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No longer a holly girl
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Category:
Poetry › Free Verse
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
1
Views:
630
Reviews:
1
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
This is a work of poetry. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
No longer a holly girl
Ok as you my already know, English is not my first langue so there are going to be big spelling and grammar errors. Well.. and they aren't exactly rhyms but well I liked how it sound. If you really hate this show me the error and I will correct it. XD
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“No longer a holly girl”
Bird up high
Moving like in a dance
With the song the earth sing
With instruments that cant be seen
I ones could hear this song
But know I have forgot
Because I’m no longer a holly girl
Because I’m no longer someone who care
Long before you were born
But long after the earth was form
I was a angel, angel of wind
Sending cold air who ever was in need
I had great delight seeing children play
And greater fun hearing the jokes they made
They weren’t the only ones who made me happy
Also cute couples saying sweet nothing
At the beginning all was happiness and peace
No one fight no one got sick
But then something strange happen
The world was cover in darkness
In a flash dark creatures appear
With purple faces, red eyes and no ears
They were three four or more
Humans couldn’t see them, even if time stopped
With great speed they touch every human
Didn’t matter men or woman
Everyone touch got into a deep spell
Where they became sick, jealous and unfair
As fast as they appear the disappear
Living the human in a world of fear
Loosing the trust of everyone
Family friends even the neibor ones
How can human be so week
How can they fall so deep
The spell wasn’t that strong
This fills so wrong
Then I came to a conclusion, the truth
Humans where week and cruel
I myself decided
That all humans must be banish
I try to change my mind, yes I do
But I could't, there was no use
With all my powers I create a tornado
Killing all humans with no exception
When my superiors took note of this
They punish me, I was no longer a angel of wind
My new class was angel of dead
Serious, plain and merciless
Although my story is halfway
I will continuo another day
Because I’m no longer a holly girl
Because I’m no longer someone who cares
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And that’s my poem, you see I became bore and well… u know the rest of the story @.@. OOO and the creatures of purple faces red eyes and no ears where the ones of Pandora’s box, you know the Greek myth.
Flames are welcome, how can I improve if people don't tell me what I need to improve?? :P
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“No longer a holly girl”
Bird up high
Moving like in a dance
With the song the earth sing
With instruments that cant be seen
I ones could hear this song
But know I have forgot
Because I’m no longer a holly girl
Because I’m no longer someone who care
Long before you were born
But long after the earth was form
I was a angel, angel of wind
Sending cold air who ever was in need
I had great delight seeing children play
And greater fun hearing the jokes they made
They weren’t the only ones who made me happy
Also cute couples saying sweet nothing
At the beginning all was happiness and peace
No one fight no one got sick
But then something strange happen
The world was cover in darkness
In a flash dark creatures appear
With purple faces, red eyes and no ears
They were three four or more
Humans couldn’t see them, even if time stopped
With great speed they touch every human
Didn’t matter men or woman
Everyone touch got into a deep spell
Where they became sick, jealous and unfair
As fast as they appear the disappear
Living the human in a world of fear
Loosing the trust of everyone
Family friends even the neibor ones
How can human be so week
How can they fall so deep
The spell wasn’t that strong
This fills so wrong
Then I came to a conclusion, the truth
Humans where week and cruel
I myself decided
That all humans must be banish
I try to change my mind, yes I do
But I could't, there was no use
With all my powers I create a tornado
Killing all humans with no exception
When my superiors took note of this
They punish me, I was no longer a angel of wind
My new class was angel of dead
Serious, plain and merciless
Although my story is halfway
I will continuo another day
Because I’m no longer a holly girl
Because I’m no longer someone who cares
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
And that’s my poem, you see I became bore and well… u know the rest of the story @.@. OOO and the creatures of purple faces red eyes and no ears where the ones of Pandora’s box, you know the Greek myth.
Flames are welcome, how can I improve if people don't tell me what I need to improve?? :P