Luscious (COMPLETED) new a/n SEQUEL COMING SOON!
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Category:
Erotica › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
10
Views:
5,528
Reviews:
31
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
The Cat's out of the Bag
SPECIAL THANKS: to everyone who reviewed, I love the constructive criticizm and questions that I will answer just below.
Q&A:
BCM asked:
Q:"Just one quick thing though you said in the first chapter "The man had tortured him for three days, a time in which he mutilated parts of his body, even going as far as castrating him." If the man castrated him how could he get an erection like you wrote about in chapter 2(First Impressions)?"
A:Don't worry, I did my homework ^^. When a male is castrated in his prepubecant years he still has a sexual drive, although minimized, he is capable of getting an erection and even orgasming. But at the same time his body no longer produces sperm so nothing is released. If he had been castrated after reaching puberty the possibility of an erection is near impossible. I hope that clears up the confusion thank you so much for asking ^^.
And CaFFy:
thank you so much for pointing that out, after you said that about my sentence structure I began to annoy myself. ^^ But this chapter had been writen even before I posted any of this on AFF.net so I haven't had the time yet to go back through and try to repair my mistakes. But I do appreciate the advice and I plan to follow it as closely as I can. I hope this chapter doesn't deture you from the story, I'll have to go back and restructure some of the sentences. ^^'
Anyway, here is the third chapter, enjoy!
Luscious
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Lukas woke with a start as Alex shook him awake. He tensed from the touch but relaxed when his eyes focused and he saw that it was his roommate. Alex furrowed his brow at his skittish behavior but didn’t ask, something Lukas was very grateful for.
“C’mon we’re going to be late for breakfast.”
Lukas sat up and rubbed his eyes, Alex was already dressed and pulling his shoes on, his hair still wet from his morning shower.
“I…I don’t eat breakfast.”
Alex looked at him with a smile. Great, he was a morning person.
“Breakfast is the most important meal of the day, how can you not eat it?”
Lukas looked away from him and rubbed his arm nervously, his voice dropping low as if he was ashamed to say it.
“Well, I eat it, just at a different time than everyone else.”
Alex blinked at him, was he really that dense?
“Doesn’t that make you late to class?”
Lukas nodded.
“Yeah but it doesn’t matter, like I said I’m failing all my classes anyway.”
Alex pulled on his shoe and gathered his things.
“Forget that, you’re coming to breakfast with me. The first step to becoming a good student is to always be on time.”
“But you don’t understand.”
Alex looked at him with that heavy searching gaze, as Luke stared at the floor. Lukas was finding it hard to meet his eyes whenever he was searching him like that. The older boy walked over to him and placed a hand on his shoulder, forcing Luke to look at him. His voice was so soft but his eyes were screaming something harder, as if he was angry but not with him.
“Nothing bad is going to happen I promise.”
Lukas’ skin was burning where Alex had touched him, actually touched him without intent to harm him. But he took his hand away and walked back towards the door ready to leave.
“So get dressed and let’s go.”
Lukas realized then that he wore no shirt; he must have taken it off sometime in his sleep. Just standing up would reveal his scars. He blushed deeply and mumbled under his breath.
“Do you mind waiting out in the hall?”
Alex searched him again but not as hard as he had before. He nodded and obliged to his request, closing the door softly behind him. Luke sighed and gathered his clothes, changing quickly to make sure no one saw him by accident or to worry Alex. Pulling on a black pair of long basketball shorts, he tied it quickly to keep them from falling down, and a baggy long sleeved black shirt to cover his arms and to make sure no one glimpsed the scars on his lower back. Then he sprayed on some deodorant and ran a quick brush through his hair before grabbing his books. He met Alex out in the hall; he had been leaning against the wall, waiting patiently for him.
“Ready to go?”
Lukas felt his doubts rising up in him again as he clutched his books.
“No.”
Alex only smiled at him and started walking.
“Good, lets go!”
Lukas only sighed heavily and followed suit, not really awake yet that morning and not really looking forward to the torments yet to come. They walked silently together, and Lukas began to realize they were complete opposites. Alex was larger than him in stature, and could get any girl he ever wanted. He was smart too, and looked as if he got along great with other people. Lukas on the other hand was small, almost scrawny looking, and had never had a girl in his life. He was failing all his classes, and everyone who came in contact with him eventually grew to hate him like all the rest. When they reached the meal hall Lukas’ throat nearly closed. From the inside there was only one door in and out, and all around that door was the football team, talking to girls and playing around with one another. Lukas stopped abruptly and forced Alex to do the same, he wouldn’t leave him there.
“Can we go outside and around Alex?”
Alex furrowed his brow at his request as if confused but Lukas knew that the boy wasn’t confused about anything. Was he being cruel to him? Was he trying to get him beat up again? Maybe Mr. Gordon’s intuition was wrong about him.
