Don't Get Carried Away
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Erotica › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
4
Views:
2,047
Reviews:
0
Recommended:
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Currently Reading:
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
Don't Get Carried Away, Act 4
(c)2005 by Josh Cohen. May not be reprinted, except for personal use.
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Pariah
Jason moaned low in his throat as he felt his lower stomach touch Dina’s, her thighs soft against him. She arched and moaned back at him, her eyes closed. “Okay?” he asked through clenched teeth.
“Okay,” Dina confirmed.
Silk
It felt nothing like the last time. Her body clutched at the hardness of Jason’s flesh inside her as he slowly slid in and out of her, his head, a uniform smoothness because of the condom, making an entirely different sensation erupt each time he hit the spot inside of her. She reached down to touch her clit and heard Jason chuckle. “What?”
“I could do that, if you want.”
But she stopped. “No, it’s all right. I don’t think I’ll be able to have another orgasm.”
Jason leaned down and kissed her nose, then her lips. “I know I will. Should I stop? Should we do it another time, when we can both come?”
Dina shook her head. “Not on your life.”
Pariah
Jason continued moving in and out of Dina in slow, measured strokes. It felt wonderful, to be sure, but he was pretty sure he could keep from coming for a while.
Until Dina put her hand on his chest. “What is it?”
She smiled. “Hold yourself up. I want to try something.”
“Okay.”
Jason pressed his hands into the bed and lifted himself up on his knees until just the head of him was inside her. Then he watched as Dina arched herself upward, taking him into her body in quick, smooth thrusts of her hips.
“Wow.”
She peeked at him. “You ain’t seen nothing yet.”
Silk
Dina let her power flow into her body, let herself start to get faster, taking Jason from underneath. He held himself in position, but it was an effort; she could see his shoulder muscles clenching, and his teeth as well. He was letting out low moans every few strokes, moans answered by Dina’s.
“I think I was wrong,” she said, her voice high and fast. “I think I can come again.”
Pariah
A few moments passed before Jason grabbed Dina’s hips and held her against him, held himself inside her. “Can I try doing it more? You know, harder?”
She nodded. “I’ll tell you if you hurt me.”
Silk
But it didn’t hurt, Dina realized. The feel of Jason’s balls hitting the cheeks of her ass, her thighs and legs around his waist as he thrust into her, the way his intense eyes stared down into hers as he plunged himself in and out of her body... all of it was leading to a massive orgasm. She could feel it on the horizon, like a thunderstorm.
And through it all, she was moaning, loud and high, her body at high speed.
Pariah
Jason felt Dina’s body start to pulse. He felt her muscles rippling inside her, fluttering against him as she let herself go, letting her power out.
He responded with his own power, a pale green corona forming around his body.
Silk
Dina gasped out loud, her eyes snapping open as she caught the green light forming around Jason. But everywhere he touched her, it felt as though liquid warmth was rippling along her skin. Especially inside her body.
Pariah
He felt Dina pulling at him, arching into him, and then she clutched her body to his, her nipples tight and hard against his chest, her teeth digging into his shoulder as she clamped down on him and came, her high-pitched screams muffled but still sharp as her teeth and her nails and her heels dug into him.
Silk
It would have been pretty to think that Jason could come at the same time their first time together, but Dina was too tired now to think about it. Her body was still fluttering at high speed, her muscles twitching and throbbing as he thrust into her, hard enough that it should have hurt, but she felt nothing except pleasure. It was as if the harder he took her, the better his power made it feel.
Pariah
Jason felt himself getting close and he stared down into Dina’s face, catching her eyes before dipping his head and kissing her, his tongue darting into her mouth in time with his body plunging into her.
Silk
Dina very nearly came again, just from the feeling of Jason’s kiss, but she couldn’t bring herself to the edge no matter how much she wanted it.
Pariah
Jason threw his head back and cried out, a guttural sound, and with a final thrust his orgasm exploded out of his body, Dina’s flesh clinging to him tightly, suckling him, milking him, taking him into her.
Silk
Dina grabbed Jason’s hands and held them in hers, grinding her hips and her flesh against his lower body, the clenching of his length as he spurted into her giving her hot little frissons of pleasure.
Pariah
Jason collapsed on his side, half-on and half-off the edge of the bed. Mechanically, he stripped off the condom and dropped it on the floor next to the bed, right about where the shirt should have been from earlier.
Silk
Dina stared at Jason, his face shining with sweat, his eyes unfocused, the corona around his body fading away, as if he was pulling it back into himself.
Pariah
Jason stared at Dina, her forehead damp, her hair curling against it, her chest rising and falling faster than it should have as she tried to pull herself back down to a normal speed.
Silk
“Thank you,” she whispered, and then she kissed him again, long and slow, no powers, just the two of them, before curling up against his body and dropping off to sleep.
