You Promised
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Category:
Drama › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
1
Views:
857
Reviews:
0
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
You Promised
Title: You promised
Rating: R (sorry people only implied sex)
Pairing: Adrian Cole, and Evan Miller
Disclaimer: haha don\'t have to do it. My characters my plot you steal I sue muahaha (jk)
Note: Evan\'s 17, Adrian\'s 18. This was written for my Writer\'s craft class. She said that if anyone else in the class besides her would have edited it..they would have freaked. So I natually thought well it much be good then..haha anyway enjoy..
Please R&R. Creative critism is definatly a good thing do to the fact I submitted this.
By the way you will notice that it has some asspects similar to my other stroy Looking through the window...that\'s because that story insipired this one!
Enough of my notes now..enjoy the fic...please R&R!!! *gives puppy eyes*
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Evan, waiting for his boyfriend to return, looked up through the window at the full moon, beautiful and divine in all its glory. The promise had been make, the anxious feeling digging deeper and deeper in the fragility of his nervous heart.
‘He promised he’d be home soon. Said he was going to get his hair cut, hair cut my ass! He’s out there screwing that friend of his that doesn’t like me.’
Evan watched the clouds cover the moon for a dark time, as if acknowledging what he said.
‘Adrian promised that he would be home.’ Evan closed his eyes when he heard the chime. ‘One o’clock. He told me he’d be back by nine. I know he would do this to me. He told me he’d come back. He knows it’s our anniversary. Goddamn it Adrian! Why did you have to do this to me?’ Tears stained the purity of his silky ivory skin. ‘You know how hard it was to me to admit…everything! It took so long to accept your offer and admit that I’m gay and now…’
Evan wiped the tears away then re-crossed his arms by the window. The clouds weren’t gone but now some of the moon showed.
‘No, I have to have faith in him. It’s not like he’d do that to me. No he had better be on his damn deathbed with the people about to call me in:
Three
Two
ONE!!’
“RING!” The phone rang and Evan jumped three feet in the air. ‘No I didn’t mean it.’ He reached to answer it.
“Hello?” Evan answered shakily.
“Evan Miller?” Evan nodded, then realizing he was on the phone responded very softly, ‘yes.’
“This is the hospital calling, we were given your number by a Mister Adrian Cole for emergencies. Are you any relation to Mister Cole?”
Evan gulped, ‘I didn’t mean it…I didn’t mean it.’ “Yes he’s my…” Evan stopped, the bridge of his sanity ruptured. He never wanted his boyfriend to actually be on his deathbed.
“Mister Miller? Are you still there Mister Miller?”
“…boyfriend. Adrian is my boyfriend. Is he alright?” Shaking, he attempted to compose himself, not doing a very good job.
“I think you should come in. Mister Cole is-…wants your help. The Georgian Memorial’s emergency room. Do you have transportation? If you do not we will send a police car to retrieve you.”
Dropping to the floor, Evan thought about what he said to the moon. Was it actually granting his wish? Was it really making sure Adrian was on his deathbed to comfort Evan? No, not comfort, a harsh treatment in return for the harsh words he spoke. He looked at the villain watching its face of shadows turn and laugh at him, claiming the deadliest of laws: The Threefold Law. One Evan had lived his life by for so long. He’d admit it, he loved Adrian and this was not what he wanted. As he cursed the moon, the secretary’s voice knocked hard on the door of his wretched thoughts.
“Mister Miller? Do you have Transportation?” He knew that if he stepped into his car he’d get into an accident by either crying over whatever is happening, or running over everything in his path.
“No I don’t. Please I need…”
“It’s alright Mister Miller, a police car will arrive shortly. I already have the address so you do not need to worry.”
“Thank-“ He was cut off by the hanging up of the other phone. Hating everything, he looked around the small apartment, the one Adrian and he worked so hard to get. He went to their bedroom finding their “special” drawer. It contained everything from their relationship; movie tickets, receipts, paper bags indicating restaurants and dates, journal entries from before they started dating, love letters, a long list of numbers that anyone other then Evan and Adrian wouldn’t understand. Searching still, he found the bag with all the used glow sticks and remembered:
~*~Flashback~*~
“Why in hell did you buy glow sticks? You going to a dance or something?” Evan was shocked at the idea, two months into their relationship and he was still a bit shy to go out in public. The two managed to keep it private as long as possible for Evan. Adrian was the sweetest guy Evan could imagine.
