What Comes Around, Goes Around
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Category:
Drama › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
1
Views:
640
Reviews:
0
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
What Comes Around, Goes Around
A/N and Disclaimer: I thought up the idea myself… during a day of contemplation… Hence, if there is some sort of story/plot similar to mine, I had not read/watched/seen/heard of one… Yet, I give them the credit for such idea. Otherwise, it will be mine. =D The characters should be rather original enough as well. Off to another point, my grammar may suck and make no sense whatsoever, therefore, if you want to help me improve my story with beta-reading, feel free to volunteer.
Another note: For the most part, I will be writing in third person, but I may decide to try first person every now and then… So, to avoid confusion I will try to let you know when perspectives change. Yet, more importantly, I would like to say that my story takes place in a Japanese setting/city. Therefore, High schoolers are about 16 years old and start HS in 10th grade. Additionally, several of them have Japanese names. Furthermore, there may be some “sexual” innuendos and content… Yes, I know it is a bit weird for 16-yr olds to be having sex… I’m quite aware of that… But, the story is just a story…If any of you readers are angry with this, I can potentially change the story line a bit… Just comment it in a review or email me (my email is in my profile).
Summary: A circle of friends from elementary school meet once again during high school. They reunite and yet, new feelings arise from each of them because of puberty and well, it is springtime! Love grows in the air… And in the meanwhile, other mixed emotions uproot from within the hearts of six classmates.
RATING WARNING: Lemons come later since it is dessert and while… the main course is rather plain, but deal! I’m going to warn you folks to beware of the profanity and violence that I may illustrate along the way… Just be warned. Ah yes, there will be some gay-relationship ideas within the story, too. So, don’t be weirded out since I AM warning you!
Yet, for the first three real chapters, nothing bad/improper except profanity will be abound. Hence, it is a PG-13 rating.
~~
PROLOGUE
Cold. Dark. Dusty. She awoke to an alarm.
She hadn’t cleaned her room since three years before. She hadn’t bothered to clean it since she had returned from like a week ago. What could she say? Contrary to popular belief, she was a slob. Even so, she always kept good hygiene. She was often seen as a rough girl, but, Naomi kept up a rather reputable life.
Naomi was an athlete of many sports. It was as if she was a master of every sport that her school could offer. She ran with high speeds. She shot multiple baskets. She pitched numerous strikes. She swam without rest for miles on end. And so, her athletic talents were amazing for her age. Yet, that was in her elementary school and the beginning of middle school, her past.
Now, all she could do was act rough and tough… She lost all her talents.
After all her successes seemed to reach no end, her family passed away through a car crash. She was left alone as a twelve-year old. Both her parents and her two brothers lost their lives in the crash. Naomi then was sent to live with her surviving grandparent. However, they were old. And, as if life couldn’t get worse, it just did. After a couple weeks from her fourteenth birthday, Naomi lost her only grandmother. All her other relatives were far in Europe and could not give any support but some money. Hence, Naomi had decided to just to live alone. Neighbors had helped to make sure she was okay very often. She then had decided to live off by herself as soon as she had dug her way through entering a fine high school.
She then, moved out of her old grandmother’s house and decided to go back to her apartment. The tenant there had kindly kept the place intact by a pleading request of Naomi. And so, she had returned to her old apartment after finding a steady job nearby. Yet, that was just one week ago.
Yet, Naomi had grown so exhausted she could barely function properly. She worked for fourteen hours for Saturday and Sunday. She really needed a rather healthy salary so, she just worked hard for work.
And so, it was just so hard to wake up that morning, for some reason. Naomi slept like a log yet, today was just different. She rose from her dusty bed. Soon after, she walked down the hall for her daily morning shower. She was feeling extra chilly today. Even so, she tried her best to wake up.
After her shower, she changed up for school. It was her first day of school. High School. She had, when she was younger, always dreamed of having a wonderful time at high school… But, today just didn’t feel right to her.
Before she could leave her front lawn, however, she fell over. She could not get up by her self, even.
She panted and waited. ‘Maybe if I rest a bit, I will feel better,’ she thought to herself.
She just lay there waiting. She propped her herself so that she lay on her back. And only then, she had been “awakened.”
“AHH!!!” she yelled. A young man around her age had stepped over her to watch what she was doing. “Who are you?! What do you want?”
“Woah, girl,” he said, “calm down. I just saw you collapse and then…”
“Then, what!?” she snapped, beginning to feel pissed and quite uncomfortable.
“THEN… I decided to come check up if you were okay, okay?!” the boy retorted indignantly. “Don’t go collapsing over like that if you don’t want others to worry!”
“Well, it isn’t my fault!” Naomi yelled back with a great urge to punch the guy. Yet, before she could react fast enough, he had put his hand on her forehead.
“Ahah…” he hummed. “You have a fever.”
“No shit Sherlock,” Naomi said even though she, herself, hadn’t realized it until then. Again, she was about to try and jab at him, but before she could even do that, he had already picked her up.
