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Original - Misc › -Slash - Male/Male
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Adult +
Chapters:
11
Views:
14,811
Reviews:
55
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Currently Reading:
1
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Hormonal Manny
I’m really happy to know that people, however many, actually like this. I know that it has taken me awhile to update, and I’m sorry. I honestly have no excuse; I’ve just been lazy and had a bit of a block. I would like say once again that ideas are accepted and any that I like I WILL add to the story some how. Now onto my responses to reviews.
Avernion- Was it a bad ending? As for the dominant I will reveal that in this chapter cause a lot of people are confused. Rumari started talking like a child was because his demon (if you at all read any Inu Yasha fanfics, its like that) was emerging and I’ll go into more detail with that in this chapter too.
Bcsaturdai- I’m glad you found it. It was fun to write Rumari talking like that.
Natalie Logue- Haha, I actually haven’t read a story where the person on ‘top’ was smaller then the one on the ‘bottom’. All you wish to know shall be revealed. XD
Makki- Thank you. I’m slowly trying to make them longer than the first chapter.
Laie- Haha your welcome! I’m still kind of developing them but he will soon enough.
Haljaruna- Thank you!
Crazykitty- I loved writing that. I felt like a little kid though. Haha.
Cantcount- Thank you. I thought was funny when I put up the AN and I suddenly had a burst of reviews.
Nyks- I tried to get it in fast but I failed. It’ll be a while till I get to sex and babies. Don’t want to rush things.
Anon who usually doesn’t review- Thank you for the encouragement and telling me how I could improve. I’ll certainly try to be more descriptive.
Rin- Thank you I shall.
Sm- I hope I don’t disappoint.
YM- Thanks, I like writing him.
FICTION PRESS
Leivyra- I think I have already messaged you back on your review. I hope the speed though isn’t all that bad, I’m trying to slow things down a bit and hopefully I’m achieving that.
Itchan- I had actually been putting it on while I waited for the activation period thing on fiction press to go by. When I put in chapter 3 I was like, “Holy shiz monkeys I think I can add it too there now!” I forgot my train of thought so I’ll stop now but I hope to keep your attention.
JJLPetersson- And I shall give.
EVERYONE can send their ideas in a review and I will tie as many as I feel like, into the story in a way that is relevant to the story.
Thank you for baring with me just a couple things more. (I know, “YOU HORRIBLE AUTHOR JUST GET ON WITH IT!!” )
“Talkage” (talking)
‘Thinkage’ (thoughts)
*~*~*~*Chapter 4*~*~*~*
‘God I’m tired. What was I doing again?’ Ice blue eyes slowly opened and looked around him. He was on some sort of medical table in a room with tons a jars filled with different colored pastes, liquids, and a few odd shaped solid objects.
He could remember meeting a general, having the feeling to protect someone completely, feeling like he had to prove himself worthy of something, and then… Oh yeah, he was battling with the Dragon King’s General to prove he could be in the man’s rankings somewhere, the General tripping over a tree root, knocking into him forcing them to roll around a bit, and landing with him on top of the General. He was so comfortable for some reason that, after his long journey to get to the Dragons’ territory, he fell asleep. ‘That is very odd. Shouldn’t a General be fluid and graceful, cause that was not it.’
He hopped off the table and headed for the door. Before he could take two steps he heard voices from another room.
“No Tai, I will not let it out.”
“You know it needs to grow up completely. Otherwise you’ll never have total control over it.” The eavesdropper blushed, not getting what the people were talking about.
“I can’t. The only one who could help me with that is my mate, and I don’t think he’s even aware of that at the moment.”
“Mari you haven’t even known the man for more than a few hours. How do you know that he hasn’t realized it?”
“I don’t know Tai. I’ll just have to sort this out later. I suggest you look at your patient before he leaves.”
The eavesdropper went to leave the room again before the men came out and witnessed him listening in. Once again he was stopped by a voice, “Hello. Its good to see you finally awake. I thought you would sleep for days with your level of exhaustion.”
