The Bet

Now…for those of you who won’t take offence b/c you really don’t care. Thank you for choosing to read my writing. This is a fictitious story about a girl who was killed in her mother’s womb and therefore traded from heaven to hell b/c of a bet made at creation between God and Lucifer. ^^ Sounds like fun eh? There’s going to be sex, just not right off and all at once. It’ll be a slow build up so bare with me here. Anyway though, I look forward to reviews and lots of compliments and constructive criticism. ^^

IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT: I cut back my disclaimer see ^^^^ I figured it's far enough into the story, ppl would have read it at least once maybe in the first four chapters. Anyway..ty all so much for reviews and lovely rating votes and views. Love u all *hugs* Anyway, this one is kinda short but the end is good..oh REAL good. ^^ *evil laugh* enjoy!




Suri pulled out of sleep slowly, her eyes hurt from crying the night before. As she became coherent she realized she was in her bed. She closed her eyes again, wanting so desperately to fall back to sleep. Fingers gently caressed her cheek, she only sighed to the touch. She knew it was her Master; she was surprised she hadn’t noticed him earlier.

“Why are you so sad Suri? Do I make you that unhappy?”

Her words were only a whisper.

“No Master Lukas, I was lied to.”

She felt the bed shift as he laid down next to her, his head propped up by his hand. She became all too aware of her nakedness then.

“How so?”

She pulled her blanket closer to her for comfort and turned her face away from his.

“You didn’t do what they said you would. I’m not your prize Master.”

He chuckled lightly at her and made her face him again.

“I do treasure you Suri, but you are so new and fragile. You will serve me in due time, until then, learn the halls and the rooms and the expanse of Fallen that I keep. After you become more comfortable I’ll teach you everything that Gadrien couldn’t.”

He lightly kissed her cheek before rising from the bed.

“I’ll let you dress while I go fetch Lillian.”

Suri watched him as he walked across her room to her door. He was beautiful. He struck her as powerful and elegant, leaving no motion wasted. He lightly closed the door behind him as Suri slid out of bed. Her room was beautiful, the walls a deep red wine color to match the dark red rugs. Her bed was huge, with a feather mattress and feather pillows. The comforter was almost purple and the sheets white. The wooden bed frame was polished to a shine and the posts rose high to a silk canopy of purple. She walked over to her dresser to find the simple white gowns from Gadrien’s all folded neatly. She pulled one on and wasn’t surprised not to find undergarments. Suri had enough time to brush her hair and ready herself before Lillian arrived.

“Ready for the tour?”

Suri smiled and nodded, trying to act polite but really wanting nothing more than to ask her why the Master wanted her. They walked through halls and chambers, kitchens and bathrooms, dining rooms and living rooms galore. There was at least three of every type of room she could ever imagine in the mansion, and they visited all of them, except one.

“You can never go in there Suri, that’s one of the Masters rooms. None of his Fallen have ever been in that room, you MUST stay out.”

Suri eyed it curiously; the door was of dark wood, different from the other doors in the mansion. The polish on it made it look as if it was swirling as you walked past it, the light hitting the grains differently. It was also in a darker portion of her new home, this hall was narrower and shorter with fewer doors and only candles to light the way. She wondered if they were maybe underground. As they continued the hall became darker and colder, until they reached a door and a dead end.

“This goes no further, you have no need to know what is beyond that door, it just goes deeper into the bowls of the mansion, nothing but dirt and rats past here.”

As they turned around and reached the forbidden door again it clicked open, and Lukas slid out gracefully, closing the door behind him. He smiled to them and gave them a curt nod.

“That’s enough Lillian, please take her to my garden.”

Lillian curtsied to him lavishly, that grin creeping onto her lips that had been there the night before.

“As you wish my love.”

Lukas stopped and shot her the coldest look Suri had ever seen; it was even more stunning due to the blue of is eyes. She could hear Lillian’s breathing hitch in her voice, she knew she had done wrong.

“You know you do not call me that Lillian. Never call me that again.”

She curtsied low, almost to the point that she might as well have gotten to her knees.

“Yes Master Lukas, my apologies.”

He continued his walk, but his voice carried clear to them as he disappeared.

“You must remember your place Lillian, a Master does not love his Fallen, he keeps them.”

Lillian whipped around angrily once he was out of sight and Suri followed her quickened pace. She was thrown into deep thought by his words, he loved no Fallen, he had no prize to keep, and she would be no different. Lillian took her back to the same hall where her room and Lillian’s room was, at the end there was a door. She led her through and outside. As she stepped out she wasn’t met with the smell of ash and sulfur but of lilacs and roses, apple blossoms and mums. The sun didn’t look as darkened by smoke as it had before, and the ground was carpeted with grass greener than she had ever seen.

“You may stay here as long as you like, and come here as often as you like, this is your place.”

She closed the door behind her and joined her under a nearby tree. Suri sat and played in the clear waters of a small pond, while Lillian laid down beside her.

“So how much did you go for?”

Suri looked at her, confused for a moment.