“AH!!!” she said, waving her hands around, “what are you doing?!?!?”
“I’m taking you into your house, silly,” he stated. “You’re too sick to go to school.”
“Bah! Leave me alone, I need to go to school, you fool!”
“Not if I’m around, you’re not.”
“GAH!!! Why do you have to be so annoying!?!?! Stop messing with me and my own business!”
“No can do,” the boy said stubbornly. “You’re sick, and you need to be cared for, immediately.”
“NO!” Naomi yelled. “Just go away!”
He simply then ignored her thrashing and yelling about as he had walked into the house and looked for a bed or couch of some sort.
“Your house is rather messy,” he commented while walking around.
“Shut up, that’s none of your business.”
“I know,” he said. “Just saying the truth.”
He had soon enough found her bed and laid her down in it. He then tenderly tucked her in. After, he checked her forehead. “Hm… I would have thought all that fighting would have brought your fever up, but, it seems to actually be going down.”
“Hah, I’m stronger than you think,” Naomi declared. “A measly old cold ain’t stopping me from going to school either.”
She started to get up, but the boy pushed her down.
“You stay there, you hear me?” he said with a menacing and frightening voice.
“Yes, sir…”
And then as if his mood just flipped back around, he smiled and said, “Good.”
He stood. “I’m going to phone the school and call you in sick today, okay? And, I will skip school to take care of you.”
“EH!?!?” Naomi said with much exclamation. “I don’t need babysitting! Especially from you!”
“Nah, too bad. You’re just going to have to deal with me.”
Naomi’s face just fell apart at that moment as if all hope was lost.
“Don’t worry, I don’t bite,” the boy said with a grin.
“WAIT! Wait just a second,” Naomi said. “How do you know what school I go to?”
The guy just stood there and laughed. “Haha… You never saw that I have the same uniform colors and type?”
Naomi choked in more shock and despair. Her life was going to turn bad, again… She dreaded the thought.
“Ah yes,” he said. “My name is Tezuka. Minamoto Tezuka.”
“Wait, who?”
~~
To be continued.
--
LALALA! Lovely cliffhanger, huh? Bah, for all I know, you readers out there may feel like “this fiction SUCKED.” Well, I feel no hate even if you say that… Because, it probably did. But, I’m just testing out my skills with writing… It’s been so long since I’ve last posted a story, after all.
Additionally, I know this chapter is extraordinarily short, hence, I will write more in the future. And yes, this is going to be ONE long story… (about 30 chapters (more or less?), I think.) ^-^
Yet, I do update slowly… But, if you’re anxious to know what happens… TOO BAD!
;P
Yes… DO click the review link. I’ll appreciate it. =D
Another note: For the most part, I will be writing in third person, but I may decide to try first person every now and then… So, to avoid confusion I will try to let you know when perspectives change. Yet, more importantly, I would like to say that my story takes place in a Japanese setting/city. Therefore, High schoolers are about 16 years old and start HS in 10th grade. Additionally, several of them have Japanese names. Furthermore, there may be some “sexual” innuendos and content… Yes, I know it is a bit weird for 16-yr olds to be having sex… I’m quite aware of that… But, the story is just a story…If any of you readers are angry with this, I can potentially change the story line a bit… Just comment it in a review or email me (my email is in my profile).
Summary: A circle of friends from elementary school meet once again during high school. They reunite and yet, new feelings arise from each of them because of puberty and well, it is springtime! Love grows in the air… And in the meanwhile, other mixed emotions uproot from within the hearts of six classmates.
RATING WARNING: Lemons come later since it is dessert and while… the main course is rather plain, but deal! I’m going to warn you folks to beware of the profanity and violence that I may illustrate along the way… Just be warned. Ah yes, there will be some gay-relationship ideas within the story, too. So, don’t be weirded out since I AM warning you!
Yet, for the first three real chapters, nothing bad/improper except profanity will be abound. Hence, it is a PG-13 rating.
~~
PROLOGUE
Cold. Dark. Dusty. She awoke to an alarm.
She hadn’t cleaned her room since three years before. She hadn’t bothered to clean it since she had returned from like a week ago. What could she say? Contrary to popular belief, she was a slob. Even so, she always kept good hygiene. She was often seen as a rough girl, but, Naomi kept up a rather reputable life.
Naomi was an athlete of many sports. It was as if she was a master of every sport that her school could offer. She ran with high speeds. She shot multiple baskets. She pitched numerous strikes. She swam without rest for miles on end. And so, her athletic talents were amazing for her age. Yet, that was in her elementary school and the beginning of middle school, her past.
Now, all she could do was act rough and tough… She lost all her talents.
