The World Where I Belong
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Angst › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
13
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Category:
Angst › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
13
Views:
1,654
Reviews:
1
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
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From the person who wrote this sucky story that needs to be spellchecked:
Please review and rate, it be nice to know if its getting better or not. So please if you have the time.
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It wasnt hard to figure out how the bastard that managed this place made his money. He often made people who had no other choice but to work for him and forced them to work, he hired the guards to scare them. Miki now not having to worry about being killed by Garin had the time to look into what she owned and what was her job. Though her 2 advisors said she just had to ejoy her life and they would take care of everything, it worried her a lot how greedy the eyes of the advisors were. She went out to look at the fields where the crops were growing and was shocked. The people on the fields were sick, tiered, and there were children and old men working. She hid behind a wall of a shed watching when one of the old men triped and spilled the contents of the bucket he was carrying. A huge gueard rushed toward the old man, a loud sound of a whip echoed through the air as the whip split open the skin on the old mans black. The guard screamed something, and the old man starked collecting the spilled contents with his shaking hands, but the guard was not satisfied and continued wipping the old man till the old man fell flat on the ground. Miki couldnt take it anymore she ran up to the big man and slaped him hard across the face. He was outraged, grabing her wrist he threw her to the ground. She quickly jumped out of the way of the whip that almost whipped across her face. She quickly jumped toher feet.
\"Stop this now\"she comanded
The man was startled by her eyes, they filled with anger without a hint of fear.
This was causing a specticle, more guards gathered around.
\"What the hell! You cant handle a little girl?\" oneof the other guards yealed
\"I thought all the guards were fired?\"
\"HA Ha ha, we arent guards, we are administrators of you animals, you are new so I`ll teach you how it goes here\" he said walking toward herhe was sure she would run, but instead she steped forward closer to him.
He cracked the wipagain, but she didnt douge it this time, blocking with her hand the wip wraped around her hand and drops of blood fell to the ground. With one sudden movement she jerked the wip from the \"administrator\", she picked up the wip and crackedit in the air. The large man was now somewhat scared of this crazy woman, but from the presure of the people watching he had no choice but to atack her. Miki used the wip and after only one hit to the mans chest he stoped. Kneeling to the ground he was bleeding, the other guards now joined in and surounding her were about to rip her to pieces,when a loud voice sounded across the field.
\"Mistress Miki where are you?\" It was Ma, Miki was releaved.
\"I am here Ma, I am a little busy, you come over here and bring Garin and the Captain!\"
The men around her were in shock. This woman dressed in plain clothes was their new master. Ma knew that something was wrong and after getting the Captain and Garin ran to Miki.
\"I give you half a day brake from practice and you got yourself introuble at your own mansion\" said Garin walking into the circle, Captain and Garin were right behind him. All the men bowed to the Captain, and knew Garin was the old masters right hand.
\"Whats going on here?\" asked the Captain in a strict voice
\"Oh these guys here decided to whip me into shape, after declaring to be me an animal ofcourse!\"Mikie declare, thenlooking to Ma she asked`Could you please take this gentlemen behing me to the main house and get a doctor to look at him please\" Ma obayed without a word.
\"I really dont think that we need any administrators, so I am giving all of you two choices+ one get out of here and never show your face again, or shart building me houses instead of the shacks that these people live in. You`ll get paid as before but you`ll have to live with these \"animals\" until you finish your job, but if I hear a single complaint from any of them about you hurting them instead of helping them you wont just be fired, a worse fate awaits you then\" half of the men turned around and started walking toward the gate, she smiled, she knew that those men were the ones who treated these people the worst.
\"Another new rule noone blow the age of 16 or bove 65 is alowed to work on the fields unless they get promission from me. The kids need to be educated and the older people should be respected and will help administed the business. Oh and the most important thing you are free, if you dont want to work here you dont have to, just leave\"
Please review and rate, it be nice to know if its getting better or not. So please if you have the time.
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It wasnt hard to figure out how the bastard that managed this place made his money. He often made people who had no other choice but to work for him and forced them to work, he hired the guards to scare them. Miki now not having to worry about being killed by Garin had the time to look into what she owned and what was her job. Though her 2 advisors said she just had to ejoy her life and they would take care of everything, it worried her a lot how greedy the eyes of the advisors were. She went out to look at the fields where the crops were growing and was shocked. The people on the fields were sick, tiered, and there were children and old men working. She hid behind a wall of a shed watching when one of the old men triped and spilled the contents of the bucket he was carrying. A huge gueard rushed toward the old man, a loud sound of a whip echoed through the air as the whip split open the skin on the old mans black. The guard screamed something, and the old man starked collecting the spilled contents with his shaking hands, but the guard was not satisfied and continued wipping the old man till the old man fell flat on the ground. Miki couldnt take it anymore she ran up to the big man and slaped him hard across the face. He was outraged, grabing her wrist he threw her to the ground. She quickly jumped out of the way of the whip that almost whipped across her face. She quickly jumped toher feet.
\"Stop this now\"she comanded
The man was startled by her eyes, they filled with anger without a hint of fear.
This was causing a specticle, more guards gathered around.
\"What the hell! You cant handle a little girl?\" oneof the other guards yealed
\"I thought all the guards were fired?\"
\"HA Ha ha, we arent guards, we are administrators of you animals, you are new so I`ll teach you how it goes here\" he said walking toward herhe was sure she would run, but instead she steped forward closer to him.
He cracked the wipagain, but she didnt douge it this time, blocking with her hand the wip wraped around her hand and drops of blood fell to the ground. With one sudden movement she jerked the wip from the \"administrator\", she picked up the wip and crackedit in the air. The large man was now somewhat scared of this crazy woman, but from the presure of the people watching he had no choice but to atack her. Miki used the wip and after only one hit to the mans chest he stoped. Kneeling to the ground he was bleeding, the other guards now joined in and surounding her were about to rip her to pieces,when a loud voice sounded across the field.
\"Mistress Miki where are you?\" It was Ma, Miki was releaved.
\"I am here Ma, I am a little busy, you come over here and bring Garin and the Captain!\"
The men around her were in shock. This woman dressed in plain clothes was their new master. Ma knew that something was wrong and after getting the Captain and Garin ran to Miki.
\"I give you half a day brake from practice and you got yourself introuble at your own mansion\" said Garin walking into the circle, Captain and Garin were right behind him. All the men bowed to the Captain, and knew Garin was the old masters right hand.
\"Whats going on here?\" asked the Captain in a strict voice
\"Oh these guys here decided to whip me into shape, after declaring to be me an animal ofcourse!\"Mikie declare, thenlooking to Ma she asked`Could you please take this gentlemen behing me to the main house and get a doctor to look at him please\" Ma obayed without a word.
\"I really dont think that we need any administrators, so I am giving all of you two choices+ one get out of here and never show your face again, or shart building me houses instead of the shacks that these people live in. You`ll get paid as before but you`ll have to live with these \"animals\" until you finish your job, but if I hear a single complaint from any of them about you hurting them instead of helping them you wont just be fired, a worse fate awaits you then\" half of the men turned around and started walking toward the gate, she smiled, she knew that those men were the ones who treated these people the worst.
\"Another new rule noone blow the age of 16 or bove 65 is alowed to work on the fields unless they get promission from me. The kids need to be educated and the older people should be respected and will help administed the business. Oh and the most important thing you are free, if you dont want to work here you dont have to, just leave\"