First Punishment

   “You’re hanging in there so well. Soon we can start the next part of your punishment. What? Did you think that you were just going to get a little cold and I was going to be satisfied that you learned your lesson? Relax. I’m taking off the shot glasses. Ouch, good thing you shaved or that would have really sucked. Now the ice pack, it’s all good and numb, right?

   Look at you, told you yoga would come in handy. If you could only see the perfect arch your back just made when I put these nipple clamps on you. Let’s if you can do that arch again when I put these clothes pins on your balls. How many do you think you can take? I’m putting 3 on each ball to start.

   Breath. Do you need me to take out the gag? You must really like the gag if you don’t even want me to give you a break for air. You don’t have to do anything but endure now. Just relax, you’ve shown me that you want to be good for me. Let yourself float and breath for me, we’re just going to sit here a while.

   Better? Then let’s continue. I want to see how far I can turn your nipples; this one almost goes half way! Look at that, do you think I can make it go further? How about this one? It doesn’t want to turn as much as the other one… We’ll definitely be working on that in the future. Which is worse, the turning or the pulling? Look, if I pull them towards each other I can almost make them touch. You sound so pretty when you cry with a gag in between your pretty lips. You were just made to have your lips wrapped around anything I want to put between them.

   How far do you think I can make the skin on your ball stretch? I’m going to start with an inch and go from there. When will you figure out that you can’t get away from me when I have you? Struggle all you want, it’s just pulling on the pin more.

   If you keep breathing like that you’re going to pass out. Crying isn’t going to help that. Feel everything I’m doing to you and know that you’re making me happy. Your pain is pleasing me. You are pleasing me. Stop fighting the sensations I’m giving to you, and make yourself better for me. Accept my control, my dominance, my passion. Let them run through you and burn away all your reluctance. Endure this pain and it will become pleasure.

   Are you calm now? Good boy. Such a good boy for me. Those nipple look like they are done. You’re beautiful when you squirm. I’ll have to use clamps more often if this is how you look when I play with them after. Now your clothes pins, you sound agonized. How did I miss how perfect you look when you’re in pain for me? I’m not going to let myself forget that again.

  I’ve taken off your cuffs, stretch out for me. Your circulation looks good, I’ll rub your ankles while you drink. You can take out the gag… you want me to take it out? That’s a good sign, baby boy. You’re learning that I’m the one that’s in control of you. It’s natural that I’m the one you look to when we wind down; it’s what I want you to learn. Now drink slowly, can’t have you getting sick.

   Get up on your hands and knees; I’ll change out your plug. This one’s new, it’s better to sleep in. Is it more conformable than the one I sent you home with last time? Good. When you have a problem like that you should tell me, I want to shape you to be mine, not hurt you. Thank you for tell me, and you’re so good that you used it anyway even though it wasn’t confortable. You are such a good boy.

   Now it’s time to rest. After you fall asleep I’ll turn out the lights and take off your blindfold. I know how hard light is on your eyes after you’ve been in the dark for a while. Just rest, my darling boy, I’m going to stay right here with you. I’m right here and you took your punishment so well, rest and know that I forgive you. I forgive you because I know that you’re going to try harder, and you are going to be better, and this lesson will stay with you always. You are such a good boy for me. Sleep.”

I think I really like this writing style. It's difficult at times and there were a few thing that I wanted to put in that I couldn't make work, but I like how it flows.