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Category:
Original - Misc › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
3
Views:
652
Reviews:
3
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
Chapter 2: the Party
monday, 5th May, 2008
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Disclaimer: This is my own work. It is more of a journal entry than a story, as it is based on true events of my past. I am writing this story from my point of view (as Brandon). I have changed some of the names in the story as per the request of some of the people involved. Everyone that was involved in the events of the story know that I am making NO PROFIT from this endeavor and thereby know that they will be recieving no moneys from this story. Only the basis for this story are true events... but MOST of this story is fiction. Please do not use it, in part, or in it's entirity without my permission. Please review as you read, also because this is my first non-poetry work, so I need to know if it is good or not. Thank you for your patience and the time you spend reading it. Be honest in your review, not cruel.
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Chapter 2: the Party
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As I was saying before, Brandon was going to his friend Sean's house for a new year's eve party. That night was all about spending time with his friends...
It was around 5pm when I left my house to go over to Sean's, for dinner before the party of the night. When I got there, I was met by Sean, his Mom (Virginia), Anthony and Jason (Sean's brothers) just getting back from the store with supplies for the party and some drinks, some alcoholic, some not. I helped them unpack the car and get the party ready.
People were arriving at random throughout the night while I was trying very hard to persuade a girl named Holly to go out with me by physical means of seduction... Then at about 9pm, when everone was actually inside the house and in the front room, there was a knock on the door. Jeanette, Sean's sister, got up to answer it and her friend Allison walked in!
**BOOM!!!!**
I couldn't breathe, or think for that matter! Allison walked in the door and the world seemed to stop dead in it's tracks! She was wearing a dark forest green velvet dress that accentuated her every contour, a black watch, black pantyhose, black high heels and sunglasses. She was fucking GORGEOUS!!! She had blonde hair that was almost waist length, soft, pale-ish skin that was glowing, and the most piercing brown eyes that I have ever seen!
Jeanette began introducing Allison to everyone. When she got to me she first closed my mouth, apparently, my mouth was hanging open, and I instantly blushed. Red as a bright apple, I shook Allison's hand and was drowned in her eyes. I felt as though she was looking straight into my soul and that there was nothing but us in existance. Then I was ripped back to reality when Sean started shaking me and asking me "Are you o.k, man?" He was looking from me to Allison as though we had been zapped by a billion amps of electriciy.
Allison and I spent the rest of the eveing practically inseperable, but we were also not alone. Holly was there and all of our friends were there. Allison started the beginning of the evening trying to hook-up with my friend Chris while I was trying to hook-up with Holly, which completely failed as by the end of the evening Holly had hooked up with Chris and I had hooked up with Allison!
By the time it was 11:30pm, everyone had started opening the wine-coolers and we were beginning to get a bit "funny." I do, though, remember that when it got to midnight I was attatched to Allison at the lips and I was on cloud 9-zillion and 4! I don't remember ever feeling as happy as I was at that moment at any point of my life leading up to that moment! The night rolled on in a partial "buzzed" state... After midnight most of us kids decided to go for a walk in the night air and enjoy our inhibited points of view outside amongst the world that lay around us. Allison and I talked for hours, it seemed, and when we went back to Sean's place we sat downstairs talking for a while and eventually fell asleep in each other's arms.
The next day, when I woke up, I noticed that she had gone. I felt like shit! I just hade the best night of my life and then she was gone! I went to talk to Jeanette and was told that she had left early that morning (around 630am) to go home.
I went home both happy for the events of the previous night and pissed because I thought that I'd never see her again...
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Disclaimer: This is my own work. It is more of a journal entry than a story, as it is based on true events of my past. I am writing this story from my point of view (as Brandon). I have changed some of the names in the story as per the request of some of the people involved. Everyone that was involved in the events of the story know that I am making NO PROFIT from this endeavor and thereby know that they will be recieving no moneys from this story. Only the basis for this story are true events... but MOST of this story is fiction. Please do not use it, in part, or in it's entirity without my permission. Please review as you read, also because this is my first non-poetry work, so I need to know if it is good or not. Thank you for your patience and the time you spend reading it. Be honest in your review, not cruel.
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Chapter 2: the Party
********************
As I was saying before, Brandon was going to his friend Sean's house for a new year's eve party. That night was all about spending time with his friends...
It was around 5pm when I left my house to go over to Sean's, for dinner before the party of the night. When I got there, I was met by Sean, his Mom (Virginia), Anthony and Jason (Sean's brothers) just getting back from the store with supplies for the party and some drinks, some alcoholic, some not. I helped them unpack the car and get the party ready.
People were arriving at random throughout the night while I was trying very hard to persuade a girl named Holly to go out with me by physical means of seduction... Then at about 9pm, when everone was actually inside the house and in the front room, there was a knock on the door. Jeanette, Sean's sister, got up to answer it and her friend Allison walked in!
**BOOM!!!!**
I couldn't breathe, or think for that matter! Allison walked in the door and the world seemed to stop dead in it's tracks! She was wearing a dark forest green velvet dress that accentuated her every contour, a black watch, black pantyhose, black high heels and sunglasses. She was fucking GORGEOUS!!! She had blonde hair that was almost waist length, soft, pale-ish skin that was glowing, and the most piercing brown eyes that I have ever seen!
Jeanette began introducing Allison to everyone. When she got to me she first closed my mouth, apparently, my mouth was hanging open, and I instantly blushed. Red as a bright apple, I shook Allison's hand and was drowned in her eyes. I felt as though she was looking straight into my soul and that there was nothing but us in existance. Then I was ripped back to reality when Sean started shaking me and asking me "Are you o.k, man?" He was looking from me to Allison as though we had been zapped by a billion amps of electriciy.
Allison and I spent the rest of the eveing practically inseperable, but we were also not alone. Holly was there and all of our friends were there. Allison started the beginning of the evening trying to hook-up with my friend Chris while I was trying to hook-up with Holly, which completely failed as by the end of the evening Holly had hooked up with Chris and I had hooked up with Allison!
By the time it was 11:30pm, everyone had started opening the wine-coolers and we were beginning to get a bit "funny." I do, though, remember that when it got to midnight I was attatched to Allison at the lips and I was on cloud 9-zillion and 4! I don't remember ever feeling as happy as I was at that moment at any point of my life leading up to that moment! The night rolled on in a partial "buzzed" state... After midnight most of us kids decided to go for a walk in the night air and enjoy our inhibited points of view outside amongst the world that lay around us. Allison and I talked for hours, it seemed, and when we went back to Sean's place we sat downstairs talking for a while and eventually fell asleep in each other's arms.
The next day, when I woke up, I noticed that she had gone. I felt like shit! I just hade the best night of my life and then she was gone! I went to talk to Jeanette and was told that she had left early that morning (around 630am) to go home.
I went home both happy for the events of the previous night and pissed because I thought that I'd never see her again...