Turning around he came in contact with someone’s chest. He craned his neck to look at the man and had to take a step back in order for his neck to be slightly more comfortable. ‘Fuck I’m short.’
“Well, how do you feel?”
“Uh, um good I guess.”
“Any pain in any place on your body?”
“N-no, I’m fine thank you.”
“Good. Well I’m going to go clean up a couple of things, then me and Rumari will show you to your room,” Tai stated while gesturing in Rumari’s direction then leaving to tidy up somethings.
“You know,” the taller man started, “the whole time you have been here, I don’t think anyone has gotten your name.”
“Oh, my name is Yutha.”
“It’s a pleasure to meet you Yutha.” Rumari held out his right hand.
Meeting the mans handshake, Yutha remembered something from earlier and asked, “What was the score at earlier?”
“I believe it was 2:2. Wh- Ow! What was that for?” He ripped his hand away from the shorter male and looked at the cut on the back of his hand. Yutha had scratched Rumari with one of his claws.
“It is now 3:2. Have I been accepted?” Yutha turned hopeful eyes on Rumari, begging the submissive to induct him into his army.
“I’ll think about it, even though you cheated,” Rumari laughed. “I have a question though. Exactly how tall are you? Its been bugging me for a while now.”
“Around 5’ 8”. I hope my height won’t be a problem.”
“No it won’t , I’ve just been wondering.”
Tai finally came back to the two. “Okay finished, took longer than I thought though. We should be off though cause my mate is waiting.”
“Hey Tai, do you think Manny would be happy that he’s not the shortest anymore?” Rumari chuckled.
Tai’s booming laugh filled the halls of the castle. “He’ll be jumping for joy.” Tai’s face sobered. “Oh goodness I hope he doesn’t jump. That could be really bad.”
“Calm down Tai, Manny will be fine.”
Yutha listened, once again, in on the conversation with interest. “If you don’t mind me asking, who is Manny?”
Tai was the first to answer. “He is my mate. I’ll save you the long list on why I love my mate, cause this is a long list.”
“Here I’ll just say one of them. Manny is four months pregnant with their first child,” Rumari piped.
“That’s wonderful! Do you know what gender the baby is yet?”
“Yes Yutha, we do. When I was doing Manny’s check-up I found that we were having twin girls. It would certainly explain why Manny is as big as he is.” Tai hadn’t noticed that they had reached their destination till a book flew by his head.
“I’M WHAT! YOU TOLD ME I WASN’T FAT! HOW DARE YOU!” Manny screeched in anger then started sobbing, “How could you lie to me? I thought you loved me.”
Tai rushed over to his mate, while getting hard objects chucked at him, and slowly tried to calm him down.
Yutha looked at the couple with a little amusement and admiration. “I hope my mate doesn’t get that emotional while pregnant. With my luck they would knock me out with a lamp,” he laughed.
Rumari looked at him with interest and a little hope. “Would you like children?”
“Definitely. I absolutely love them” A small, content smile graced Yutha’s face, making Rumari’s heart flutter.
Rumari turned back to the expecting mates and watched as Manlira finally calmed down.
“Hey Tai, Manny, I think I’m going to go and show Yutha to his room then go to lay down myself,” said Rumari. He tried to hide an oncoming yawn and succeeded.
Manny spoke up, “No! You just got here. I haven’t seen you in months.”
“That’s cause Tai ordered you to stay in here to be safe.” Manny glared at Tai. “Plus Manny, I’ve been trying to kick my lazy ass soldiers into gear since I took over. They just don’t want to listen.”
“I know what you mean. No one wants to listen to a submissive. They only use us for sex and children.” Tai looked at his mate while Rumari nodded and Yutha looked shocked and thought ‘Rumari’s a submissive? He looks like a dominant. Who woulda thought.’
“I don’t use you like that. You are worth so much more then that to me.”
“Oh stop being so sappy you big buffoon, I know that you do. Anyway Rumari, who’s your new friend?”
“Oh shit sorry! This is Yutha. After he completes his paperwork and medical exam, other than checking for small injuries, he’ll be starting out as one of the guards.”