After all her successes seemed to reach no end, her family passed away through a car crash. She was left alone as a twelve-year old. Both her parents and her two brothers lost their lives in the crash. Naomi then was sent to live with her surviving grandparent. However, they were old. And, as if life couldn’t get worse, it just did. After a couple weeks from her fourteenth birthday, Naomi lost her only grandmother. All her other relatives were far in Europe and could not give any support but some money. Hence, Naomi had decided to just to live alone. Neighbors had helped to make sure she was okay very often. She then had decided to live off by herself as soon as she had dug her way through entering a fine high school.
She then, moved out of her old grandmother’s house and decided to go back to her apartment. The tenant there had kindly kept the place intact by a pleading request of Naomi. And so, she had returned to her old apartment after finding a steady job nearby. Yet, that was just one week ago.
Yet, Naomi had grown so exhausted she could barely function properly. She worked for fourteen hours for Saturday and Sunday. She really needed a rather healthy salary so, she just worked hard for work.
And so, it was just so hard to wake up that morning, for some reason. Naomi slept like a log yet, today was just different. She rose from her dusty bed. Soon after, she walked down the hall for her daily morning shower. She was feeling extra chilly today. Even so, she tried her best to wake up.
After her shower, she changed up for school. It was her first day of school. High School. She had, when she was younger, always dreamed of having a wonderful time at high school… But, today just didn’t feel right to her.
Before she could leave her front lawn, however, she fell over. She could not get up by her self, even.
She panted and waited. ‘Maybe if I rest a bit, I will feel better,’ she thought to herself.
She just lay there waiting. She propped her herself so that she lay on her back. And only then, she had been “awakened.”
“AHH!!!” she yelled. A young man around her age had stepped over her to watch what she was doing. “Who are you?! What do you want?”
“Woah, girl,” he said, “calm down. I just saw you collapse and then…”
“Then, what!?” she snapped, beginning to feel pissed and quite uncomfortable.
“THEN… I decided to come check up if you were okay, okay?!” the boy retorted indignantly. “Don’t go collapsing over like that if you don’t want others to worry!”
“Well, it isn’t my fault!” Naomi yelled back with a great urge to punch the guy. Yet, before she could react fast enough, he had put his hand on her forehead.
“Ahah…” he hummed. “You have a fever.”
“No shit Sherlock,” Naomi said even though she, herself, hadn’t realized it until then. Again, she was about to try and jab at him, but before she could even do that, he had already picked her up.
“AH!!!” she said, waving her hands around, “what are you doing?!?!?”
“I’m taking you into your house, silly,” he stated. “You’re too sick to go to school.”
“Bah! Leave me alone, I need to go to school, you fool!”
“Not if I’m around, you’re not.”
“GAH!!! Why do you have to be so annoying!?!?! Stop messing with me and my own business!”
“No can do,” the boy said stubbornly. “You’re sick, and you need to be cared for, immediately.”
“NO!” Naomi yelled. “Just go away!”
He simply then ignored her thrashing and yelling about as he had walked into the house and looked for a bed or couch of some sort.
“Your house is rather messy,” he commented while walking around.
“Shut up, that’s none of your business.”
“I know,” he said. “Just saying the truth.”
He had soon enough found her bed and laid her down in it. He then tenderly tucked her in. After, he checked her forehead. “Hm… I would have thought all that fighting would have brought your fever up, but, it seems to actually be going down.”
“Hah, I’m stronger than you think,” Naomi declared. “A measly old cold ain’t stopping me from going to school either.”
She started to get up, but the boy pushed her down.
“You stay there, you hear me?” he said with a menacing and frightening voice.
“Yes, sir…”
And then as if his mood just flipped back around, he smiled and said, “Good.”
He stood. “I’m going to phone the school and call you in sick today, okay? And, I will skip school to take care of you.”
“EH!?!?” Naomi said with much exclamation. “I don’t need babysitting! Especially from you!”
“Nah, too bad. You’re just going to have to deal with me.”
Naomi’s face just fell apart at that moment as if all hope was lost.
“Don’t worry, I don’t bite,” the boy said with a grin.
“WAIT! Wait just a second,” Naomi said. “How do you know what school I go to?”
The guy just stood there and laughed. “Haha… You never saw that I have the same uniform colors and type?”
Naomi choked in more shock and despair. Her life was going to turn bad, again… She dreaded the thought.
“Ah yes,” he said. “My name is Tezuka. Minamoto Tezuka.”
“Wait, who?”
~~
To be continued.
--
LALALA! Lovely cliffhanger, huh? Bah, for all I know, you readers out there may feel like “this fiction SUCKED.” Well, I feel no hate even if you say that… Because, it probably did. But, I’m just testing out my skills with writing… It’s been so long since I’ve last posted a story, after all.
Additionally, I know this chapter is extraordinarily short, hence, I will write more in the future. And yes, this is going to be ONE long story… (about 30 chapters (more or less?), I think.) ^-^
Yet, I do update slowly… But, if you’re anxious to know what happens… TOO BAD!
;P
Yes… DO click the review link. I’ll appreciate it. =D