Pariah
When Jason opened his eyes, he saw Dina next to him, already awake. His body clock told him it was about an hour later; he wondered how long she’d been up.
“Something on your mind?” he asked after kissing the top of her head.
“I was just curious. Was that your first time?” Dina asked, tentative, nothing at all like the confident young woman she was. “I mean, have you ever..?”
Jason nodded. “But the first time wasn’t nearly as awesome as this was.”
She rolled onto her side, propped up on her elbow, his body warm next to hers, as warm as the wall was cold each time it brushed against her bottom. “Who was it?”
“I’m kind of embarrassed about it,” he said, turning his head to meet her eyes with his, the faint light from the desk lamp outlining them enough to see each other. “I don’t think I should’ve done it.”
“Tell me about it,” she said softly, free hand reaching up to cup his cheek. “I’d really like to know.”
And Jason told Dina about the girl who had taken his virginity, the girl who had used him for her own ends. And Jason and Dina continued to explore their sexuality through their last year at the Base and the first year after that, until they drifted apart and Dina entered into a relationship with a mutual friend of theirs, Chris Anders, who had powers of his own.
But, as it has been said, sometimes things just... happen...
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A/N: If anyone knows what movie the line “Sometimes things just... happen...” comes from, please e-mail me and let me know. It’s going to bug me forever otherwise.
Now, a few things:
1. I tried to make this a fairly-accurate portrayal of two teenagers who\'ve both had sex before -- neither of them enjoying it the way they should have -- acting on the fact that they love each other and want to have sex now.
2. Once I figured out the sex part, I started bringing in the powers part of it. Dina\'s power -- the speed -- is easier for her to call than Jason\'s -- the corona of strength/defense. Therefore, when she starts to get aroused, she starts to lose control; however, even when Jason is coming, he can only make his power rise if he wants it to rise.
3. When I first had sex, the order went: touching her, intercourse, going down on her, her touching me, her giving me head. Not all in the same night -- it was protracted over the course of a few months. That\'s why Jason is willing to go down on Dina, and why he accepts the fact that she doesn\'t want to go down on him.
4. Dina is more intelligent -- book-smart, that is -- than Jason, even though Jason is more street-smart and intuitive. It\'s kind of like the Harry/Hermione ship in HP Fan Fiction. Dina asks questions, but Jason intuitively learns the answers from reactions.
5. Sex between young people with \"special\" powers is harder to write than I thought.
This is, for the time being, the last I will write with these two characters, at least on AFF. At some point in the future, when I\'ve written more of the actual book that this scene will never appear in, I may come back and learn more about the characters by having them have sex again.
Hope it\'s been enjoyable.
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Pariah
Jason moaned low in his throat as he felt his lower stomach touch Dina’s, her thighs soft against him. She arched and moaned back at him, her eyes closed. “Okay?” he asked through clenched teeth.
“Okay,” Dina confirmed.
Silk
It felt nothing like the last time. Her body clutched at the hardness of Jason’s flesh inside her as he slowly slid in and out of her, his head, a uniform smoothness because of the condom, making an entirely different sensation erupt each time he hit the spot inside of her. She reached down to touch her clit and heard Jason chuckle. “What?”
“I could do that, if you want.”
But she stopped. “No, it’s all right. I don’t think I’ll be able to have another orgasm.”
Jason leaned down and kissed her nose, then her lips. “I know I will. Should I stop? Should we do it another time, when we can both come?”
Dina shook her head. “Not on your life.”
Pariah
Jason continued moving in and out of Dina in slow, measured strokes. It felt wonderful, to be sure, but he was pretty sure he could keep from coming for a while.
Until Dina put her hand on his chest. “What is it?”
She smiled. “Hold yourself up. I want to try something.”
“Okay.”
Jason pressed his hands into the bed and lifted himself up on his knees until just the head of him was inside her. Then he watched as Dina arched herself upward, taking him into her body in quick, smooth thrusts of her hips.
“Wow.”
She peeked at him. “You ain’t seen nothing yet.”
Silk
Dina let her power flow into her body, let herself start to get faster, taking Jason from underneath. He held himself in position, but it was an effort; she could see his shoulder muscles clenching, and his teeth as well. He was letting out low moans every few strokes, moans answered by Dina’s.
“I think I was wrong,” she said, her voice high and fast. “I think I can come again.”
Pariah
A few moments passed before Jason grabbed Dina’s hips and held her against him, held himself inside her. “Can I try doing it more? You know, harder?”
She nodded. “I’ll tell you if you hurt me.”
Silk
But it didn’t hurt, Dina realized. The feel of Jason’s balls hitting the cheeks of her ass, her thighs and legs around his waist as he thrust into her, the way his intense eyes stared down into hers as he plunged himself in and out of her body... all of it was leading to a massive orgasm. She could feel it on the horizon, like a thunderstorm.
And through it all, she was moaning, loud and high, her body at high speed.
