That Gorgeous Girl

Ok, I just went over this chapter because of a review about my grammar, which btw had spelling errors in it :-P just messing with you BrisingrSverdar! I appreciate the criticism, I wrote it at 5 am and it wasn’t rewritten as in edited 3 times, it was completely rewritten 3 times because Hewlett Packard sucks balls. Sorry, I’m still mad about my computer L If you see anything else wrong let me know, hell you can be my editor if you want haha. Funny story, I have an analysis and writing of prose fiction professor that automatically gives a C after 3 grammatical errors…yet Microsoft Word decided it hates me, and well I was sleep deprived. I still am but hopefully this is a bit better. Oh, and don’t diss my coolness yo, it’s sensitive like my ego haha. Kidding.


Te-Tell Your Boyfriend if he Says hes got Beef, that I'm a Vegetarian and I Ain't Fucking Scared of Him.

I groaned at the ear-piercing sound of my phone waking me up at 4 in the morning. What the fuck could be so important? I wanted to answer the phone all snappy and hardcore like, but when I saw who was calling my voice refused to go anything higher than a gently whispered “Hello?”
“Can you come over? I think someone is trying to break into my house, and I’m not just saying this to get you to come over here. I’m scared shitless right now and I didn’t really know who else to call.” Automatically my mind wants me to respond with a very sarcastic remark of…duh…Piggy’s. Instead, the moment she says someone is trying to break in I am on my feet and dressed. I am on my way out the door before she even finishes her sentence. Oh shit, almost forgot something…I run back into my room and pull the Smith and Wesson 990 L 9mm automatic out of my drawer. Hey, I never claimed to be a good kid. I’m also not naïve enough to believe everyone is a good person at heart, sometimes a little extra protection is a good thing. I grab a fresh clip and put the clip and the gun in the waistband of my pants before running out the door and racing to Devin’s house. When I get there the door has already been broken into, seemingly without too much force. It looks more like the lock was picked, must be a professional. This makes me feel better because if it was professional they wouldn’t be worried about her, they would just want the loot. With the gun loaded and a bullet cocked into the chamber, I slowly make my way through the darkness and immediately head up the stairs towards Devin’s room.
I don’t see her but I know that girl is smart, hopefully she hid when she heard someone break in. When I get further into the room the closet door opens and I aim the gun at the person who jumps out. I realize it is a wide eyed, blonde-haired girl with skin as pale as a sheet at the moment. I pull Devin to me and hug her tight, whispering that everything will be okay and I will handle it.
“I think they left, I heard a car pull away 10 minutes before you got here. I haven’t heard anyone but you since then.” Devin says with fear clear in her shaking voice. I scan through the house just to be sure. There are rooms that are ransacked and things missing everywhere. She calls the cops, and then her parents once she tells the cops what has happened. I hide my gun outside while she is on the phone, far away from anywhere the cops will be investigating so I wont get arrested for it. They don’t usually like it when people who have criminal records have unregistered guns…kind of ticks them off.

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Devin’s POV

When Maddie finally walked back into the house, slightly out of breath and the smell of cigarettes lingering on her clothes, all I can do is thank God that she came to save me. They may have been gone when she got here but she came, without asking questions or worrying about her own safety. She came for me. My parents told me that they would be home in a couple of days, I knew they wouldn’t be able to leave the important business trip and I assured them that everything would be okay. I told them I would find someone to stay in the house with me so they wouldn’t be so worried. Now I just had to ask her and hope for the best.
“My parents don’t think I should stay here alone, they wont be able to come home for a few days still, maybe even a week. I told you this house is scary when you are home alone.” I chuckle to lighten the mood some but she spins around with a look of disbelief in her eyes. Maddie closes her chocolate colored eyes tightly and balls her fists, I cant read her facial expression until she lets loose and punches the shit out of my wall. Shame, guilt and anger are written across her face as if the words were actually there. She thinks this is her fault. She is blaming herself because she didn’t stay.
“Please don’t do that, if you hadn’t have left then you wouldn’t have had the ability to bring the gun. You probably would have pulled some stupid John Wayne shit and I would have to cry if something happened to you. By the way, the whole Rambo look was sexy on you.” I grin at her, trying to get something out of her and she smiles. She wraps me tightly in her embrace and just holds me, I cant help but let my earlier fear come out as tears escape my eyes and the shock sets in.
“Don’t cry love, everything is ok now. I will stay with you. Fuck, you couldn’t make me leave now. Watch, by the time your parents get home you will be so sick of me you might try to kill me in my sleep.”
“Nah, probably just try to sex you up. It wouldn’t be my fault for having a body to die for.” Maddie bursts out laughing and grins at me.
“Yeah, we will see if you can keep up with me.” The door bell rings and breaks the peaceful moment we were having together. “Fuck, I hate cops. Well, lets get this over with. I’m sure you will have to do most of the talking anyways.” She gives me a sympathetic look and I just groan and push her.

