The Missing Vampire
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Category:
Vampire › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
2
Views:
1,052
Reviews:
8
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
The Missing Vampire
The Missing Vampire
1927
It\'s 6 p.m. and the train should be arriving at the station any minute. 3 minutes later the train arrived at the station. Everyone tried to watch inside, but the windows were painted black, so no one could watch inside or was it meant for something else.....? The doors are opening and everyone is trying to catch a glimp of the person who is stepping out, because a huge crowd stands in front of the train. When the person steps out of the train, watched around and he snapped with his fingers, everyone was stepping aside. When their was course space enough the guy started walking. He had a terrifying look on his face, totally white, the crowd was scared of him. One person was very cool and relaxted and called him by his name, Demian. Demian reacted and walked immediately to the person and said:,,Good to see you Leonard, my friend\'\', while he was shaking his hand. Then they walked together to a house, while everybody was looking at them with big eyes, because they were scared of them. While they walked, Leonard told something to Demian and Demian laughed on a strange way, it was also a bit scary. When they arrived at Leonards home they knocked on the door and a handsome woman opened the door and said:,,Hi Leonard\'\' and asked who that stranger was. Leonard answered:,,This is my friend, Demian......\'\'and gave a wink to the woman, who was called Layla. Leonard and Demian stepped inside and took off their coat. Layla gave Leonard a kiss on the mouth and pulled her leg on Leonard\'s leg and gave him a nasty look. Leonard kinda liked it. Demian was watching full of pleasure to Layla, he liked her, even he didn\'t even know her. They went to the living room and fell in the big well seated couch, watching the fire in the hearth. Leonard and Demian started talking about the past, they had fun about it. Demian was tired and asked where his restplace was. Leonard asked Layla, if she could show him where his coffin was. She walked out of the room and Demian followed her, and at the doorway Demian stopped walking and turned around. He said:,,Thank you Leonard, for everng..ng....ow and goodnight\'\'. Leonard smiled. Demian followed Layla again and they walked upon the stairs and went the fifth room left. Layla walked into the room and pushed the lid of the coffin and she gave Demian a nasty look and said:,,May I kiss you?\'\' Before Demian even could say something sheeadyeady kissed him. After that she had left the room and walked below. Demian brushes his teeths and went to his coffin.
plz review after reading, i need reviews to get better, i\'m writing chapter 2 and in chapter 2 will be more action, much more.....plz give me tips and don\'t say anything about my grammar plz, i\'m dutch^_^
1927
It\'s 6 p.m. and the train should be arriving at the station any minute. 3 minutes later the train arrived at the station. Everyone tried to watch inside, but the windows were painted black, so no one could watch inside or was it meant for something else.....? The doors are opening and everyone is trying to catch a glimp of the person who is stepping out, because a huge crowd stands in front of the train. When the person steps out of the train, watched around and he snapped with his fingers, everyone was stepping aside. When their was course space enough the guy started walking. He had a terrifying look on his face, totally white, the crowd was scared of him. One person was very cool and relaxted and called him by his name, Demian. Demian reacted and walked immediately to the person and said:,,Good to see you Leonard, my friend\'\', while he was shaking his hand. Then they walked together to a house, while everybody was looking at them with big eyes, because they were scared of them. While they walked, Leonard told something to Demian and Demian laughed on a strange way, it was also a bit scary. When they arrived at Leonards home they knocked on the door and a handsome woman opened the door and said:,,Hi Leonard\'\' and asked who that stranger was. Leonard answered:,,This is my friend, Demian......\'\'and gave a wink to the woman, who was called Layla. Leonard and Demian stepped inside and took off their coat. Layla gave Leonard a kiss on the mouth and pulled her leg on Leonard\'s leg and gave him a nasty look. Leonard kinda liked it. Demian was watching full of pleasure to Layla, he liked her, even he didn\'t even know her. They went to the living room and fell in the big well seated couch, watching the fire in the hearth. Leonard and Demian started talking about the past, they had fun about it. Demian was tired and asked where his restplace was. Leonard asked Layla, if she could show him where his coffin was. She walked out of the room and Demian followed her, and at the doorway Demian stopped walking and turned around. He said:,,Thank you Leonard, for everng..ng....ow and goodnight\'\'. Leonard smiled. Demian followed Layla again and they walked upon the stairs and went the fifth room left. Layla walked into the room and pushed the lid of the coffin and she gave Demian a nasty look and said:,,May I kiss you?\'\' Before Demian even could say something sheeadyeady kissed him. After that she had left the room and walked below. Demian brushes his teeths and went to his coffin.
plz review after reading, i need reviews to get better, i\'m writing chapter 2 and in chapter 2 will be more action, much more.....plz give me tips and don\'t say anything about my grammar plz, i\'m dutch^_^