The Shower

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Jay held his breath at the delicious sensation of Shawn’s fingers fluttering inside him. He had to force himself to relax and to breath as he guided Shawn heated rod into him, searing pain radiated up from where they were joined. Jay’s legs relaxed, signaling Shawn to stop.

“SLOWLY take your fingers out!” Jay ground out “And for the love of God! Don’t move!” He felt one finger after another carefully withdraw and the pain eased. Now the only thing inside him was Shawn, he lay there adjusting to the full feeling and waited for his body to accept the intruder.

Jay’s body finally enclosed over him tightly; Shawn’s ears filled with the sound of his own heartbeat, thumping and throbbing. His hands were clenched at his sides, he trembled and groaned.

“Shawn?” Jay said softly as his body quickly adjusted to accommodate Shawn’s manhood; getting no response he looked up quickly.

Sweat broke out over his body as Shawn struggled not to come, he was groaning over and over. He just couldn’t help himself, he felt the tightening in his gut and knew he was about to lose his load he threw his head back with a guttural cry.

“Shawn! No!” Jay gasped, taking in Shawn’s state instantly. His sensitive insides felt Shawn twitch inside him, and his hand quickly snaked up to close tightly around his base.

“Oh…. My… god…. Jay!!!” Shawn gasped at the pain Jay was inflicting. “What are you doing?!”

“Believe me; you’ll thank me for this when it’s over.” Jay said; he could feel Shawn spasm in his hand but there was no gush of heat. He’d gotten to him in time to stop him from reaching his orgasm.

“Ahhh… Jay… ahhh… please…let go...” Shawn pleaded. “Oh… God, ahhh you’re … so… so… tight! Ohhh… it’s wonderful… but… It hurts!”

“I know… hun… I know.” Jay whispered. Indeed he did, he was suffering too, stuck between pain and pleasure but it would pass for both of them. If given enough time. “Shhhhh… Wait… it’ll pass…” Jay waited for the moment to become manageable again.

“Is this what it feels like to be inside me?” Shawn asked. He rested his hands on Jay’s knees while finally lowering his head to look down at Jay.

“Not quite…” Jay almost laughed. “Let’s just say, I’m not as broken in as you are; but yes it’s very much the same.”

“How do you do it?” Shawn asked in wonder. “Keep it from happening I mean…”

“Enough talk…” Jay avoided the question, pulling Shawn towards him with his legs. Shawn felt himself slide deeper into Jay’s depths then the torturous wait; they repeated each step of penetration until Shawn was buried to the hilt. By then they were both panting and covered in sweat.

“Now… slowly back… out…” Jay instructed, Shawn withdrew relishing the sensation of his flesh sliding out of the passage. Then Jay was pulling him in again, this time a little faster.

Shawn followed Jay’s silent lead, like a horse being guided by its rider’s knees.

Withdraw… “Ummmm”

pull in… “Ahhhh…”

withdraw… “Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm”

pull in! “uuuhhhh!”


Each movement drew a new sound of pleasure from either Jay or Shawn.

Shawn watched as he slid in and out of Jay, his length glistened wetly then disappeared again with soft slurping sounds. Jay’s hand crept up to close around his guiding it down to his engorged shaft. Gliding in and out almost effortlessly now, Shawn pumped Jay’s hard length. Shawn could feel the slow building turmoil of his orgasm in the base of his stomach.

“Hah… Hah…Hah!” Jay grunted while matching each of Shawn’s thrusts.

He leaned over Jay planting kisses on his neck, chest, or ear; whatever he else could find. Jay arched against his mouth and Shawn slid an arm under him; cradling Jay tenderly against him. Jay shuddered under him, while Shawn continued the drive into him.

“Ahh Jay…” Shawn moaned. Almost there! “Jay!... ahhh… god…”

“Holy… shit… yessssssssssssss!” Suddenly Jay bucked against Shawn’s hips while he palmed him. Shawn felt the splatter of semen against his chest and then it ran down his hand; while Jay felt a warmth blossom inside of his depths, he shuddered with the sensation.

“God… Jay… I…. love… you…” Shawn panted, lost in the throes of his release, then fell onto Jay’s chest shuddering. “I… love… you!”

Immediately he realized what he had just blurted out and buried his face into Jay’s shoulder. Holy shit!! Did I really just say that?

The next part will be more story driven, I think these two need a bit of a rest. Thanks for sticking with me on this.. I'll update in a couple of days!