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Category:
Romance › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
23
Views:
4,692
Reviews:
28
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
1
Disclaimer:
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
Author Note
Hey everyone! So, the story is almost done! But I wanted to take a minute to just Thank you all for the reviews, they help a lot when I'm writing and since this is the first time that I have ever shared my stories with anyone, they really mean a lot to me. Thank you so much Zodia, you have become like my biggest fan. I love it, thank you so much.
Ok, Precious; Thank you for the review. I have to say I was kind of lost for a minute as to whether you were complimenting me or saying bad things, but I understand now. Yes, my last few chapters were kind of choppy, but I wasn't sure how things were going to work out myself with Jae and Chase. Also, the fact that her family called her 'blue', I have to admit, I kind of forgot all about that for a long time. When she lost her memory I thought of bringing it back but it just didn't seem to work. If I would ever revise my story I would definately either take out that bit of information or I would try to add more about it into the story. At one point I did think of adding it to when Chase and David were talking about Jae's past and childhood but it just didn't seem important enough to add it in there. Also, yes, when Jae is at the beach house her goal is to figure out if she does really want him and will wait for him or if she doesn't, at that point in the story she hadn't heard from him in over a month, but she loved him and wasn't sure if she should wait for him to find her, contact him herself, or just try to move on.
So, with all that said, I hope you understand it better, let me know. I know I have a lot to change if I would ever revise it and right now it's in rough shape. I think maybe over the winter break from school I'll sit down and figure it all out but it will definately take me months. I have already decided when I do revise it, my Chase parts I am going to try to work into the chapters itself.
Thanks again everyone for the reviews. On to the Chapter,
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Oh, this will stay posted as a chapter, I want to make sure people understand.
Ok, Precious; Thank you for the review. I have to say I was kind of lost for a minute as to whether you were complimenting me or saying bad things, but I understand now. Yes, my last few chapters were kind of choppy, but I wasn't sure how things were going to work out myself with Jae and Chase. Also, the fact that her family called her 'blue', I have to admit, I kind of forgot all about that for a long time. When she lost her memory I thought of bringing it back but it just didn't seem to work. If I would ever revise my story I would definately either take out that bit of information or I would try to add more about it into the story. At one point I did think of adding it to when Chase and David were talking about Jae's past and childhood but it just didn't seem important enough to add it in there. Also, yes, when Jae is at the beach house her goal is to figure out if she does really want him and will wait for him or if she doesn't, at that point in the story she hadn't heard from him in over a month, but she loved him and wasn't sure if she should wait for him to find her, contact him herself, or just try to move on.
So, with all that said, I hope you understand it better, let me know. I know I have a lot to change if I would ever revise it and right now it's in rough shape. I think maybe over the winter break from school I'll sit down and figure it all out but it will definately take me months. I have already decided when I do revise it, my Chase parts I am going to try to work into the chapters itself.
Thanks again everyone for the reviews. On to the Chapter,
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Oh, this will stay posted as a chapter, I want to make sure people understand.