“What did I go for? Oh, you mean the auction. He paid two hundred.”

Lillian rolled to her side and looked at her curiously.

“Just two hundred, or two hundred thousand?”

Suri found a rock and tossed it into the still waters, small fish darted away from it’s splash.

“Thousand.”

Lillian became placid then, and after a moment of tense silence she rose to leave.

“I must go find Master Lukas.”

Suri didn’t watch her go, she didn’t care for her much, and she found that she became more relaxed when she was alone. She stared at the waters for a long time; the tiny gold and silver fish were the first living things other than people and horses that she had seen. But she wondered if the horses were really living, what kind of animal could really live in hell anyway. As she stared at the waters she wanted to cry. It would be so easy to drown herself, the pond looked deep enough and she didn’t know if she could swim. It was so inviting, she could be a fish.

“Suri?”

She looked up to see Lukas walking towards her, a tired look in his stunning eyes. Lillian must have found him. She only had lifted her head though, and she replaced it resting on her knees, her arms wrapped about her legs.

“What were you thinking about?”

He sat down easily beside her on the grass but she didn’t look to him.

“Nothing.”

“What’s wrong now?”

“Nothing.”

He sighed and lightly ran his fingers through her hair.

“I didn’t know you were so sad when I bought you.”

“Then take me back, Fallen are refundable right?”

He smiled at her jest, but it was a hurt smile, a pity smile.

“Do you truly care for Gadrien over me?”

She finally broke her gaze from the pond and buried her face in her legs until her voice was a muffle.

“At least he loved me.”

There was silence for a time, she thought that she had angered him too until he spoke again.

“Lillian was very upset, she told me what you said.”

Suri lifted her chin back up to her knees again so he could hear her speak more clearly.

“I said nothing.”

“That seems to be your favorite thing to say.”

Suri’s gaze darted to the corner of her eye, just a quick glimpse, but he knew he had struck a cord.

“She feels I value you over her, she feels that a Fallen’s price is their worth to me.”

He ran his fingers through her long hair again.

“And your worth is very high Suri.”

“How so?”

“I pay with money, but I also pay in servitude, it’s like a side bet I have with Drakus. You cost me two hundred thousand dollars, and two hundred thousand years of servitude to Drakus. That is how the game is played at auction. By participating in the auctions I am securing my loyalties to Drakus, we all do, it’s the price we must pay to stay in the good graces of Lucifer.”

There was silence again for a time; Suri didn’t care what Lillian thought of her, or what she would tell the other Fallen. She knew she would, and it would only be a matter of time before she was hated by all she lived with, save her Master who didn’t love her.

“You were so strong at auction Suri, you weren’t afraid and you stared the Masters right in the face, you were so beautiful. What happened to that Fallen?”

Suri could feel the tears mounting up inside her again, why was she crying so much?

“She died…in Drakus’ coach before the auction, after that was just her last fight before passing away.”

“What did Drakus do Suri, what happened?”

She didn’t want to go back again, she knew now that he was right, her fate was set, as he had foretold her.

“He said I had been cheated, that I was lied to. He told me that it didn’t matter what kind of Master I went to it was all the same for him and me. That he’d use me until he grew tired of me and then toss me aside for Lucifer…that I’d…”

The tears began to poor freely now, she didn’t want to become that but she was going to, she knew she was going to.

“That I’d be ripped in half as his cum mixed with my blood.”

He shushed her and pulled her to him as he laid down on the grass. He wiped away her tears gently, as Suri noticed for the first time how rough his hands really were. Her head rested on his arm as his hand caressed her cheek. He kissed her then, ever so lightly before deepening it. Suri welcomed it, although she wasn’t sure what to do, he guided her, gently coaxing her to open her mouth for him. She obeyed him, she wanted to please him, but she also liked the way he felt against her skin. The arm that she had been resting her head on moved as he shifted himself to where he was on his side and somewhat leaning over her. Soon her wrists were in his iron grip above her head, a dark lust look in his stunning eyes as his other hand traveled to the hem of her gown. Suri realized she was breathing heavy now, and so was he, and there was a hot wetness between her legs. His hand slid up the center of her body, lightly brushing her sex before moving along her naval and stomach to her breasts. He pulled her gown up over her head until it laid in a pile at her wrists, his gaze slid smolderingly across her skin. He smiled, please to see her nipples taunt, her breasts crying out for attention. He captured one breast in his mouth, the other his hand as he teased and tasted the soft flesh. Suri gasped at the sensation and arched into it instinctively. It was then that she felt his need throbbing against her hip, she ground against him wanting to drive him on to love her. But this made him stop his ministrations as he released her wrists and gently pulled her gown back over her again. He had regained himself, but his sex was still obviously full and wont of attention. He pulled away from her then and stood.

“Not yet Suri, you have to learn first.”

With that he left her there, panting and wet and aching for more. She sat up with anger and frustration.

“Learn what!?”

FIN: I TOLD you! lol dont hate me too much It'll happen, just not quite yet. >.O expect a chapter in 2 to 3 days. until next time my lovelies xoxoxoxox