Pariah
Jason felt Dina’s body start to pulse. He felt her muscles rippling inside her, fluttering against him as she let herself go, letting her power out.
He responded with his own power, a pale green corona forming around his body.
Silk
Dina gasped out loud, her eyes snapping open as she caught the green light forming around Jason. But everywhere he touched her, it felt as though liquid warmth was rippling along her skin. Especially inside her body.
Pariah
He felt Dina pulling at him, arching into him, and then she clutched her body to his, her nipples tight and hard against his chest, her teeth digging into his shoulder as she clamped down on him and came, her high-pitched screams muffled but still sharp as her teeth and her nails and her heels dug into him.
Silk
It would have been pretty to think that Jason could come at the same time their first time together, but Dina was too tired now to think about it. Her body was still fluttering at high speed, her muscles twitching and throbbing as he thrust into her, hard enough that it should have hurt, but she felt nothing except pleasure. It was as if the harder he took her, the better his power made it feel.
Pariah
Jason felt himself getting close and he stared down into Dina’s face, catching her eyes before dipping his head and kissing her, his tongue darting into her mouth in time with his body plunging into her.
Silk
Dina very nearly came again, just from the feeling of Jason’s kiss, but she couldn’t bring herself to the edge no matter how much she wanted it.
Pariah
Jason threw his head back and cried out, a guttural sound, and with a final thrust his orgasm exploded out of his body, Dina’s flesh clinging to him tightly, suckling him, milking him, taking him into her.
Silk
Dina grabbed Jason’s hands and held them in hers, grinding her hips and her flesh against his lower body, the clenching of his length as he spurted into her giving her hot little frissons of pleasure.
Pariah
Jason collapsed on his side, half-on and half-off the edge of the bed. Mechanically, he stripped off the condom and dropped it on the floor next to the bed, right about where the shirt should have been from earlier.
Silk
Dina stared at Jason, his face shining with sweat, his eyes unfocused, the corona around his body fading away, as if he was pulling it back into himself.
Pariah
Jason stared at Dina, her forehead damp, her hair curling against it, her chest rising and falling faster than it should have as she tried to pull herself back down to a normal speed.
Silk
“Thank you,” she whispered, and then she kissed him again, long and slow, no powers, just the two of them, before curling up against his body and dropping off to sleep.
Pariah
When Jason opened his eyes, he saw Dina next to him, already awake. His body clock told him it was about an hour later; he wondered how long she’d been up.
“Something on your mind?” he asked after kissing the top of her head.
“I was just curious. Was that your first time?” Dina asked, tentative, nothing at all like the confident young woman she was. “I mean, have you ever..?”
Jason nodded. “But the first time wasn’t nearly as awesome as this was.”
She rolled onto her side, propped up on her elbow, his body warm next to hers, as warm as the wall was cold each time it brushed against her bottom. “Who was it?”
“I’m kind of embarrassed about it,” he said, turning his head to meet her eyes with his, the faint light from the desk lamp outlining them enough to see each other. “I don’t think I should’ve done it.”
“Tell me about it,” she said softly, free hand reaching up to cup his cheek. “I’d really like to know.”
And Jason told Dina about the girl who had taken his virginity, the girl who had used him for her own ends. And Jason and Dina continued to explore their sexuality through their last year at the Base and the first year after that, until they drifted apart and Dina entered into a relationship with a mutual friend of theirs, Chris Anders, who had powers of his own.
But, as it has been said, sometimes things just... happen...
********************************************
A/N: If anyone knows what movie the line “Sometimes things just... happen...” comes from, please e-mail me and let me know. It’s going to bug me forever otherwise.
Now, a few things:
1. I tried to make this a fairly-accurate portrayal of two teenagers who\'ve both had sex before -- neither of them enjoying it the way they should have -- acting on the fact that they love each other and want to have sex now.
2. Once I figured out the sex part, I started bringing in the powers part of it. Dina\'s power -- the speed -- is easier for her to call than Jason\'s -- the corona of strength/defense. Therefore, when she starts to get aroused, she starts to lose control; however, even when Jason is coming, he can only make his power rise if he wants it to rise.
3. When I first had sex, the order went: touching her, intercourse, going down on her, her touching me, her giving me head. Not all in the same night -- it was protracted over the course of a few months. That\'s why Jason is willing to go down on Dina, and why he accepts the fact that she doesn\'t want to go down on him.
4. Dina is more intelligent -- book-smart, that is -- than Jason, even though Jason is more street-smart and intuitive. It\'s kind of like the Harry/Hermione ship in HP Fan Fiction. Dina asks questions, but Jason intuitively learns the answers from reactions.
5. Sex between young people with \"special\" powers is harder to write than I thought.
This is, for the time being, the last I will write with these two characters, at least on AFF. At some point in the future, when I\'ve written more of the actual book that this scene will never appear in, I may come back and learn more about the characters by having them have sex again.
Hope it\'s been enjoyable.