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A Visit From Hell

By: leeman
folder Horror/Thriller › General
Rating: Adult +
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A Visit From Hell

TUMP!TUMP!TUMP! The loud banging at the front door didn’t stopped. Its just kept getting louder and louder. My heart kept thumping and beating faster than usual. Jim’s here. Jim’s out to get me. What am I to become? A murder victim? Went to hell to accompany to Tim. I’m too young to die. There are many things that I want to do in my life. There’s no escape from him. He came back from the dead to get me, as if I was my fault that he was killed in that accident. I t wasn’t my fault, it was all Tim’s fault.Damn him

I did try to reason with him when he came searching for Tim, thinking I was Tim. I said I wasn’t Tim and Tim is gone, somewhere.im not sure where he is. He shouted at me saying I lied and said Tim doesn’t have a twin brother. He said I have to pay for what happened to him. I said I didn’t know anything and im not Tim. He said okay proved it, I’ll be back tomorrow. Well I was save then, but getting Tim back wasn’t easy. He’s dead. I killed him. Just my luck.

After the encounter of the mad man who claimed Tim or me killed him. I have to get out from my house fast. He said he will be back tomorrow for time. Since Tim died how could I explained to him then. I couldn’t just say Tim’s not here. I killed him 2 days ago. I don’t think he would believe me. Since after I showed him the picture of Tim and me. He spit at my face which is totally disgusting and said technology and ripped of the picture. I asked him to check at the photo shop. He said to me to fuck off.

So after the encounter with the ghost, I started thinking of a place to hide that is safe. I got a cabin located on top of a hill nearby. I used to go there to relax or when im having unsolved problems. Nobody‘ve been there except me. So it’s was probably the safest place to hide. I packed all my important things. And off I went. It’s been dark all the way up the hill. I have to depend on my front lights.

As I stood in front of the cabin for a while. Then I went in. it was pitch black, no electricity here .so started looking for candles at the same place I always kept it. As I soon it lit all the candles and put it in the place. I sat on the sofa and closed my eyes. And then I dozed off.

I was awakened by a familiar voice. I opened my eyes and there he was my dead brother Tim sitting in a chair in front of me. Hello brother, he said. Hi, how was hell? I asked him.hmm it’s hot there, no entertainments down there. That pretty sucks. Other than that no complains.hey how did u know I went to hell not heaven? He asked.

Anyway, I was sent here to help u on something. Got any problems I can help with? Tim asked. So I said u killed someone recently did u.yeah, it was your problem and now it becomes mine.really? Oh im sorry.yeah, it was Jim the whack loser who works in the same office as me, if I didn’t killed him someone else will. He’s been so annoying, snobbish too. In short, a bastard. I didn’t expect him to die, just few broken bone, he said casually. Well, u cut his brake wire, what do u expect? Few broken bones? His car fell off acliff trying to avoid a truck when driving downhill, I said raising my voice.ouch! Oh that must really hurt, he said laughing.

U know bro, on the second hand, u should have used the silencer to kill me not a regular pistol. That would be like way cool, not messy, I said.hey u said it yourself killed me with a pistol. I want to die like a cowboy wearing the cowboy clothes and all.yeah.yeah, blamed it all on me, Tim said.

U gave me a lot of trouble u know, that guy u killed came back tried to kill me yesterday think I was u, I said.yeah? Wow cool! Okay don’t worry about it, I’ will take care of it, he said smugly. You better or else! I warned him.yeah else what, you going to kill me again,haha,tim said. Very funny, do something about it okay, sure I killed lots of people now and then but how to kill someone who’s already dead, I said. Peace of cake, no worries, hey I’ll be back, Tim said. And he just disappeared.

Hmm. u’ve must be wondering why I killed my own brother and why I don’t freak out when I saw him just now.killing people has been a part of my life now.yeah that right, im an assassin.the money is good and I was killing the bad guys anyway for the government.i know its still a sin.for the killing my brother part, it was his wish.he had suffered long time from a very strange disease since he was 13.

