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Twisted World

By: dash1234
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Rating: Adult +
Chapters: 28
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24 Outside Acts

Jacs wondered if she had done the right thing as the gathering left following the Magii to the hidden places. First, they would ask the force to choose who they would follow, or stay to return to their own lands. Each was gratified to see a substantial number elect to follow them, as many elected to return to their own places.

Overlord came to Jacs that night. She was surprised, he was as tender with her as anyone had ever been and she took even greater pleasure in the erotic acts without added pain. She braved enough to shyly say so as they lay between panting breaths.

He rose on one elbow, kissing teasingly. “So I am a great lover as well as Lord. Enjoy this night, Jacs, for tomorrow I must cause you great pain, possibly the greatest you have felt. Yes, I know you have already come through much. Yet to be AS I am, this must be. I am sorry. You will not be sorry once it is done, this I promise MY Jacs.”

“If it must be, My Lord, I will endure it. May I just ask that I pleasure you as I am used to? It would more than please us both.”

“Then who am I to refuse such a request from my woman to be? Please be to drop the ‘my lord’ when we are together, Jacs, my name is Ash. And pleasure away!”

“As you wish, Ash. Your wish is my command.”

Her hands dropped to his sac as she kissed him teasingly, moving swiftly to the rising huge member taking it slowly into her mouth; moving back and forth, licking as she did so.

“Ah, Jacs, stop for a moment. Such pleasure should be felt by us both, turn around if you will.”

She moved and took the quivering member back into her mouth, as his tongue rasped along her folds, finding the hidden depth and small nodule. She shuddered as he quickly brought her to near climax tickling the nodule relentlessly, and did so as she swallowed his released essence - nectar. He swallowed her moisture as her own release came at the same time.

One final ‘fight’ as he entered deeper than any had done before and they slept in each others arms.

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The following morning, as promised, he caused the greatest pain she had ever known.
On the floor as he requested, bowed down in a crouch her arms holding tight crossed in front of her. He had said she would find greater comfort as she clasped around her breasts with hands in the armpits. He had entered her from behind, caressing along her sides, but did not move.

“Scream if you will, Jacs, this is pain in its purest form. Once done, you will never feel the like again.”

She barely nodded, still unsure and half terrified. And screamed!

A knife had pierced her between the shoulder blades, but it felt more than a mere knife. Another carving! He carved a small intricate ring design with the tip of a claw maintained for the purpose, the smallest trickle of electrical energy entering her with each careful stroke. Jacs did her best to remain still amid her screams, but this was PAIN in capital letters that even the great snake had not raised. Thankfully the carving was small in comparison, but she still screamed herself hoarse in the making.

“Nearly done, Jacs, my brave woman. Here is the last.” And he bit the centre of the carved design, sucking and then kissed the spot giving the last vital piece of raw SELF. She convulsed in pure agony. Pain? Agony? It was a hurt that moved through her very soul! He felt her go rigid with the thing and then limp.

Slaking his need within her swiftly, for she had unconsciously tightened around him holding him inside, he lifted her gently to the bed and took a draught of the wine waiting. He could only wait and see if she would wake.

All others he had given part of himself to had not. He would truly miss Jacs if she also had not the inner strength for the meld.

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The Magii were true to their word. The entry to the portals lay deep in the mountains, Hadad and Vlad knew they would choose worlds as far away from each other as possible, and took the muted glowing, pulsing tunnels to either end of the long line in the dim large space. Glem cheerfully led his men down the middle one, singing a ribald tune all the way that fast dwindled to nothing as they marched to the far place.

Lucard on the other hand took his time. He alone could read the markings by the entry and chose one not far from the end, beckoning his band of followers to proceed first. He and Lacey took the rear.

The Magii stood back and formed a ring as Lucard had been gone long enough. A light appeared in the formed circle.

“They are gone?”

“They are gone Lord Sareshu, time enough has passed. We were worried that Lucard seemed to KNOW where he was headed.”

“Lucard thinks he is headed HOME. The fool is NOT. None took the true path. But now we will feed. Wait by the portals for any that manage to make it back. They should not know what is about to befall them - save Lucard. If any do, we leave it to your pleasure to decide what becomes of them.”

The light vanished.

“Pekko! Do we feed now or wait?”

“I would have said wait my brother, but in the circumstances …”

“We feed,” a deep voice joined them, “before Lucard can save his hide again. I never liked the idea of sending him to the same place.”

“Then do us the honours, Natos, and pass the energy on.”

Natos took the great twisting ring from the light and slowly pulled it on his large middle finger, twisting it carefully twice once in each direction.

Twisted world shuddered as the sky went suddenly dark and the earthquake shook the entire world, but left no damage on the surface save shocked peoples. It was quickly over.

It was also quickly over for those on the under surface, out of the passages, in ‘new worlds’ that were still connected to the inner surface of Twisted World that none had known of, nor ever would again. The light disappeared and a red light of heat and destruction came in its stead. All caught fell to ashes, the sparkling lights of life force caught in the following winds.

Lucard saw the light dim and knew the defeat. Screaming to the darkening sky in anger, he swung round to Lacey who wandered slowly behind him, much nearer the portal entry they had come from.

“Lacey, RUN! Go BACK!”

“My Lord! Save yourself, please!” She turned, as bidden.

“Too far! RUN! LIVE!”

The deep red reached half way up the tunnel behind her but did not catch her as she ran, weeping,. She felt rather than heard the final scream of rage as she ran. Something inside her snapped, suddenly. The Bond was no longer there. She finally stumbled into the dim passage where the Magii waited. She was the only one returned.

She shouted in between her tears. “You do Overlord’s bidding! This was a trap I was tricked into believing!”
She was gathered in comforting arms as she shouted, distraught.

“Nay, Lacey. We do our Brothers’ bidding. Overlord’s Masters. Yes, truth. We have told you nought but truths. We are part of the same people. This place is a PRISON for those of ours who threaten the status-quo. We have only aided those who would have peace clear this place of the biggest threat.”

“I AM no threat! Most of those taken down these foul tunnels were no threat!”

“Casualties are inevitable Lacey. Be thankful this time that many of your world, this world, have actually been SAVED.”

Another spoke. “You now have a world of peace Lacey. Overlord is now no threat. You are welcome to go where you would.”

She still sobbed. “Where would that be? My family is gone. The people I came to care about are gone.”

“Not all. Perhaps you would like to speak to Jacs again? Blackwing is still here, if you ask him nicely enough I am sure he would take you where you would.”

“You think so?” The sobs ceased and the inner picture of the magnificent beast came to the fore.

“Come, we will lead you to him.”

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Blackwing greeted the woman he recognised with delight. His Bond had also mysteriously broken that short while after the earthquake. And the new Bond stole over him as he saw the mirrored sadness in her eyes.

Bowing in return to her, the magnificent creature showed the scales that had been shaped into the small seat and holds for hands and feet.

Thunder crashed as they rose and turned back towards Overlord’s stronghold. The lightning flashed as they swiftly disappeared on the wind.

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