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Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
3
Views:
654
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3
Recommended:
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Chapter 3: Happiness and Chaos
monday, 5th May, 2008
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Disclaimer: This is my own work. It is more of a journal entry than a story, as it is based on true events of my past. I am writing this story from my point of view (as Brandon). I have changed some of the names in the story as per the request of some of the people involved. Everyone that was involved in the events of the story know that I am making NO PROFIT from this endeavor and thereby know that they will be recieving no moneys from this story. Only the basis for this story are true events... but MOST of this story is fiction. Please do not use it, in part, or in it's entirity without my permission. Please review as you read, also because this is my first non-poetry work, so I need to know if it is good or not. Thank you for your patience and the time you spend reading it. Be honest in your review, not cruel.
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Chapter 3: Happiness and Chaos
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Later that night I got a phone call from someone who's voice I didn't recognize... it was Allison! She told me how she had called Jeanette to ask her for my number because she wanted to talk to me. Allison didn't tell Jeanette who's number she was trying to get but Jeanette said that based on the night before, that it was pretty obvious who she was trying to contact and she gave Allison my home phone #. We talked for about 45 minutes then I couldn't stand it any longer and I asked her to meet me at the local park. When I got about 2 blocks from the park, I saw her walking towards me and I changed directions so that I would walk straight for her.
Allison and I were together for the rest of that day! I introduced her to the rest of my family and then we left for a walk, (yes another walk!) We went to her house where I was introduced to her Mother and little sister, Mandy. We spent that night at her house, talking in her room until, yet again, we fell asleep together. The next morning we got up early and left for my house so that I could change clothes and shower for the day.
For the next few weeks, we were just as inseperable as we were those first few days. We were happy together and when we were apart we were not happy unless we were talking on the phone. I loved her soo much that it hurt to be away from her.
Now, of course, I was young and naive and didn't really have a sense of the world, but I knew that I wanted to be with her for the rest of my life. I mean, I was only 15 years old, so what the hell did I know about being married or being responsible and supporting a family?! In spite of this ENORMOUS un-learned point of view I asked her to marry me. She said yes and we were married a week later through a religious ceremony, "Year-and-a-Day", and we were very happy with our lives!
A couple days after the "Wedding" we were over at Amber's place, Amber was Jeanette's friend and the one who married us, having dinner, I cooked. We were watching movies during dinner and after dinner Amber pulled out her Ouija Board and said that it would be fun to play on it for a little bit before bed. We began trying to find someone through the Ouija board and something went wrong... We found someone but it wasn't who we were looking for! Allison started convulsing as though she were having a seizure. We got her through that and then put the ouija board away as we had decided that it was time for bed. I started gathering dishes up to put them in the sink and Allison helped. While I was gethering the second round of dishes, Allison was in the kitchen slamming a steak knife very aggressively into a wooden cutting board. I put the dishes in the sink and turned to ask her if she was alright when she came at me with the knife as though she were going to kill me! Jeanette and Amber tackled her and took her into the bedroom. They told me to get a cup of ice cold water and bring it to them. I had no idea what was going on or how in the world a cup of cold water was going to help but I got the water, all the while protesting that what Allison was doing was not her and that a cup of water would not help!!
When I got back to the room with the cup, I handed it to Jeanette and Amber dipped her fingers in, and sprinkled the water on Allison's face. The water, when it hit her face, blistered her skin and turned to steam before my very eyes! I was now scared shitless because you read about this kind of thing but you never really expect that it is real, and then it happens to you! It was mind-blowing!
The whole time that Allison was trying to kill me her voice sounded strange and before she was splashed with water she was asked who she was and why she was trying to kill me. The voice said that it was "HX" and that I didn't deserve to live after what I had done to him in another life. I had no idea what this "HX" was talking about and was even more scared and confused than ever. I went out of the bedroom and into the livingroom, turned on the stereo, sat down on the couch and began to cry my eyes out from confusion, anger and the sudden feeling that I was going to lose my Allison.
The next day when I tried to ask Allison why she had acted that way and done what she had done, she asked me what I was talking about and that the last thing from the night before that she remembered was helping me gather up dishes. I recounted the eveing in question to her and she went to Amber and Jeanette with angry, confused tears asking them what was going on, only to be told the same story that I had told as well as being told that they weren't sure what or why it had happened.
Needless to say the next few days were VERY awkward for Allison and I, but we still were not willing to be apart any more than absolutely necessary. We made it through another few months together and she broke up with me because of something that was told to her (a threat), made by her uncle, towards me...