“Why? That’d take too long all the good food will be gone by then.”
“I just can’t go this way okay, I’ll meet you inside.”
Lukas turned to walk away but Alex caught him firmly by the arm, pulling him back until his face was only inches away from Alex’s. Lukas struggled against him only a little but his grip grew tighter. Panic was rising in him; he could feel the eyes of the other students on them.
“What are you afraid of Luke?”
Was he going to hit him? Why was he holding onto his arm so tight? Lukas swallowed hard and let his gaze flick to the boys around the meal hall door. Alex followed his gaze and smiled at him.
“Nothing’s going to happen Luke, I promise.”
He started walking towards the doors again, forcing Lukas to follow him for fear of being left alone. They walked side by side past the boys, but not without incident. One of the players tripped Lukas, and he winced as he saw the floor rising up towards him, but a strong arm wrapped around his side and under his arm to keep him standing.
“You alright?”
Lukas nodded to Alex who then turned to his tormentors.
“You know, football players should be good on their feet, no wonder you guys lost last year.”
Lukas felt like he was going to die, just die standing right there in front of all those angry jocks. His mouth was hanging open a little bit as Alex turned to walk away from them again, but their words were loud enough for the whole meal hall to hear.
“Looks like Little faggot Luke has a new boyfriend.”
Luke looked to Alex in shock as realization played in his eyes. He couldn’t take it, Alex was the only person his own age that had ever tried to help him and he was going to hate him now. Other students started laughing and giggling or shouting out his nickname: Little faggot Luke. He wasn’t sure when his legs started moving, or when they decided where he was going to run, but he soon found himself out of breath and on the other side of campus. He collapsed under a willow tree, far from the noise of classes and students, and he barely heard the bell ring when class started. He had almost hoped Alex would come looking for him, but he knew he wouldn’t. Mr. Perfect grades wouldn’t miss class for a little homo kid. He pulled his legs up to his chest and hugged them as he rested his head on his knees. It was five minutes into first hour when he heard someone approaching.
“Here you are.”
It was Alex. Lukas didn’t look up to greet him, only stayed as he was and hid his face.
“I was worried someone else got to you before I did.”
Silence, Lukas didn’t want to talk to another person who hated him.
“Are you okay?”
Alex rested his hand on Lukas’ shoulder but he pulled away angrily.
“Stop it! Just go to class and leave me alone!”
“I’m sorry I made you do that, I didn’t realize what kind of persecution you faced every day. It’s terrible Luke.”
“Just go away Alex, if you keep talking to me they’ll treat you the same way.”
“I’m not going to just abandon you I made a promise.”
“Who gives a fuck!”
Both boys were standing now, Alex trying to talk to him, and Lukas wanting nothing to do with him. Lukas stared at the ground at his feet, unable to meet Alex’s gaze.
“I won’t be able to live with myself if…”
“If they beat me up too? If they call me a faggot or a homo or gay?”
Lukas looked to Alex, a little surprised that he understood, but confused as to why he didn’t care like everyone else. Lukas watched warily, still tense as Alex sat beside the tree.
“I want to tell you something. It’s about my brother.”
Lukas bit his lip nervously.
“He was killed at the last school I went to. Some boys tied him up on the football field and beat him until he was dead. They tied his body to the bumper of one of their trucks and dragged him until he was unrecognizable. Do you want to know why?”
Lukas didn’t answer; Alex only stared at him sadly before continuing.
“He was a faggot. He was different from them and they killed him for it.”
Lukas watched as Alex swallowed hard, his voice deepening in an attempt to hide the quiver.
“I see him when I look at you. He was so afraid all the time of everyone. He didn’t trust anyone and didn’t have any friends except me. They picked on me for it too, but not like they did him. They said I was a faggot just like him. That’s why I transferred, I was growing scared and bitter and full of hate so I left it all behind me. I didn’t want anyone here to know what I had gone through or about my brother.”
“Then why are you telling me this?”
Alex looked to Lukas with a smile, as if to say, you should know that already.
“Because you need to hear it. If I don’t do something quick to save you, you’re going to die too. I couldn’t do anything for my brother; he was older than me and the boys who tormented him larger. But I can save you, if I try hard enough, I can keep you alive.”
He stood up and brushed his jeans off.
“I made a promise to Mr. Gordon, and I made a promise to you. And I don’t go back on my word. But I have one thing to ask you.”
Lukas swallowed hard but nodded his approval.
“Is it true?”
Lukas’ gaze dropped to the ground again and Alex took that for his answer.
“C’mon, lets go to class if we hurry we’ll be there in time for the bell.”
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A/N: i've decided to try something new here and add a little extra for you guys. A sneek peak to the next chapter.
Next time on Luscious....
