But it was sacrifice he was willing to take. For he wanted the world of Bantora more than anything.

Cinder and Neveah went to a separate location to fight their battle.
“It is so sad that I have to kill someone as beautiful as you……”
“Neveah and you don’t have to kill me. You are just greedy.”
“Ah my dear I crave power, power is what I want.”
“You have a world of your own why this one too?”

Cinder walked up to Neveah and cupped her chin in his hand.
“This world is full of magic. My world had nothing. It was bare. No inhabitants or anything. This world has beauty and lots of magic.”

Neveah was shocked by the feel of his skin against hers and stepped back.
“What will you do when you have this world. All what will happen is it will turn into another world like Moetan.”
“Not if I play my cards right. I’m a protector by instinct though you wouldn’t believe it. See my world had no one to protect. Everyone on that world deserves to die.”

Neveah looked into Cinder’s eyes and could tell he wasn’t lying. She was confused by the sudden sympathy and had wanted to help him.
“There are ways around this. You don’t have to destroy Bantora and kill me. We can rule together and protect together. Do you really want to kill me?”
“No, but I have no choice. I am going to finish what I set out to do.” and with out he quickly turned into a dragon and spit a ball of fire at her.

She barely dodged the ball of fire and put up shield in time to protect herself. She didn’t understand all of this. She wanted peace and he just wanted to protect his world and the creatures and beings in his world. Why couldn’t they work together? She didn’t want to have to kill him either. He was the most beautiful thing she ever laid eyes on. He was a handsome person and a gorgeous dragon. The dragons skin was a reddish orange color. He had massive wings that made him fly with grace. His eyes…. his eyes were that ice blue color. She had never seen eyes that shade blue before. He had the same eyes in his human for as his dragon form. She didn’t understand the feeling she had in her heart. She has been alive for 98 thousand years and not once had she felt this before. Nor did she think it was right.

“You don’t want to kill me Cinder!”
“No I don’t but it is the only choice I have!”

He then spit more fire at her which her shield blocked. He knew he didn’t want to kill her. She was to beautiful. She was so loving yet he felt like he had to get rid of her. He quickly flew away to see how it was going with his friends. Fearing what he knew he would see. Three against fifty wasn’t a fair fight. He quickly turned around when he saw his fears had been right. He saw his three closest friends laying in heaps on the ground un moving. The fifty other angels gone. He flew back to where he was battling Neveah and turned back into a human. He knew what was happening wasn’t right. He was a protector not a fighter. He just let three of his best friends be killed so he could just be greedy. So he could become protector of world that would have let him be. All he had to do was ask and say he was a protector and would like to help protect this world. But no that would have been to easy. He fell to his knees and realized he lost the fight. He lost the fight that never should have happened.

Neveah was confused and didn’t know what was going on. She thought she saw a tear sliding down Cinder cheek but wasn’t sure. She slowly walked up to him and kneeled next him.

“You are right,” he said “I am greedy. I am a protector yet I just let my three best friends be killed. Also I just tried to kill the most beautiful thing ever created. Instead of trying to kill you I should be protecting you. Protecting your beauty, protecting your home.”

“You can Cinder. You can protect Bantora. You can protect all of us and all of the creatures….the whole world. You can become our protector.” She slowly lifted her hand to wipe the tear away from his cheek.

As she touched him he knew he wanted more than to protect her world. He wanted to protect her. He knew the moment he laid eyes on her he was in love. He never thought it possible but here he was in the beautiful world of Bantora with the most beautiful angel sitting next to him, lightly wiping tears from is cheek. He knew she would never love him though. Not after trying to kill her and destroy her world. He would take what she had to offer though. He would protect Bantora and Neveah especially. He never wanted to see something like this happen to her again.

She looked at him and knew he was thinking very seriously over something. She herself had no idea why she was trusting him enough to protect her world. He had just tried to destroy it and kill her. She had a feeling it was to do with the strange feeling in her heart. There seemed to be ache whenever she looked at him. She then realized her hand was still on his cheek and removed it quickly feeling slightly embarrassed. Yet she couldn’t help but wonder what it would be like to be kissed by him or to be held in his strong arms. He looked up at her as if he had decided something. She quickly looked down removing her eyes from his soft gaze. She realized how just a few minutes ago his eyes looked cruel and like ice and now they looked soft and loving. He cupped her chin his hand and made her look at him.

“I want to be Bantora’s protector but most of all I want to be your protector. I want to protect you from everything bad. I don’t want you to have to go through what just happened ever again. You are too beautiful and to sweet to ever have to deal with that kind of evil ever again.”

She didn’t know what to say. She felt totally speechless. Her heart was beating very hard because of what he had said. She was about to say thank you when he raised her face to his and very softly kissed her.

“You are beautiful Neveah.”

Neveah was surprised by everything but now knew what that strange feeling was. She loved him.

“I want you to protect me.” she whispered and Cinder had started kissing her again. This time a little more deeper. When they were done kissing he looked in her eyes and whispered “you are the most magnificent thing I have ever seen.”


“I…I think we should find the other angels and let them know what is going to happen.”
“Ok” said Cinder.

Neveah set gathered all of the angels and told them that Cinder would become the new protector of Bantora. All of the angels were confused. They knew they were just fighting Cinder and his friends and now they were told that Cinder was to be their new protector. They had no idea what was going on. They trusted Neveah so the figured her judgment was for the best.

Cinder decided to take his best friends back to Moetan to their families for a decent burial. The families were not happy at all and revolted against Cinder as Lord. Cinder placed his friend Tollin as the new Lord and left Moetan forever.

When he returned to Bantora he flew right to Neveah’s home. He was depressed and angry. When she answered the door she was a little nervous when she saw his mood but welcomed him in. He sat down in a chair and took the mug of coffee she gave him.

“What is bothering you Cinder?” she asked.
“The families at Moetan are very displeased with me. I am a protector and I had three of my closest friends killed for no reason. I am a terrible person and a terrible friend.”
“No you aren’t. At the time you thought you were doing what you thought was right but you realized your mistake and you are trying to fix what you did.”
“I am never aloud back to Moetan.”
Yes but you told me it wasn’t good place to begin with. That is probably why you acted the way you did. You said the few people there deserve to be dead.”
“True, but I just don’t like the thought of being hated.”

She slowly went over to him and kissed him lightly on the cheek. “You can start fresh here. Start a new life. Don’t dwell on the past. It is over with now. There is nothing you can do about it now.”
“I know. Neveah you are an amazing person. I have never met anyone as loving and forgiving as you.”

Neveah blushed at the compliments. She then decided to get up and busy herself around the already clean home. She needed to think. She figured she would set the spare room for Cinder to sleep in. She didn’t mind if he stayed with her. She actually loved the idea of him staying with her. She knew that Bantora was a safe place to live but she felt safer with him there for some reason. She had this bad feeling about Moetan. They may try to take out their revenge on Bantora for Cinder’s mistake. She also knew that now Cinder was here she didn’t want him to leave. Not ever.