Myia
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Category:
Fantasy & Science Fiction › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
2
Views:
767
Reviews:
0
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
Myia
Note: this is just something i druged up from a dream one night and thought to write it down. The characters are all original if some of them seem like another\'s they are not so get over it.
Chapter 1
2931- Kalamin
\"I believe I found a new talent my Lord\" The man bowed. Prespiration driped down his face.
\"You believe but do not know?\" The Lord scowled, disaproval showing in his entire stance. \"Why did you not test him?\"
\"That is where the problem lies My Lord\" He continued on quickly not wanting to anger his lord any more. \"Th child has not yet been born yet.\"
\"What nonsence are you talking about?\" The Lord growled down at the quivering man discusted at his weakness. The talent normally doesn\'t show up until adolesecnce. In children who are paticularly strong it might show up in child hood. In himself the talent showed istself when he was two. \"How can you think you found talent in somone who does not esist?\"
\"The child does exist! It just has not left its mothers womb yet.\" The man shirnked away from his Lord. Unsure of what his reaction would be. But the Lord face changed into a thoughtfull amazement. The man almost sighed out loud in relief.
\"Who are the childs parents and who discovered it?\" The Lord asked. If this child actuallly has talent it will be very powerful. Talen had never shown itself in anyone that early before.
\"That is also a problem My Lord,\" The man was squirming again not wanting to relay this bit of information, \"The child\'s parents are Emperor and Emperis Kaylor of the planet N\'Igal. They will have to be delt with diplomatically. It was thier Warrior that discovered the talent.\"
\"Good! I want you to go and retrieve the child as soon as it is born. If you discribe to the parent what will happen if the child does not get training they will most defently give it to you.\" The Lord paused and stared out the window, \"If they do not give the child up right away they will eventually. The child will become too much for the parents to take care of. IF the child is talented that is.\"
\"Yes, my Lord\" The man bowed and departed from the room.
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That is the end of chapter one.
Any thoughts u have on it i would like to hear the good and the bad.
Chapter 1
2931- Kalamin
\"I believe I found a new talent my Lord\" The man bowed. Prespiration driped down his face.
\"You believe but do not know?\" The Lord scowled, disaproval showing in his entire stance. \"Why did you not test him?\"
\"That is where the problem lies My Lord\" He continued on quickly not wanting to anger his lord any more. \"Th child has not yet been born yet.\"
\"What nonsence are you talking about?\" The Lord growled down at the quivering man discusted at his weakness. The talent normally doesn\'t show up until adolesecnce. In children who are paticularly strong it might show up in child hood. In himself the talent showed istself when he was two. \"How can you think you found talent in somone who does not esist?\"
\"The child does exist! It just has not left its mothers womb yet.\" The man shirnked away from his Lord. Unsure of what his reaction would be. But the Lord face changed into a thoughtfull amazement. The man almost sighed out loud in relief.
\"Who are the childs parents and who discovered it?\" The Lord asked. If this child actuallly has talent it will be very powerful. Talen had never shown itself in anyone that early before.
\"That is also a problem My Lord,\" The man was squirming again not wanting to relay this bit of information, \"The child\'s parents are Emperor and Emperis Kaylor of the planet N\'Igal. They will have to be delt with diplomatically. It was thier Warrior that discovered the talent.\"
\"Good! I want you to go and retrieve the child as soon as it is born. If you discribe to the parent what will happen if the child does not get training they will most defently give it to you.\" The Lord paused and stared out the window, \"If they do not give the child up right away they will eventually. The child will become too much for the parents to take care of. IF the child is talented that is.\"
\"Yes, my Lord\" The man bowed and departed from the room.
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That is the end of chapter one.
Any thoughts u have on it i would like to hear the good and the bad.