Inadequate

When they were together, it was the happiest time of his life. Mitch was absolutely head over heels in love with Beth, and she loved him back. It wasn\'t the first relationship for Beth, and it was Mitch\'s first, but that didn\'t bother him. It didn\'t bother him that he was a virgin and she wasn\'t, either. When Mitch felt the time was right, they decided to go all the way. He gave Beth his virginity, and never regretted it.

Mitch had always had a self-confidence problem. He started to get over it when he began dating Beth. After all, Mitch was a fairly average guy in nearly every way, and Beth was an ambitious, intelligent, quirky girl who also happened to have quite the body. Slim waist, somewhat smallish breasts, a beautiful face shaped by short dark hair, and the finest ass Mitch thought he would ever see in his lifetime. After their first time, Beth told Mitch that he was the best she\'d ever had even though it was his first time, and after seeing her moan and scream and after feeling her pussy tighten up like a vise during her orgasms, Mitch believed her. Needless to say, Mitch\'s self-confidence shot up quite a bit. Over the course of their relationship, Mitch and Beth had sex. Lots of sex. Every opportunity they got, they\'d end up being all over each other. But as time wore on, their relationship started having problems. Mitch did everything he could to keep it going and make it better, but in the end, it was useless.

Since Beth had been there and done that with relationships, she didn\'t have a problem with it ending. Mitch, on the other hand, had grown attached, just like anyone in their first relationship. Mitch\'s self-confidence problem came back with a vengeance, as somewhat adolescent feelings of inadequacy flooded his mind. For months, he found himself becoming more and more depressed.