Two weeks have passed and the boys are getting to know one another, Alex gets a schedule change and ends up in the Infirmary! Tune in on Friday for the next exciting chapter!
(cheezy I know but you gotta love it ^^)
Q&A:
BCM asked:
Q:"Just one quick thing though you said in the first chapter "The man had tortured him for three days, a time in which he mutilated parts of his body, even going as far as castrating him." If the man castrated him how could he get an erection like you wrote about in chapter 2(First Impressions)?"
A:Don't worry, I did my homework ^^. When a male is castrated in his prepubecant years he still has a sexual drive, although minimized, he is capable of getting an erection and even orgasming. But at the same time his body no longer produces sperm so nothing is released. If he had been castrated after reaching puberty the possibility of an erection is near impossible. I hope that clears up the confusion thank you so much for asking ^^.
And CaFFy:
thank you so much for pointing that out, after you said that about my sentence structure I began to annoy myself. ^^ But this chapter had been writen even before I posted any of this on AFF.net so I haven't had the time yet to go back through and try to repair my mistakes. But I do appreciate the advice and I plan to follow it as closely as I can. I hope this chapter doesn't deture you from the story, I'll have to go back and restructure some of the sentences. ^^'
Anyway, here is the third chapter, enjoy!
Luscious
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Lukas woke with a start as Alex shook him awake. He tensed from the touch but relaxed when his eyes focused and he saw that it was his roommate. Alex furrowed his brow at his skittish behavior but didn’t ask, something Lukas was very grateful for.
“C’mon we’re going to be late for breakfast.”
Lukas sat up and rubbed his eyes, Alex was already dressed and pulling his shoes on, his hair still wet from his morning shower.
“I…I don’t eat breakfast.”
Alex looked at him with a smile. Great, he was a morning person.
“Breakfast is the most important meal of the day, how can you not eat it?”
Lukas looked away from him and rubbed his arm nervously, his voice dropping low as if he was ashamed to say it.
“Well, I eat it, just at a different time than everyone else.”
Alex blinked at him, was he really that dense?
“Doesn’t that make you late to class?”
Lukas nodded.
“Yeah but it doesn’t matter, like I said I’m failing all my classes anyway.”
Alex pulled on his shoe and gathered his things.
“Forget that, you’re coming to breakfast with me. The first step to becoming a good student is to always be on time.”
“But you don’t understand.”
Alex looked at him with that heavy searching gaze, as Luke stared at the floor. Lukas was finding it hard to meet his eyes whenever he was searching him like that. The older boy walked over to him and placed a hand on his shoulder, forcing Luke to look at him. His voice was so soft but his eyes were screaming something harder, as if he was angry but not with him.
“Nothing bad is going to happen I promise.”
Lukas’ skin was burning where Alex had touched him, actually touched him without intent to harm him. But he took his hand away and walked back towards the door ready to leave.
“So get dressed and let’s go.”
Lukas realized then that he wore no shirt; he must have taken it off sometime in his sleep. Just standing up would reveal his scars. He blushed deeply and mumbled under his breath.
“Do you mind waiting out in the hall?”
Alex searched him again but not as hard as he had before. He nodded and obliged to his request, closing the door softly behind him. Luke sighed and gathered his clothes, changing quickly to make sure no one saw him by accident or to worry Alex. Pulling on a black pair of long basketball shorts, he tied it quickly to keep them from falling down, and a baggy long sleeved black shirt to cover his arms and to make sure no one glimpsed the scars on his lower back. Then he sprayed on some deodorant and ran a quick brush through his hair before grabbing his books. He met Alex out in the hall; he had been leaning against the wall, waiting patiently for him.
“Ready to go?”
Lukas felt his doubts rising up in him again as he clutched his books.
“No.”
Alex only smiled at him and started walking.
“Good, lets go!”
Lukas only sighed heavily and followed suit, not really awake yet that morning and not really looking forward to the torments yet to come. They walked silently together, and Lukas began to realize they were complete opposites. Alex was larger than him in stature, and could get any girl he ever wanted. He was smart too, and looked as if he got along great with other people. Lukas on the other hand was small, almost scrawny looking, and had never had a girl in his life. He was failing all his classes, and everyone who came in contact with him eventually grew to hate him like all the rest. When they reached the meal hall Lukas’ throat nearly closed. From the inside there was only one door in and out, and all around that door was the football team, talking to girls and playing around with one another. Lukas stopped abruptly and forced Alex to do the same, he wouldn’t leave him there.
“Can we go outside and around Alex?”
Alex furrowed his brow at his request as if confused but Lukas knew that the boy wasn’t confused about anything. Was he being cruel to him? Was he trying to get him beat up again? Maybe Mr. Gordon’s intuition was wrong about him.
“Why? That’d take too long all the good food will be gone by then.”
“I just can’t go this way okay, I’ll meet you inside.”