Later that night

“Well that really sucked,” I say as I make my way back up to my bedroom with Maddie following behind me.
“Yep, pretty much. Lets get some sleep, I’m pretty sure I promised you lunch later today so we should rest.”
We go into my room and I undress down to my bra and panties as she stares at me. I climb into bed and make some room for her before looking at her expectedly. She takes off her clothes as I watch and crawls in next to me. Her arms wrap around my body and cuddle me to her. I don’t think I have ever felt as safe as I do when I am around her. Sleep comes easy for me after the draining experience earlier in the night. As I drift off I feel her lips against my neck and hear her whispered words of comfort.
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We woke sometime around 11am, with me waking up first and holding onto Devin tighter, feeling her soft skin against my own. She moaned and snuggled closer into me before her beautiful blue eyes opened to look up into my own eyes. She ran her hands across my back in small circles, making goose bumps appear on my flesh. Then her hand moved down and smacked my ass…yes I said smacked. This little mouse of a girl, who always seemed so damn innocent to me just slapped my ass and it hurt. I glare at her and she just laughs and tells me she’s hungry.
“Damn tease.” I grumbled as I get out of bed and put my clothes from last night back on. I will have to go get a bag of clothes to wear as long as I am going to be staying here. She gets up and takes her bra and underwear off in front of me while she searches for things to wear for the day. God I swear she is going to kill me. There is only so much sexual frustration a girl can take! I run by her and slap her naked ass before running downstairs laughing. Payback is a bitch! I hear her yell at me as I run down the stairs but I don’t expect her to run after me naked and when I see, well just imagine Baywatch with real…and might at add perfect tits. I trip down the rest of the stairs and crash into a heap. Which, in turn, causes her to freak the fuck out.
“Oh my god! Maddie are you alright?” she rushes to my side and checks on me, all this time she is buck ass naked. I groan, and not entirely from pain. The fact that I smacked the big ass bruise on my ribs on the edge of the stairs doesn’t even compute to my brain. All I know is I feel a small amount of pain, overshadowed by the fact that there are breasts in my face and I want nothing more than to revert back to a new born baby. (man I must be a perv haha). “ I am fine, just go get dressed so we can eat.” I have to make her put clothes on or I might die from hyper-ventilating. Damn women and their perfect methods of torture.
Devin comes back down the stairs 10 minutes later with a frown on her beautiful face. “Charlie called me. He said he wants to come over and talk. I told him we had nothing to talk about and he said he was going to come over anyways. What should I do?” she says with a sigh.
“Don’t worry about it, we wont be here anyways. If we are here then I will handle it. He shouldn’t be coming over if you told him not to.” I can’t help but be jealous over how much him calling her still has an affect. She is going to break my heart and she probably doesn’t even know.
“He will be mad at you, maybe more so than he will be at me. And he is going to assume something is going on. Your reputation does proceed you, ya know.” it was said as a statement with a bit of jealousy hidden beneath it. That wasn’t the part that bothered me the most though.
“Would you be worried if he did assume something? What exactly is going on here because I think I am the only one who has absolutely no clue and he would probably know better than I do at this point.”
“Neither of us know, ok? I don’t know how I feel, it’s all so confusing. All I know is that when I am in your arms I feel safer than I ever have, like its where I belong. And that scares the hell out of me. I don’t know if I’m ready to decide what is going on here, I told you I wanted to take it slow and I don’t even know what that means.” she is getting defensive, and all of the sudden the headache that is forming and pounding against my skull becomes too much for me to bear. I want to snap back that taking it slow doesn’t involve seeing her naked every five minutes but I just don’t want to be the asshole that upsets her, not after everything that happened last night.
“Lets just go get something to eat. You said you were hungry, so lets go.” sometimes I feel like I will never win. Sometimes this life just isn’t fair at all, and sometimes her smile makes me forget anything was wrong in the first place. She looks at me and grabs my hand, grinning at me as she pulls me out of the door and I forget what we were even talking about in the first place.