“And is he.” Rumari nodded in affirmative. He knew that Manny meant mate. “Oh goody. Its nice to meet you Yutha, I’m Manlira, but you can just call me Manny.” Manny held out his hand to Yutha waiting for a handshake.
“Its nice to meet you too.”
“HEY! Finally I’m not the shortest one here! I’m so happy!” Manny was close to bouncing but he knew that his overprotective mate wouldn’t like it so he refrained. “Would you guys like to stay? I made some tea and I have a cake baking so you wouldn’t get hungry or thirsty. Please, cause I’m pregnant, will cry and haven’t had a social life for three months?”
“Okay,” Yutha and Rumari said simultaneously.
~*~*~A Few Hours Later~*~*~
Rumari had shown Yutha to his room, which looked exactly like Rumari’s only smaller and different colors. Rumari had dark purple and lavender sheets on his bed and curtains while the newcomer had sea green and bright blue. Instead of a large rosewood armoire, Yutha had a dresser big enough to hold all of his clothes in the far left corner. His bed was a little smaller than Rumari’s but still as comfortable, and the door leading to the bathroom was next to the bed on the right wall facing the windows on the left. Another difference was the floors. Yutha had ash wood floors and Rumari had dark wood.
“My room is across the hall if you need anything, but you must knock and it better be of the utmost importance. I absolutely despise being woken up for nothing. Do you have any questions before I leave?” Rumari asked.
“Are there any extra blankets?” Yutha questioned, “I tend to get really cold occasionally.”
“No but we can take care of that tomorrow. Which reminds me. Come to my room around noon and I’ll give you the run down of the castle and the rules you must know. Any more questions?”
“No thank you. You can go to your room and sleep if you want to.”
“Okay. Good night.” Rumari left the room, not noticing he took an order with out arguing for once. Walking the short distance to his room he could feel the stress of the day weighing down on him. He started to think about his conversation with Tai earlier that day. ‘He knows I can’t let my demon out. Its way to dangerous without my mate to control it. It’s been hundreds of years since my mother was killed before my eyes. Surely it should have grown up by now. Ugh this is too complicated and I’m too tired to think about it anymore.’
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Okay I really hope no one is disappointed with this. I really have been trying to improve.
Avernion- Was it a bad ending? As for the dominant I will reveal that in this chapter cause a lot of people are confused. Rumari started talking like a child was because his demon (if you at all read any Inu Yasha fanfics, its like that) was emerging and I’ll go into more detail with that in this chapter too.
Bcsaturdai- I’m glad you found it. It was fun to write Rumari talking like that.
Natalie Logue- Haha, I actually haven’t read a story where the person on ‘top’ was smaller then the one on the ‘bottom’. All you wish to know shall be revealed. XD
Makki- Thank you. I’m slowly trying to make them longer than the first chapter.
Laie- Haha your welcome! I’m still kind of developing them but he will soon enough.
Haljaruna- Thank you!
Crazykitty- I loved writing that. I felt like a little kid though. Haha.
Cantcount- Thank you. I thought was funny when I put up the AN and I suddenly had a burst of reviews.
Nyks- I tried to get it in fast but I failed. It’ll be a while till I get to sex and babies. Don’t want to rush things.
Anon who usually doesn’t review- Thank you for the encouragement and telling me how I could improve. I’ll certainly try to be more descriptive.
Rin- Thank you I shall.
Sm- I hope I don’t disappoint.
YM- Thanks, I like writing him.
FICTION PRESS
Leivyra- I think I have already messaged you back on your review. I hope the speed though isn’t all that bad, I’m trying to slow things down a bit and hopefully I’m achieving that.
Itchan- I had actually been putting it on while I waited for the activation period thing on fiction press to go by. When I put in chapter 3 I was like, “Holy shiz monkeys I think I can add it too there now!” I forgot my train of thought so I’ll stop now but I hope to keep your attention.
JJLPetersson- And I shall give.
EVERYONE can send their ideas in a review and I will tie as many as I feel like, into the story in a way that is relevant to the story.