Lukas turned to walk away but Alex caught him firmly by the arm, pulling him back until his face was only inches away from Alex’s. Lukas struggled against him only a little but his grip grew tighter. Panic was rising in him; he could feel the eyes of the other students on them.
“What are you afraid of Luke?”
Was he going to hit him? Why was he holding onto his arm so tight? Lukas swallowed hard and let his gaze flick to the boys around the meal hall door. Alex followed his gaze and smiled at him.
“Nothing’s going to happen Luke, I promise.”
He started walking towards the doors again, forcing Lukas to follow him for fear of being left alone. They walked side by side past the boys, but not without incident. One of the players tripped Lukas, and he winced as he saw the floor rising up towards him, but a strong arm wrapped around his side and under his arm to keep him standing.
“You alright?”
Lukas nodded to Alex who then turned to his tormentors.
“You know, football players should be good on their feet, no wonder you guys lost last year.”
Lukas felt like he was going to die, just die standing right there in front of all those angry jocks. His mouth was hanging open a little bit as Alex turned to walk away from them again, but their words were loud enough for the whole meal hall to hear.
“Looks like Little faggot Luke has a new boyfriend.”
Luke looked to Alex in shock as realization played in his eyes. He couldn’t take it, Alex was the only person his own age that had ever tried to help him and he was going to hate him now. Other students started laughing and giggling or shouting out his nickname: Little faggot Luke. He wasn’t sure when his legs started moving, or when they decided where he was going to run, but he soon found himself out of breath and on the other side of campus. He collapsed under a willow tree, far from the noise of classes and students, and he barely heard the bell ring when class started. He had almost hoped Alex would come looking for him, but he knew he wouldn’t. Mr. Perfect grades wouldn’t miss class for a little homo kid. He pulled his legs up to his chest and hugged them as he rested his head on his knees. It was five minutes into first hour when he heard someone approaching.
“Here you are.”
It was Alex. Lukas didn’t look up to greet him, only stayed as he was and hid his face.
“I was worried someone else got to you before I did.”
Silence, Lukas didn’t want to talk to another person who hated him.
“Are you okay?”
Alex rested his hand on Lukas’ shoulder but he pulled away angrily.
“Stop it! Just go to class and leave me alone!”
“I’m sorry I made you do that, I didn’t realize what kind of persecution you faced every day. It’s terrible Luke.”
“Just go away Alex, if you keep talking to me they’ll treat you the same way.”
“I’m not going to just abandon you I made a promise.”
“Who gives a fuck!”
Both boys were standing now, Alex trying to talk to him, and Lukas wanting nothing to do with him. Lukas stared at the ground at his feet, unable to meet Alex’s gaze.
“I won’t be able to live with myself if…”
“If they beat me up too? If they call me a faggot or a homo or gay?”
Lukas looked to Alex, a little surprised that he understood, but confused as to why he didn’t care like everyone else. Lukas watched warily, still tense as Alex sat beside the tree.
“I want to tell you something. It’s about my brother.”
Lukas bit his lip nervously.
“He was killed at the last school I went to. Some boys tied him up on the football field and beat him until he was dead. They tied his body to the bumper of one of their trucks and dragged him until he was unrecognizable. Do you want to know why?”
Lukas didn’t answer; Alex only stared at him sadly before continuing.
“He was a faggot. He was different from them and they killed him for it.”
Lukas watched as Alex swallowed hard, his voice deepening in an attempt to hide the quiver.
“I see him when I look at you. He was so afraid all the time of everyone. He didn’t trust anyone and didn’t have any friends except me. They picked on me for it too, but not like they did him. They said I was a faggot just like him. That’s why I transferred, I was growing scared and bitter and full of hate so I left it all behind me. I didn’t want anyone here to know what I had gone through or about my brother.”
“Then why are you telling me this?”
Alex looked to Lukas with a smile, as if to say, you should know that already.
“Because you need to hear it. If I don’t do something quick to save you, you’re going to die too. I couldn’t do anything for my brother; he was older than me and the boys who tormented him larger. But I can save you, if I try hard enough, I can keep you alive.”
He stood up and brushed his jeans off.
“I made a promise to Mr. Gordon, and I made a promise to you. And I don’t go back on my word. But I have one thing to ask you.”
Lukas swallowed hard but nodded his approval.
“Is it true?”
Lukas’ gaze dropped to the ground again and Alex took that for his answer.
“C’mon, lets go to class if we hurry we’ll be there in time for the bell.”
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A/N: i've decided to try something new here and add a little extra for you guys. A sneek peak to the next chapter.
Next time on Luscious....
Two weeks have passed and the boys are getting to know one another, Alex gets a schedule change and ends up in the Infirmary! Tune in on Friday for the next exciting chapter!
(cheezy I know but you gotta love it ^^)