Mitch and Ann had met early on in high school, but they\'d never really known each other that well. More casual acquaintances than real friends, they rarely talked, and knew little about each other. For a short time, Mitch had thought that maybe Ann liked him, especially after Ann had asked him to go to the Homecoming dance with her. The move surprised him, since Ann was a very attractive girl. Ann was just slightly chubby, but certainly not fat, with a round face that showcased her winning smile. She had hips that flared out slightly that, combined with her perky C cup breasts, gave her a nice hourglass figure. Of all the attractive guys she knew, Mitch thought, why did she ask me? But those thoughts passed soon after, however, as Mitch and Ann never really developed a friendship beyond just talking occasionally.


~~~Mitch\'s POV~~~

*Ugh. Why am I here? I don\'t know anyone here, besides Ann. Why did she invite me to this party, anyway? I know we\'ve been talking a little bit more lately, since I told her about what happened with me and Beth, but still, it\'s not like we really ever hang out. I feel so out of place. I think I’ve been sitting here this whole time, not really doing anything. People are probably wondering who the loser who hasn’t taken a single drink and is sitting in the corner staring at the wall is.*

I felt a light tap on my shoulder, waking me from my thoughts. I turned around and looked up and saw Ann smiling down at me. “Hey Michael, why are you just sitting here?” she asked.

“Heh, sorry. I just kinda spaced out for a while there,” I replied with a half-smile.

“You feeling ok?” Ann asked me. A slight look of concern crossed her face, which was slightly flushed from the alcohol she’d had during the party.

“Yeah, I’m ok. I guess I’m just a little out of my element here. You know I’m not really a party animal like you are,” I said. She let out a giggle at the party animal line, and shrugged. “Yeah well, the party’s just about over anyway, and I’m actually a little partied out,” Ann said.

I took a look around and saw that she was right. Most of the people had gone already, and most of the people who were left were still sitting around drinking and laughing. Ann looked at me for a second and then asked “Hey Mitch do you think you could take me home? I don’t really feel like sticking around any longer, and my roommate doesn’t want to leave yet.” Ann lived in a dorm at a local college, and her roommate seemed a little too preoccupied with her beer can and with a cute guy she was flirting with.

“Sure thing,” I said. “Your dorm is more or less along the way home for me anyway.”

“Great,” she said, “let me just go get my purse and we’ll go.” We thanked our host (and in my case, apologized somewhat for being such a boring guest) and got into my car and drove off. Along the way back to her dorm, I could feel Ann looking at me while I looked at the road. \"You sure you\'re ok?\" she asked.

I hesitated for a minute. \"Yeah...\" I finally said. \"I guess I\'m feeling a little down, but I\'m ok.\"

\"Beth?\" Ann asked. I nodded, feeling slightly uncomfortable. \"Hey it\'s ok. Don\'t worry about it so much,\" she said. \"You\'ll another girl, and if not, you can always turn gay.\" I laughed a little bit and replied \"Women always complain about men. What makes you think I\'d want one?\" Ann just laughed.

After that, we began talking about other things, and soon afterwards we arrived at her dorm. I offered to be a gentleman and walk her to her door. As we reached the door of her room, she turned around and said \"Do you want to come in for a while? We can keep talking for a little while longer.\" Seeing no reason why I shouldn\'t, I accepted and went inside to sit down on her couch. We kept making small talk for a while, until the subject turned back to my failed relationship.

\"I just wonder about it now. Did she ever really love me? Ugh...I don\'t know...\" I found that I didn\'t care how emotionally weak I appeared in front of Ann. I wasn\'t even thinking about it. The words just flowed out.

\"I\'m sure she did. Things just didn\'t work out. People can love each other but not work well as a couple,\" Ann said, trying to console me. I sat on her couch, with my head down and my eyes trained on the floor. \"I just feel so...inadequate now. I feel like I was never good enough for her. Of course, how could I have been? She\'s just so wonderful on so many different levels, and look at me. What is there that\'s good about me?\"

\"Hey, don\'t say that! You\'re a great guy,\" Ann said as she lifted my chin up so I looked her in the face. \"Don\'t ever think things like that. If anything, she\'s not good enough for you, especially if she can\'t see what a wonderful guy you are. I\'m sure lots of girls would find you incredibly attractive. I mean, I do,\" she said. I sat there, not quite sure what I had just heard. I looked into Ann\'s eyes as she looked at mine. I looked away first, thinking that she was just saying things to try and make me feel better. After all, there was no way such a hot girl like Ann would like someone like me.

Suddenly, I felt Ann put her hand under my chin and lift it up. The next thing I knew, her lips were pressed against mine and her hands were pulling me close to her. I felt Ann insert her tongue into my mouth and I heard her moan softly in pleasure. She broke away, straddled me on the couch, and began kissing my neck. \"Wait,\" I said. \"Shh,\" she silenced me. \"You need this.\" Ann kissed my neck and ran her tongue up to my earlobes, which she began sucking, all the while she was grinding her pert ass into my growing erection. I moaned as she began grinding into me harder and faster as she kissed me on the lips again. I reached around and grabbed her ass and squeezed her cheeks hard, causing her to moan into my mouth.

Ann pulled her shirt off, revealing a red bra that was soon also on the floor. I stopped for a moment, admiring her wonderful C cup breasts. I began fondling one breast with my hand while I sucked on the other, licking and biting on the nipple. As I bit down on her nipple, Ann let out a squeal of pleasure. She then got out of my lap and pulled me up off the couch, telling me to get my clothes off. I quickly obliged and stood naked before her, my cock throbbing. Ann got down onto her knees and began lightly stroking my cock with her hands. She kissed the tip and licked up a drop of precum that had leaked out. Then I closed my eyes and sucked in a breath of pleasure as she slowly slid her mouth down my entire penis. I moaned out her name as Ann moved up and down on my cock, sometimes sucking it hard and sometimes rolling her tongue softly around it.

Ann pulled my cock out of her mouth and stood up. With a seductive smile on her face, she turned around and slowly slid off the skirt that she had been wearing, revealing a red thong that had a distinctively wet spot on it. Seeing how hot she looked, I decided it was time I took control, and I picked her up and walked over to a table nearby, setting her down so that she was standing bent over the edge of her table, her ass up in the air. Giving her ass a playful spank first, I then slid the thong down her ass and got down on my knees. Her beautiful shaved pussy was glistening with wetness, and I stuck my tongue out to taste it. She gasped as I began sliding my tongue along the lips of my pussy, and then moaned when I stuck my tongue inside. I began licking her clit gently while I stuck a finger inside of her. \"Ahhh!\" Ann screamed as I fingered her and sucked on her clit at the same time.

I could see that she was ready, so I stood up behind her and caressed her ass for a moment before I aimed my cock at her opening. Ann looked back at me with lustful eyes and begged for me to put it in. I put the tip against the lips of her pussy, teasing her, before I slid the entire length of my cock inside with one smooth stroke. Ann gasped in pleasure and gripped the table as I began thrusting in and out of her. I started off slowly, but soon I could no longer control myself and I was fucking Ann hard. My hands reached around to squeeze Ann\'s beautiful tits as I fucked her from behind with everything I had. I felt my balls slapping against Ann\'s body as I thrust into her. Ann screamed incoherently as she orgasmed, her pussy tightening on my cock so much that it felt like it would cut it off. Ann looked back at me and said \"Let me ride you, baby.\"

We moved back to the couch where it all started, and I lay down on my back. She straddled me and slowly lowered herself onto my cock. The heat and wetness of her pussy were so overwhelming, and the pleasure that hit me was incredible as Ann began riding my cock up and down. I looked up and saw her gorgeous tits bouncing up and down, and I reached up and grabbed them and squeezed them hard, causing Ann to moan. Then I felt her pussy begin to squeeze my cock again as Ann orgasmed again, and this time, I couldn\'t hold back. I felt my climax approach, and then it hit me with wave after wave of pleasure. My cock spasmed over and over again as I exploded and shot my cum into her. We screamed at the same time, then felt our climaxes die down. She fell over on top of me, exhausted, and we lay there on the couch for a while in each other arms.

As I was walking out Ann\'s door, she pulled me back by the arm to kiss me one last time. I smiled at her and said \"Thank you.\" She nodded and waved goodbye. I walked back to my car, no longer feeling inadequate, and no longer thinking about the ex-girlfriend who had been troubling me. As I got into my car and turned the key, I looked back at Ann\'s dorm and smiled, knowing that the next time I was feeling depressed, or inadequate, or unconfident, I could think back to that night.



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Phew. That was my first attempt ever at both creative writing AND erotic fiction. Since it\'s my first one, I\'m really curious to know what people think about it. So please review it and tell me what you liked or disliked about it. Maybe next time I\'ll cut out all the plot and just leave the hot stuff =D