“Cause it’s kinky.” Smirking the sexiest smirk he could manage, Adrian winked at him. “Trust me, you’ll like it.”
“Like what?” Knowing the meaning behind the smirk Evan attempted to get out of the room. He really didn’t want to know what the other teenager had planned. Adrian had attempted handcuffs, scented lube, edible underwear, pretty much anything fetishy found at a sex store. Evan didn’t mind. He thought most of the stuff was fun or just plain funny. Seeing the scary grin and wink to complete it, Evan ran around the bed. “No way are you sticking that where I think you are!”
“Aww come on Evan, you know I’d never hurt you.” Chasing the younger teen around the bed, smirking and trying to smile sweetly were hard to do. To Adrian, Evan was everything good. He was sweet, kind, full of innocence…well until the lights went out.
“You can stick that thing up your own ass!!” Coming to a complete halt, he crossed his arms and gave Adrian the dirtiest look he could manage without laughing. Getting a great idea Adrian tackled. Pinning the younger underneath him, Adrian claimed victory very loudly. Evan couldn’t help but laugh.
The two spent the rest of evening laughing, cracking the glow sticks and throwing them at each other.
~*~End Flashback~*~
Evan burst into tears remembering the evening. Hearing a knock he composed himself and this time very well. Grabbing his wallet off the table, he answered the door to find a policeman. Not hearing much of what the officer said, he followed.
The car was completely silent except about halfway there when Evan remembered Adrian saying:
~*~Flashback~*~
“The only way you’ll get me to ride in a cop car is in the back seat when I get arrested for loving you.”
~*~End Flashback~*~
A cheesy statement but it meant so much because with that statement Adrian got Evan to go out with him openly. The two announced their relationship the next day. Adrian was always so…wonderful. There was no other way to describe it.
~*~Flashback~*~
“We’ll get married there.” Adrian said, pointing to a church. “And we’ll be taken to our reception by cop car because of what I said before. Remember?”
“Of course I remember. You got me all teary that day.” Taking the other’s hand, he smiled. Adrian smiled back, squeezing the hand lightly then he released it and threw his arm over Evan’s shoulders, retaking the hand with his other.
“I meant it, you know.” Evan looked puzzled. “When I said I love you, I do. I really love you.” Evan smiled.
“I love you too.” He leaned up for a kiss that Adrian was all too happy to give.
~*~End Flashback~*~
“Where is he?!” Evan smacked the counter growling at the incompetent nurse. “TELL ME!”
“Mister Adrian Cole is this way. Follow me.” Another nurse said, noticing the brown haired teen, heading down the hall. Following her, Evan got nervous. Was Adrian going to die? Was the vile moon really going to grant his angered wish that meant nothing? No Adrian couldn’t die, he couldn’t. Finally reaching the room they kept Adrian, Evan ran over to his boyfriend.
“Adrian!! Please no!” He saw several tubes coming out of his arms; a tube pushing oxygen into his lungs and several machines keeping him alive.
“Evan, I’m so sorry.” Adrian’s voice was raspy. His hand clenched a small box. “I-I wanted to-“
“Adrian no, you need your strength: you can’t leave me!” Tears flowed down his ivory cheeks onto the bruised arm of his lover.
“Evan…Please…here I g-got this for you.” Adrian handed Evan the small box that held everything precious to him. His heartbeat started to slow. Evan reached for the box, opening it slowly. A promise ring was held within. It was silver with the words cop car and glow stick written in Spanish. Laughing sadly, a small smile played on his lips as Adrian’s weak hand placed it on his finger. More tears spilled from Evan’s once bright blue eyes. Brushing the red-tipped black hair out of his boyfriend’s eye, he kissed Adrian softly.
“I love you so much.”
“I love you too.” Adrian reached up and brushed Evan’s brown hair behind his ear. It was then Evan noticed the blue bracelet. Adrian agreed not to be revived. Looking shocked at his dying lover, his eyes asked why?
Before his question was answered the heart monitor beeped loudly signaling a flat line.
“NO!! You promised you’d come back! You promised we’d be together. You promised, you promised, you promised…” Crying full heartedly over his now-dead boyfriend’s chest repeating the haunting phrase “you promised.” Several nurses who watched the final moments were in tears. One finally composed herself enough to go over and rub Evan’s back lightly as he continued to cry and chant “you promised, you promised.”