Thank you for baring with me just a couple things more. (I know, “YOU HORRIBLE AUTHOR JUST GET ON WITH IT!!” )
“Talkage” (talking)
‘Thinkage’ (thoughts)
*~*~*~*Chapter 4*~*~*~*
‘God I’m tired. What was I doing again?’ Ice blue eyes slowly opened and looked around him. He was on some sort of medical table in a room with tons a jars filled with different colored pastes, liquids, and a few odd shaped solid objects.
He could remember meeting a general, having the feeling to protect someone completely, feeling like he had to prove himself worthy of something, and then… Oh yeah, he was battling with the Dragon King’s General to prove he could be in the man’s rankings somewhere, the General tripping over a tree root, knocking into him forcing them to roll around a bit, and landing with him on top of the General. He was so comfortable for some reason that, after his long journey to get to the Dragons’ territory, he fell asleep. ‘That is very odd. Shouldn’t a General be fluid and graceful, cause that was not it.’
He hopped off the table and headed for the door. Before he could take two steps he heard voices from another room.
“No Tai, I will not let it out.”
“You know it needs to grow up completely. Otherwise you’ll never have total control over it.” The eavesdropper blushed, not getting what the people were talking about.
“I can’t. The only one who could help me with that is my mate, and I don’t think he’s even aware of that at the moment.”
“Mari you haven’t even known the man for more than a few hours. How do you know that he hasn’t realized it?”
“I don’t know Tai. I’ll just have to sort this out later. I suggest you look at your patient before he leaves.”
The eavesdropper went to leave the room again before the men came out and witnessed him listening in. Once again he was stopped by a voice, “Hello. Its good to see you finally awake. I thought you would sleep for days with your level of exhaustion.”
Turning around he came in contact with someone’s chest. He craned his neck to look at the man and had to take a step back in order for his neck to be slightly more comfortable. ‘Fuck I’m short.’
“Well, how do you feel?”
“Uh, um good I guess.”
“Any pain in any place on your body?”
“N-no, I’m fine thank you.”
“Good. Well I’m going to go clean up a couple of things, then me and Rumari will show you to your room,” Tai stated while gesturing in Rumari’s direction then leaving to tidy up somethings.
“You know,” the taller man started, “the whole time you have been here, I don’t think anyone has gotten your name.”
“Oh, my name is Yutha.”
“It’s a pleasure to meet you Yutha.” Rumari held out his right hand.
Meeting the mans handshake, Yutha remembered something from earlier and asked, “What was the score at earlier?”
“I believe it was 2:2. Wh- Ow! What was that for?” He ripped his hand away from the shorter male and looked at the cut on the back of his hand. Yutha had scratched Rumari with one of his claws.
“It is now 3:2. Have I been accepted?” Yutha turned hopeful eyes on Rumari, begging the submissive to induct him into his army.
“I’ll think about it, even though you cheated,” Rumari laughed. “I have a question though. Exactly how tall are you? Its been bugging me for a while now.”
“Around 5’ 8”. I hope my height won’t be a problem.”
“No it won’t , I’ve just been wondering.”
Tai finally came back to the two. “Okay finished, took longer than I thought though. We should be off though cause my mate is waiting.”
“Hey Tai, do you think Manny would be happy that he’s not the shortest anymore?” Rumari chuckled.
Tai’s booming laugh filled the halls of the castle. “He’ll be jumping for joy.” Tai’s face sobered. “Oh goodness I hope he doesn’t jump. That could be really bad.”
“Calm down Tai, Manny will be fine.”
Yutha listened, once again, in on the conversation with interest. “If you don’t mind me asking, who is Manny?”
Tai was the first to answer. “He is my mate. I’ll save you the long list on why I love my mate, cause this is a long list.”
“Here I’ll just say one of them. Manny is four months pregnant with their first child,” Rumari piped.
“That’s wonderful! Do you know what gender the baby is yet?”
“Yes Yutha, we do. When I was doing Manny’s check-up I found that we were having twin girls. It would certainly explain why Manny is as big as he is.” Tai hadn’t noticed that they had reached their destination till a book flew by his head.
