The Claiming
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Category:
Erotica › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
3
Views:
10,655
Reviews:
5
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
Jewels
Jewels
Holly arrived at Ranstien’s, a brick building the older part of town. She walks into the shop and looks around a moment totally uncertain as to why she is there. She had never been inside the store, not to say that she had never driven past it fantasizing. It wasn’t that she wasn’t well of financially well off, it was more that she wasn’t outstandingly so.
She looks around the cases of jewelry eyes taking the gorgeous rings, bracelets, earrings and necklaces. So lost in their beauty that she is startled by the voice that comes from the other side of one of the counters.
“Can I help you Miss?” Mr. Ranstien, a rather handsome middle aged man, asks the engrossed Holly. He had been busy with another customer when she had walked in so had not yet seen her face.
Holly looks up slightly startled. She quickly composes herself and looks at the man behind the counter square in the eyes. “I am just looking for now. Though I was given instructions to come here today.”
Seeing her face Mr. Ranstein smiles and offers her is hand. “I am Jacob Ranstien the owner of owner of Ranstien Jewelry. Just say something if you find some thing you like. And pray tell who sent you my way.”
Holly takes his hand a little taken back by his apparent happiness. “I am Holly and as to who sent me this way I don’t know his name but a friend of mine.” Her voice adding an unconscious emphasis on friend.
Jacob’s smile became even wider as he hears her name. He had a special order placed in for a woman named Holly and a significant amount of money had been used to create a in store credit account for a Ms. Taylor. On a whim he decides to take a gamble and asks her last name. “Is you last name Taylor?”
She blinks and draws a sharp intake of breathe. How had he know her last name? What was going on here. “Yes it is. Why do you ask?”
Laughing at her shock he replies. “Wait here and continue to look around.” He quickly head to the back office and returns with a piece of paper and a necklace box. He goes and finds Holly. He first shows her the paper which was in actuality the start of an in store account ledger.
Holly looks over the paper and gasps seeing the amount of money that was listed as the initial deposit. Her mind quickly starts to whirl as it questions form in her mind. She smiles understanding what this meant.
Jacob watch as she took in the amount of money that she had to spend and watches her acceptance of it. Watches as she goes back to shopping noting what items she took the most interest in, noting that she was unknowingly picking out things that matches the custom made necklace that had been ordered.
Almost an hour later she had picked out a pair of gold and pearl earrings, a pair of yellow and white gold braided bracelets and a diamond ring with several accompanying pearls. At the register Jacob pulls out the box and hands it to her after her purchases had been made and recorded on the ledger.
Holly takes the box and opens it. Inside is a gold necklace with a pearl drop handing from it. She gasps realizing that she had unknowingly bought matching jewelry. She quickly closes the box and thanks Jacob and smiles heading out the door.
She heads home her mind swirling in confusion. She tries to figure out why someone with money would take such interest in her. She arrives at her house and takes her bags up to here room. As she passes the phone she notices that the light is flashing. She listens to the messages. After several rather boring messages she hears one that makes her take a sharp breath.
“Kitten meet me for dinner at Alonzo’s at 7:00.” This was getting strange Holly thought looking over at the clock, 5:45. Alonzo’s was one of the richest restaurants in town. Sighing and curious she heads up to get ready for her now planned evening.
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A/N: Sorry for the sexless chapter.
Dea-Chapter two was mixed with memories so thus the tense changed. Also this is a work in progress.
Now another note I need some suggestions on a few story aspects:
1. Name of the guy
2. The club's name
3. What exactly the guys family connections are.
4. Holly's job.
Thank you hope you enjoy this chapter. Feel free to leave a review.
Holly arrived at Ranstien’s, a brick building the older part of town. She walks into the shop and looks around a moment totally uncertain as to why she is there. She had never been inside the store, not to say that she had never driven past it fantasizing. It wasn’t that she wasn’t well of financially well off, it was more that she wasn’t outstandingly so.
She looks around the cases of jewelry eyes taking the gorgeous rings, bracelets, earrings and necklaces. So lost in their beauty that she is startled by the voice that comes from the other side of one of the counters.
“Can I help you Miss?” Mr. Ranstien, a rather handsome middle aged man, asks the engrossed Holly. He had been busy with another customer when she had walked in so had not yet seen her face.
Holly looks up slightly startled. She quickly composes herself and looks at the man behind the counter square in the eyes. “I am just looking for now. Though I was given instructions to come here today.”
Seeing her face Mr. Ranstein smiles and offers her is hand. “I am Jacob Ranstien the owner of owner of Ranstien Jewelry. Just say something if you find some thing you like. And pray tell who sent you my way.”
Holly takes his hand a little taken back by his apparent happiness. “I am Holly and as to who sent me this way I don’t know his name but a friend of mine.” Her voice adding an unconscious emphasis on friend.
Jacob’s smile became even wider as he hears her name. He had a special order placed in for a woman named Holly and a significant amount of money had been used to create a in store credit account for a Ms. Taylor. On a whim he decides to take a gamble and asks her last name. “Is you last name Taylor?”
She blinks and draws a sharp intake of breathe. How had he know her last name? What was going on here. “Yes it is. Why do you ask?”
Laughing at her shock he replies. “Wait here and continue to look around.” He quickly head to the back office and returns with a piece of paper and a necklace box. He goes and finds Holly. He first shows her the paper which was in actuality the start of an in store account ledger.
Holly looks over the paper and gasps seeing the amount of money that was listed as the initial deposit. Her mind quickly starts to whirl as it questions form in her mind. She smiles understanding what this meant.
Jacob watch as she took in the amount of money that she had to spend and watches her acceptance of it. Watches as she goes back to shopping noting what items she took the most interest in, noting that she was unknowingly picking out things that matches the custom made necklace that had been ordered.
Almost an hour later she had picked out a pair of gold and pearl earrings, a pair of yellow and white gold braided bracelets and a diamond ring with several accompanying pearls. At the register Jacob pulls out the box and hands it to her after her purchases had been made and recorded on the ledger.
Holly takes the box and opens it. Inside is a gold necklace with a pearl drop handing from it. She gasps realizing that she had unknowingly bought matching jewelry. She quickly closes the box and thanks Jacob and smiles heading out the door.
She heads home her mind swirling in confusion. She tries to figure out why someone with money would take such interest in her. She arrives at her house and takes her bags up to here room. As she passes the phone she notices that the light is flashing. She listens to the messages. After several rather boring messages she hears one that makes her take a sharp breath.
“Kitten meet me for dinner at Alonzo’s at 7:00.” This was getting strange Holly thought looking over at the clock, 5:45. Alonzo’s was one of the richest restaurants in town. Sighing and curious she heads up to get ready for her now planned evening.
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A/N: Sorry for the sexless chapter.
Dea-Chapter two was mixed with memories so thus the tense changed. Also this is a work in progress.
Now another note I need some suggestions on a few story aspects:
1. Name of the guy
2. The club's name
3. What exactly the guys family connections are.
4. Holly's job.
Thank you hope you enjoy this chapter. Feel free to leave a review.