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We went to an old diner that served some great food. It was homey and comfortable, it seemed like Maddie came here often because the waitress knew her. In fact, it seemed like she knew her a little bit too well for my liking.
“So, have you fucked her?” I say out of the blue and Maddies’ head snaps up with a half open mouth. It’s a good thing I didn’t say that when she was taking a drink because I have a feeling I would have been soaked, and it wouldn’t have been for a reason I would enjoy either. She looks like I fish out of water, and in some ways it is cute. But it is also frustrating. Her reaction is telling me I am probably right.
“I um…how…do you really need to know? I don’t think it will help anything.” she finally says. She looks down in shame. “We had a thing a while back, but we are just really good friends now. She wanted more and I didn’t. I was stuck on someone else.” she looks up at me with chocolate eyes that say more than she ever will.
“Who?” I ask, I genuinely don’t think I am reading her right. If it was a while back then I don’t think it would be because of me.
“How about whenever we figure out what this thing is, you ask that question again and I will tell you the complete truth. Sound fair?” she says with a slight blush on her cheeks. I nod my head and give in because I don’t want her to feel embarrassed or uncomfortable around me. The waitress keeps hitting on Maddie and at one point, I swear to god I want to knock the shit out of her. If she was any more blatantly obvious there would be a billboard on her forehead.
“Are you almost done, your friend is starting to make me mad. She is being pretty slutty. God, if the girl was any more all over you, she would probably be in you.” I scowl as she walks towards us and asks if there is anything else we would like. She doesn’t even look at me while she asks, all she does is look at Maddie with a ‘come fuck me’ look in her eyes.
“I think the beautiful lady I came here with would like to leave soon. Could I get the check please, amber?” she smiles gently at the girl I have deemed a slut, and the waitress walks away. “So, you want to tell me why you are so green with jealousy? It is actually quite entertaining but you have no reason to be jealous. I’ve barely noticed her with you sitting across from me looking so damn gorgeous.” There is a reason why girls fall at her feet, she’s a smooth talker. And she just talked my anger down and coaxed a smile from me.
“I could tell you, but then you would have to tell me all about this girl and why she didn’t get a shot with you.“ I answer back.
“Touche, I can see you won’t give up until you get your answers. Well, you will just have to wait because I’m not that easy.” she smirks back at me.
“Hmm, we will see about that one.” I smile as she pays for the check and we left. We headed over to her place to get some things for her.
“This is where you live?” I’m sure the sadness in my voice is going to make her angry but I cant help it. She deserves so much more than this.
“Yeah, sorry its not nice or anything. We won’t be here long so don’t worry about it. Just don’t touch anything, my mom never cleans a damn thing and you never know what you will catch.” She is trying to say it playfully, but I can tell she is embarrassed about me seeing this place.
The next thing I know, there is screaming coming from the trailer and a middle- aged woman steps out looking mean and holding a baseball bat. “You little shit! I should teach you how to listen to your mother! You didn’t ask to leave last night, you don’t get to go wherever you want!” the woman started down the stairs towards us.
Maddie yells at me over the crazy woman’s screaming, “Devin get back in the car, now!” Suddenly, the bruises begin to make sense.


Dun Dun Dun! Eh don’t know how happy I am with this. I’m really sorry about how long it has been but I’ve informed you all of the hecticness of my life…I don’t think that’s a word but I’m cool enough to make them up. So, this is chapter 4 and hopefully 5 wont take me too long. I’m at the midterm point with my classes so it has been pretty stressful lately. The only reason this is done is because I had nightmares about a burglary in my apartment haha. Pizza thank you for the hug haha. And thank you to anyone who is supporting me. Hopefully the wait was worth is but I’m not sure and if it wasn’t then I apologize. Wow…according to spell check slutty isn’t a word haha!

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