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Disclaimer: This is my own work. It is more of a journal entry than a story, as it is based on true events of my past. I am writing this story from my point of view (as Brandon). I have changed some of the names in the story as per the request of some of the people involved. Everyone that was involved in the events of the story know that I am making NO PROFIT from this endeavor and thereby know that they will be recieving no moneys from this story. Only the basis for this story are true events... but MOST of this story is fiction. Please do not use it, in part, or in it's entirity without my permission. Please review as you read, also because this is my first non-poetry work, so I need to know if it is good or not. Thank you for your patience and the time you spend reading it. Be honest in your review, not cruel.
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Chapter 3: Happiness and Chaos
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Later that night I got a phone call from someone who's voice I didn't recognize... it was Allison! She told me how she had called Jeanette to ask her for my number because she wanted to talk to me. Allison didn't tell Jeanette who's number she was trying to get but Jeanette said that based on the night before, that it was pretty obvious who she was trying to contact and she gave Allison my home phone #. We talked for about 45 minutes then I couldn't stand it any longer and I asked her to meet me at the local park. When I got about 2 blocks from the park, I saw her walking towards me and I changed directions so that I would walk straight for her.
Allison and I were together for the rest of that day! I introduced her to the rest of my family and then we left for a walk, (yes another walk!) We went to her house where I was introduced to her Mother and little sister, Mandy. We spent that night at her house, talking in her room until, yet again, we fell asleep together. The next morning we got up early and left for my house so that I could change clothes and shower for the day.
For the next few weeks, we were just as inseperable as we were those first few days. We were happy together and when we were apart we were not happy unless we were talking on the phone. I loved her soo much that it hurt to be away from her.
Now, of course, I was young and naive and didn't really have a sense of the world, but I knew that I wanted to be with her for the rest of my life. I mean, I was only 15 years old, so what the hell did I know about being married or being responsible and supporting a family?! In spite of this ENORMOUS un-learned point of view I asked her to marry me. She said yes and we were married a week later through a religious ceremony, "Year-and-a-Day", and we were very happy with our lives!
A couple days after the "Wedding" we were over at Amber's place, Amber was Jeanette's friend and the one who married us, having dinner, I cooked. We were watching movies during dinner and after dinner Amber pulled out her Ouija Board and said that it would be fun to play on it for a little bit before bed. We began trying to find someone through the Ouija board and something went wrong... We found someone but it wasn't who we were looking for! Allison started convulsing as though she were having a seizure. We got her through that and then put the ouija board away as we had decided that it was time for bed. I started gathering dishes up to put them in the sink and Allison helped. While I was gethering the second round of dishes, Allison was in the kitchen slamming a steak knife very aggressively into a wooden cutting board. I put the dishes in the sink and turned to ask her if she was alright when she came at me with the knife as though she were going to kill me! Jeanette and Amber tackled her and took her into the bedroom. They told me to get a cup of ice cold water and bring it to them. I had no idea what was going on or how in the world a cup of cold water was going to help but I got the water, all the while protesting that what Allison was doing was not her and that a cup of water would not help!!
When I got back to the room with the cup, I handed it to Jeanette and Amber dipped her fingers in, and sprinkled the water on Allison's face. The water, when it hit her face, blistered her skin and turned to steam before my very eyes! I was now scared shitless because you read about this kind of thing but you never really expect that it is real, and then it happens to you! It was mind-blowing!
The whole time that Allison was trying to kill me her voice sounded strange and before she was splashed with water she was asked who she was and why she was trying to kill me. The voice said that it was "HX" and that I didn't deserve to live after what I had done to him in another life. I had no idea what this "HX" was talking about and was even more scared and confused than ever. I went out of the bedroom and into the livingroom, turned on the stereo, sat down on the couch and began to cry my eyes out from confusion, anger and the sudden feeling that I was going to lose my Allison.
The next day when I tried to ask Allison why she had acted that way and done what she had done, she asked me what I was talking about and that the last thing from the night before that she remembered was helping me gather up dishes. I recounted the eveing in question to her and she went to Amber and Jeanette with angry, confused tears asking them what was going on, only to be told the same story that I had told as well as being told that they weren't sure what or why it had happened.
Needless to say the next few days were VERY awkward for Allison and I, but we still were not willing to be apart any more than absolutely necessary. We made it through another few months together and she broke up with me because of something that was told to her (a threat), made by her uncle, towards me...