The Shower

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“That’s what I wanted to hear…" Jay murmured. "But not yet, my love.”

He slid his two fingers in and out of Shawn then added a third amid Shawn’s soft throaty moans. His own body ached for release but he held back, waiting until neither of them could take anymore. Soon sloppy wet sounds accompanied his hand movement; Shawn was thrusting back against his hand driving his fingers deeper.

Not yet? Shawn moaned inwardly.

Jay drew his free hand down from Shawn’s hair to grasp his hip gently guiding him into position for his entry. Using his fingers, he held Shawn open so he could easily slide himself into Shawn’s greedy flesh. The slow entry was agony for Jay, he shuddered with the effort to hold back and allow Shawn to stretch to accommodate his girth. Jay wrapped his arms around Shawn’s bringing his hands up each side to grasp Shawn’s shoulders.

“Jay… fuck me… fuck me please…” Shawn mindlessly groaned with each stroke of Jay’s hand. He desperately wanted to take matters into his own hands and bring relief to his aching groin, but he was afraid Jay would stop what he was doing. So he obediently he kept his hands against the wall but met Jay’s thrusts with his own hoping for relief. He felt Jay withdrawing his fingers and almost cried out in disappointment; and then… the throbbing warmth of Jay’s member breached his outer walls and began a torturous journey deep inside him.

“Oh god, please Jay!” Shawn’s legs slowly buckled until his knees sank to rest on the lip of the tub, he couldn’t stay standing under his own power if his life depended on it.

“Now!” Jay cried with triumph he suddenly surged forward to bury his total length into Shawn’s willing flesh.

When he surged upwards, he pulled down with his arms driving himself deeper still into Shawn’s depths; he could feel the walls of his bowels contracting around his shaft. They pulsed and rippled as if trying to expel him. He let the muscles force him back then drove forward again. Looking down Jay watched his flesh disappear into Shawn’s. In and out, it emerged glistening with Shawn’s essence and shower water. In… and slowly out. Surge forward and ease out slowly. Slow entrance with a quick withdrawal. He varied his pace and actions watching the effects it had on Shawn.

Jay grunted with exertion each time he drove into Shawn with steadily sharper and harder movements; the tightening in the base of his stomach heralded his impending orgasm.

“Ahh… Ahhh… Ah!” Jay panted emptying himself deep within Shawn. He let his head rest against Shawn’s wet back gently kissing his shoulder until the violent spasms faded away.

Shawn leaned back against Jay as he plowed into him. His body arched away from the wall, every fiber of his being was focused on the place where Jay’s body joined with his, and the sensations emanating from it. The changing pace Jay kept had him whimpering and gasping. When would this end? When would Jay give him his release? The answer would soon be evident as Jay thrust into him with purpose and a regular rhythm.

“Oh god!” Shawn gasped as he realized what was about to happen. “Oh god!” He cried out when the sudden gush of warmth poured into him. Jay had forgotten him! This was so unfair!! He’d done as he was told, played along… and was denied his reward. Shawn sagged forward in disappointment his forehead resting on the shower wall, while Jay dropped kisses on his back. The water was growing cold, shrugging free of Jay’s embrace Shawn reached down to turn the water off.

As Shawn stepped out of the tub, Jay grabbed his hand and pulled him around to face him, he was greeted with accusing eyes.

“What’s wrong? Was I too rough?” Jay asked searching Shawn’s face with concern.

“I did as I was told.” Shawn answered flatly.

Jay looked puzzled. He did as he was told? What he hell does THAT mean? What was he told…. OH!!! Jay’s eyes widened and he looked down at Shawn’s fading erection.

“You didn’t…?” Jay began, Shawn shook his head. “And I didn’t…”

Shawn turned away from him; he didn’t get far before Jay scooped him up in his arms and carried him protesting to the already rumpled bed. As he gently lowered Shawn onto the bed, he gazed into his eyes.

“Let me make it up to you…” He whispered tenderly.

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