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So what did you think??? please R&R I know everyone\'s going she said that already. I know I did but I really really like reviews good or bad.
Rating: R (sorry people only implied sex)
Pairing: Adrian Cole, and Evan Miller
Disclaimer: haha don\'t have to do it. My characters my plot you steal I sue muahaha (jk)
Note: Evan\'s 17, Adrian\'s 18. This was written for my Writer\'s craft class. She said that if anyone else in the class besides her would have edited it..they would have freaked. So I natually thought well it much be good then..haha anyway enjoy..
Please R&R. Creative critism is definatly a good thing do to the fact I submitted this.
By the way you will notice that it has some asspects similar to my other stroy Looking through the window...that\'s because that story insipired this one!
Enough of my notes now..enjoy the fic...please R&R!!! *gives puppy eyes*
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Evan, waiting for his boyfriend to return, looked up through the window at the full moon, beautiful and divine in all its glory. The promise had been make, the anxious feeling digging deeper and deeper in the fragility of his nervous heart.
‘He promised he’d be home soon. Said he was going to get his hair cut, hair cut my ass! He’s out there screwing that friend of his that doesn’t like me.’
Evan watched the clouds cover the moon for a dark time, as if acknowledging what he said.
‘Adrian promised that he would be home.’ Evan closed his eyes when he heard the chime. ‘One o’clock. He told me he’d be back by nine. I know he would do this to me. He told me he’d come back. He knows it’s our anniversary. Goddamn it Adrian! Why did you have to do this to me?’ Tears stained the purity of his silky ivory skin. ‘You know how hard it was to me to admit…everything! It took so long to accept your offer and admit that I’m gay and now…’
Evan wiped the tears away then re-crossed his arms by the window. The clouds weren’t gone but now some of the moon showed.
‘No, I have to have faith in him. It’s not like he’d do that to me. No he had better be on his damn deathbed with the people about to call me in:
Three
Two
ONE!!’
“RING!” The phone rang and Evan jumped three feet in the air. ‘No I didn’t mean it.’ He reached to answer it.
“Hello?” Evan answered shakily.
“Evan Miller?” Evan nodded, then realizing he was on the phone responded very softly, ‘yes.’
“This is the hospital calling, we were given your number by a Mister Adrian Cole for emergencies. Are you any relation to Mister Cole?”
Evan gulped, ‘I didn’t mean it…I didn’t mean it.’ “Yes he’s my…” Evan stopped, the bridge of his sanity ruptured. He never wanted his boyfriend to actually be on his deathbed.
“Mister Miller? Are you still there Mister Miller?”
“…boyfriend. Adrian is my boyfriend. Is he alright?” Shaking, he attempted to compose himself, not doing a very good job.
“I think you should come in. Mister Cole is-…wants your help. The Georgian Memorial’s emergency room. Do you have transportation? If you do not we will send a police car to retrieve you.”
Dropping to the floor, Evan thought about what he said to the moon. Was it actually granting his wish? Was it really making sure Adrian was on his deathbed to comfort Evan? No, not comfort, a harsh treatment in return for the harsh words he spoke. He looked at the villain watching its face of shadows turn and laugh at him, claiming the deadliest of laws: The Threefold Law. One Evan had lived his life by for so long. He’d admit it, he loved Adrian and this was not what he wanted. As he cursed the moon, the secretary’s voice knocked hard on the door of his wretched thoughts.
“Mister Miller? Do you have Transportation?” He knew that if he stepped into his car he’d get into an accident by either crying over whatever is happening, or running over everything in his path.
“No I don’t. Please I need…”
“It’s alright Mister Miller, a police car will arrive shortly. I already have the address so you do not need to worry.”
“Thank-“ He was cut off by the hanging up of the other phone. Hating everything, he looked around the small apartment, the one Adrian and he worked so hard to get. He went to their bedroom finding their “special” drawer. It contained everything from their relationship; movie tickets, receipts, paper bags indicating restaurants and dates, journal entries from before they started dating, love letters, a long list of numbers that anyone other then Evan and Adrian wouldn’t understand. Searching still, he found the bag with all the used glow sticks and remembered:
~*~Flashback~*~
“Why in hell did you buy glow sticks? You going to a dance or something?” Evan was shocked at the idea, two months into their relationship and he was still a bit shy to go out in public. The two managed to keep it private as long as possible for Evan. Adrian was the sweetest guy Evan could imagine.
