My Forbidden Geisha Girl
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Category:
Original - Misc › -FemSlash - Female/Female
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
4
Views:
1,916
Reviews:
7
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
Discovery
Well, this is my story-poem. If you're wondering what that is, it’s a series of poems in place of chapters, which will tell the story. Reviews are greatly appreciated. A good review will get you a graceful geisha dance and lemon cookies, so please review.
Thanks to those that reviewed, specially to those repeat reviewers!! You guys rock!!
Please, everyone review more, so I know whether to continue with the story.
*Sparkly kitten eyes*
Discovery
Pretty angel
My little demon
Beautiful in her temptation
Pure in her white paint, hiding the scars of sin
Sin which I want to bathe in
Trailing my fingers through her hair, across her thigh
Learning each crevice and ticklish place
Discovering wet, silken depths
Feeling her breathy moans from inside
Feeling her body’s sweet contractions as I worship her
How I wished to discover that
Soon I shall
My lovely one has discovered my secret
It slipped from me in a jealous rage
Me, screaming at my angel
Crying against her leaving me for the man outside the gate
Shocked, her dark eyes widened, almost comically
Her pert mouth, shaping a perfect ‘O’
The sound of my shaking hands slapping over my face
Seems the only noise in the whole of Japan
My world crumbles
Dissolving like rice paper on my tongue
My dream is ruined; I shall never hold my Geisha girl
She, my lovely Miyuki-chan, watches me with wary eyes
Finally voicing a single question
“Do you mean that?”
Not the peal of doom I expected, but a divine chorus
Mutely nodding, I tremble like a leaf in a tsunami
She gazes out at me from under her dusky lashes,
At a little servant girl, coyly like she would a man
Smiling, she turns and beckons me, as she glides across the courtyard
I follow, feeling for the first time real hope
Maybe, she will love me as I love her
And if not,
At least I’ll be allowed to worship at her delicate feet
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P.s. Well, I don't know if this shall be the last chapter or if I'll contiune. What do you think?
***Remember to review on your way out. Arigato gozaimasu!!!
Thanks to those that reviewed, specially to those repeat reviewers!! You guys rock!!
Please, everyone review more, so I know whether to continue with the story.
*Sparkly kitten eyes*
Discovery
Pretty angel
My little demon
Beautiful in her temptation
Pure in her white paint, hiding the scars of sin
Sin which I want to bathe in
Trailing my fingers through her hair, across her thigh
Learning each crevice and ticklish place
Discovering wet, silken depths
Feeling her breathy moans from inside
Feeling her body’s sweet contractions as I worship her
How I wished to discover that
Soon I shall
My lovely one has discovered my secret
It slipped from me in a jealous rage
Me, screaming at my angel
Crying against her leaving me for the man outside the gate
Shocked, her dark eyes widened, almost comically
Her pert mouth, shaping a perfect ‘O’
The sound of my shaking hands slapping over my face
Seems the only noise in the whole of Japan
My world crumbles
Dissolving like rice paper on my tongue
My dream is ruined; I shall never hold my Geisha girl
She, my lovely Miyuki-chan, watches me with wary eyes
Finally voicing a single question
“Do you mean that?”
Not the peal of doom I expected, but a divine chorus
Mutely nodding, I tremble like a leaf in a tsunami
She gazes out at me from under her dusky lashes,
At a little servant girl, coyly like she would a man
Smiling, she turns and beckons me, as she glides across the courtyard
I follow, feeling for the first time real hope
Maybe, she will love me as I love her
And if not,
At least I’ll be allowed to worship at her delicate feet
********************* **********************
************************************
P.s. Well, I don't know if this shall be the last chapter or if I'll contiune. What do you think?
***Remember to review on your way out. Arigato gozaimasu!!!