“I’M WHAT! YOU TOLD ME I WASN’T FAT! HOW DARE YOU!” Manny screeched in anger then started sobbing, “How could you lie to me? I thought you loved me.”
Tai rushed over to his mate, while getting hard objects chucked at him, and slowly tried to calm him down.
Yutha looked at the couple with a little amusement and admiration. “I hope my mate doesn’t get that emotional while pregnant. With my luck they would knock me out with a lamp,” he laughed.
Rumari looked at him with interest and a little hope. “Would you like children?”
“Definitely. I absolutely love them” A small, content smile graced Yutha’s face, making Rumari’s heart flutter.
Rumari turned back to the expecting mates and watched as Manlira finally calmed down.
“Hey Tai, Manny, I think I’m going to go and show Yutha to his room then go to lay down myself,” said Rumari. He tried to hide an oncoming yawn and succeeded.
Manny spoke up, “No! You just got here. I haven’t seen you in months.”
“That’s cause Tai ordered you to stay in here to be safe.” Manny glared at Tai. “Plus Manny, I’ve been trying to kick my lazy ass soldiers into gear since I took over. They just don’t want to listen.”
“I know what you mean. No one wants to listen to a submissive. They only use us for sex and children.” Tai looked at his mate while Rumari nodded and Yutha looked shocked and thought ‘Rumari’s a submissive? He looks like a dominant. Who woulda thought.’
“I don’t use you like that. You are worth so much more then that to me.”
“Oh stop being so sappy you big buffoon, I know that you do. Anyway Rumari, who’s your new friend?”
“Oh shit sorry! This is Yutha. After he completes his paperwork and medical exam, other than checking for small injuries, he’ll be starting out as one of the guards.”
“And is he.” Rumari nodded in affirmative. He knew that Manny meant mate. “Oh goody. Its nice to meet you Yutha, I’m Manlira, but you can just call me Manny.” Manny held out his hand to Yutha waiting for a handshake.
“Its nice to meet you too.”
“HEY! Finally I’m not the shortest one here! I’m so happy!” Manny was close to bouncing but he knew that his overprotective mate wouldn’t like it so he refrained. “Would you guys like to stay? I made some tea and I have a cake baking so you wouldn’t get hungry or thirsty. Please, cause I’m pregnant, will cry and haven’t had a social life for three months?”
“Okay,” Yutha and Rumari said simultaneously.
~*~*~A Few Hours Later~*~*~
Rumari had shown Yutha to his room, which looked exactly like Rumari’s only smaller and different colors. Rumari had dark purple and lavender sheets on his bed and curtains while the newcomer had sea green and bright blue. Instead of a large rosewood armoire, Yutha had a dresser big enough to hold all of his clothes in the far left corner. His bed was a little smaller than Rumari’s but still as comfortable, and the door leading to the bathroom was next to the bed on the right wall facing the windows on the left. Another difference was the floors. Yutha had ash wood floors and Rumari had dark wood.
“My room is across the hall if you need anything, but you must knock and it better be of the utmost importance. I absolutely despise being woken up for nothing. Do you have any questions before I leave?” Rumari asked.
“Are there any extra blankets?” Yutha questioned, “I tend to get really cold occasionally.”
“No but we can take care of that tomorrow. Which reminds me. Come to my room around noon and I’ll give you the run down of the castle and the rules you must know. Any more questions?”
“No thank you. You can go to your room and sleep if you want to.”
“Okay. Good night.” Rumari left the room, not noticing he took an order with out arguing for once. Walking the short distance to his room he could feel the stress of the day weighing down on him. He started to think about his conversation with Tai earlier that day. ‘He knows I can’t let my demon out. Its way to dangerous without my mate to control it. It’s been hundreds of years since my mother was killed before my eyes. Surely it should have grown up by now. Ugh this is too complicated and I’m too tired to think about it anymore.’
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Okay I really hope no one is disappointed with this. I really have been trying to improve.