He received regular treatments and he was getting better until recently it got worse and there’s nothing the doctors can do about it.he was suffering very badly.one day when I came to visit him at the hospital,he asked me to end his suffering.in short words,kill him.it came as a shock to me,how could I killed my own brother,for god sake.he begs everytime I see him at the hospital.i don’t want him to suffer to long.so finally I gave in.i sneaked him from the hospital and bring him to my cabin.he was shocked that I have a cabin.i didn’t tell anyone about it.but since I could killed him,I asked a favor from my partner to do it for me then.tim asked me to wear him a cowboy suits with hat and boots.he wants to be shoot with a gun saying that he wanted to die like a cowboy a.though im not the one who shot it,but it’s me who asked a favor from my partner to killed him.

Im not heartless but that’s my job. Yes, I do feel remorse after killing someone. All my from the job all went to Tim’s treatment. He’s the only family I still have before he died I mean. My parents were killed in a car accident when I was 15.so its up for me to take care of him. And for seeing the dead people, my grandma was a gypsy .a quite powerful one. shshe told me stories and things that are truly amazing. Seems like she inherited the gift on seeing the dead and seems that the gift was passed to me when I was born .she passed away when I was 12.which is not considered as gift at the moment. Only Tim knows about the gift. He’s got a gift too. He can dissapate.i mean going to one place in a single time. First he was here, next thing u know, he was in some state.

Then a loud bang on he front door brings me back to present. The person shouted for me to opened the door, he said he knows im in here.oh great, he knows im hiding here. Where’s Tim when I need him. I could hear he’s using an exe to get trough the door. I hide in my closet. Bathing is sweats. Maybe I could do some spells on him, it could work. I could hear footsteps coming closer to the closet. Closer and closer until its stopped just in front of the cabinet. As he opened the door, I recited a spell that my grandma taught me. It works. He stumbled backward and fell to the floor. Well the spell worked but not what it really supposed to do. He supposed to be gone, disapperared, missing.i don’t know.

He tried to get up, I stepped out from the closet. And do recited once more. Its not working but it did made him stumbled and fall again. I then ran to the door. Just as im about to step out from the house, I could felt something gripped my ankle.Hard. The dead guy was gripping my ankle hard and crushing it and made me stumbled to the wooden floor. My nose hit the floor and it was very painful same as the pain in my ankle.

I heard a familiar voice saying to hey, sorry bro.i was taking too much time down there.oh my god, and he’s here? Okay, im coming. He ran to that Jim guy and greeted him hello. Jim let go off my ankles and looked at Tim hard.you! You are Tim right? He got up and launched him self at Tim, his fingers were on Tim’s throat.why did u killed? What did I ever do to u? he screamed.

Oh what you didn’t know, everyone in the office hated you, bossy jerk. I know you stole Simon’s idea and made it yours. I know who deleted all my important files in the computer. It was you isn’t it, Tim said angrily.u didn’t have to kill me because of that, u could like talk to me, said Jim sounding sad.oh well, we did, remember? u Said back off to us, since we don’t have any proof against you. I have to stopped you before u sold the companie’s profiles to our rivals.u think I don’t know about that?

Jim’s fingers were started to loosen up, and to my surprised he knelt to the floor.Crying.yeah he was crying.well no used crying over a spilled milk.right?im sorry, im sorry.he said .Saying it was the money. So what now? Jim said. You have to follow me back to hell, yeah I know no entertainments there but its seems you will fit in just right, said Tim. Then he helped Jim to get up.

Hello, forgetting me Tim? I know u are all excited going back to hell and all. But could u please help me. I think my ankle is broken, I said. Said Tim, oops sorry about that bro, here let me heal u first. He healed me, it felt better than before it was broken. Jim apologized to me. I do want to break his hand or something but when he apologized. Well let bygones be bygones.

Bye bro, catch ya later, said Tim winking at me. He and Jim disappeared to hell after that. After I closed the front door, I sat on the sofa looking at the front door. It’s got a big hole that was made by the axe. Tomorrow then. And I went to sleep
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Early morning, I woke up feeling refreshed. I decided I want too retired from my job. I’ve been thinking about it while I was doing my job two days after the day I after I buried my brother beside the cabin.

The money I got from it would support me for about 10 years. Maybe after 10 years I would applied for boring desk job. For now, I just want to take a rest from the rest of the world.

It’s been 3 months now I’ve been staying at the cabin. Doing some groceries at a town nearby every week.Either went fishing or hunting. Sometimes Tim visits me . Tim said he misses me and I said I missed him too.
I feel happier now oh well content.