“Cause it’s kinky.” Smirking the sexiest smirk he could manage, Adrian winked at him. “Trust me, you’ll like it.”
“Like what?” Knowing the meaning behind the smirk Evan attempted to get out of the room. He really didn’t want to know what the other teenager had planned. Adrian had attempted handcuffs, scented lube, edible underwear, pretty much anything fetishy found at a sex store. Evan didn’t mind. He thought most of the stuff was fun or just plain funny. Seeing the scary grin and wink to complete it, Evan ran around the bed. “No way are you sticking that where I think you are!”
“Aww come on Evan, you know I’d never hurt you.” Chasing the younger teen around the bed, smirking and trying to smile sweetly were hard to do. To Adrian, Evan was everything good. He was sweet, kind, full of innocence…well until the lights went out.
“You can stick that thing up your own ass!!” Coming to a complete halt, he crossed his arms and gave Adrian the dirtiest look he could manage without laughing. Getting a great idea Adrian tackled. Pinning the younger underneath him, Adrian claimed victory very loudly. Evan couldn’t help but laugh.
The two spent the rest of evening laughing, cracking the glow sticks and throwing them at each other.
~*~End Flashback~*~
Evan burst into tears remembering the evening. Hearing a knock he composed himself and this time very well. Grabbing his wallet off the table, he answered the door to find a policeman. Not hearing much of what the officer said, he followed.
The car was completely silent except about halfway there when Evan remembered Adrian saying:
~*~Flashback~*~
“The only way you’ll get me to ride in a cop car is in the back seat when I get arrested for loving you.”
~*~End Flashback~*~
A cheesy statement but it meant so much because with that statement Adrian got Evan to go out with him openly. The two announced their relationship the next day. Adrian was always so…wonderful. There was no other way to describe it.
~*~Flashback~*~
“We’ll get married there.” Adrian said, pointing to a church. “And we’ll be taken to our reception by cop car because of what I said before. Remember?”
“Of course I remember. You got me all teary that day.” Taking the other’s hand, he smiled. Adrian smiled back, squeezing the hand lightly then he released it and threw his arm over Evan’s shoulders, retaking the hand with his other.
“I meant it, you know.” Evan looked puzzled. “When I said I love you, I do. I really love you.” Evan smiled.
“I love you too.” He leaned up for a kiss that Adrian was all too happy to give.
~*~End Flashback~*~
“Where is he?!” Evan smacked the counter growling at the incompetent nurse. “TELL ME!”
“Mister Adrian Cole is this way. Follow me.” Another nurse said, noticing the brown haired teen, heading down the hall. Following her, Evan got nervous. Was Adrian going to die? Was the vile moon really going to grant his angered wish that meant nothing? No Adrian couldn’t die, he couldn’t. Finally reaching the room they kept Adrian, Evan ran over to his boyfriend.
“Adrian!! Please no!” He saw several tubes coming out of his arms; a tube pushing oxygen into his lungs and several machines keeping him alive.
“Evan, I’m so sorry.” Adrian’s voice was raspy. His hand clenched a small box. “I-I wanted to-“
“Adrian no, you need your strength: you can’t leave me!” Tears flowed down his ivory cheeks onto the bruised arm of his lover.
“Evan…Please…here I g-got this for you.” Adrian handed Evan the small box that held everything precious to him. His heartbeat started to slow. Evan reached for the box, opening it slowly. A promise ring was held within. It was silver with the words cop car and glow stick written in Spanish. Laughing sadly, a small smile played on his lips as Adrian’s weak hand placed it on his finger. More tears spilled from Evan’s once bright blue eyes. Brushing the red-tipped black hair out of his boyfriend’s eye, he kissed Adrian softly.
“I love you so much.”
“I love you too.” Adrian reached up and brushed Evan’s brown hair behind his ear. It was then Evan noticed the blue bracelet. Adrian agreed not to be revived. Looking shocked at his dying lover, his eyes asked why?
Before his question was answered the heart monitor beeped loudly signaling a flat line.
“NO!! You promised you’d come back! You promised we’d be together. You promised, you promised, you promised…” Crying full heartedly over his now-dead boyfriend’s chest repeating the haunting phrase “you promised.” Several nurses who watched the final moments were in tears. One finally composed herself enough to go over and rub Evan’s back lightly as he continued to cry and chant “you promised, you promised.”
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So what did you think??? please R&R I know everyone\'s going she said that already. I know I did but I really really like reviews good or bad.