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The Mark

By: MalkavianWanabe
folder Vampire › General
Rating: Adult +
Chapters: 4
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The Turning

Recap: Kenny Morvin, marked from birth with an ancient seal known only by 4 people left in the whole world is finally called to answer his destiny of becoming a vampire when he is abducted in a club and taken to a horrific place below in the basement.

There he met Jessica, his abductor who was a girl with unnatural strength and some form of mass hypnosis to make the club not realize he was being kidnapped. As well as meeting Jagger, a seemingly genderless demonic being who fed on human beings and walked around naked.

He also met the so called master of the establishment and the one who gave him the mark, Lord Jerek. A vampire boy dressed in evil armor who put him to sleep after explaining the reason for the mark.

And now onto the story!


Kenny felt himself awaken from the trance he had been set in which forced him to sleep as he opened his eyes and looked around. He saw that he was apparently in another room of the cavernous basement below the club. As he looked around, he noticed that he was standing inside a cage and was naked completely. The cage was like the ones at the stripper clubs where the dancers climbed into them held over the ground and danced, except this cage was being held over a massive pit. In fact, the entire room was one big pit with the exception of a thin strip of marble floor leading out to the cage itself, the marble strip lead back to a door that he guessed took him to other sections of the basement but upon looking down into the pit, he gasped.

Below him in the pit like room, which appeared to be a nearly 200 foot drop, was blood. The pit was filled with blood 200 feet below him, he would have mistaken it for lava if it weren’t so dark in color. He suddenly heard the door to the strip of marble open and he watched as several people stepped forward onto the strip.

The doorway presented six people which was just enough to fit on the strip of they went in two lines of three which they did. Kenny recognized Jagger and Jessica who took the front two spots, he saw Lord Jerek taking the back right spot behind Jessica, the other three people couldn’t bee seen behind the first two.

“Don’t worry Kenny, most of the time, there is only a 30% chance of a successful ceremony, but the mark will make sure you pull through.” said Jagger.

“And what if I had failed?” asked Kenny trying to cover his modesty as best he could.

“You would have drowned to death in the pit of blood.” said Jessica smiling. “That pit is very special, we filled it with the blood of 1,000 virgins. Some of the most horrifying beings ever to walk the earth have been known to bathe in the blood of 1,000 virgins. So we took it up as a ceremony.” she added.

“1,000 virgins is pretty hard to come by in today’s age…” said Jagger smiling, showing off his horrifying sharp teeth to Kenny. Kenny remembered earlier about him living in a room filled with mutilated corpses and he nearly gagged.

“The process of the ceremony is quite simple. Every vampire who has reached over 1,000 years of age is granted the rank of Master Vampire. Each master is able to choose their own special ceremony for creating new vampires which is unique to the master in question.” said Jerek. Kenny looked at him as he stepped to the front of the lines up to the cage, holding his sword in one hand.

“I chose this. All you have to do is bathe in the blood of 1,000 virgins. Doing this will begin your transformation into undeath, so here it goes!” said Jerek with a smile as he raised his sword. As he did so, the chain holding up the cage over the pit began to creak and groan. Kenny looked up just in time to see the chain drop him down at free fall speeds, his body felt completely hollow as he plummeted down towards the blood below him. There was a massively loud splash as the cage slammed into the blood and sank down into it’s depths.

Kenny’s vision was soon flooded with red, blood was all around him, below, beside, above, in front, behind. And to make it worse, it was seeping into the cage, he was trapped, drowning in the pit of blood. He tried to scream but the blood seeped into his mouth as he began to choke while drinking it. More and more he drank but to no avail, the blood just wouldn’t allow him to find any air. Suddenly, as he continued to drink, he felt himself become amazingly light headed.


Meanwhile…

“Okay, lets bring him back up, retract the cage.” said Lord Jerek. But just as he gave the order, the cage went flying out of the pit, smacking into the roof where it stuck as a massive wreck of metal.

“What the hell?” asked Jerek looking at the cage as blood suddenly erupted from the pit like a volcanic explosion, all the way up to the strip of marble where it began to sink back down and from the blood eruption emerged Kenny. But he wasn’t the Kenny from before but instead a new vampire, he hovered in the air, kept afloat by large bat like wings which had sprouted from his back, he had a long draconic tail nearly as long as he was tall which snaked around in the air while his forearms arms and legs from the knees down looked like they had gained some sort of natural black armor plating while the nails were razor sharp claws. Kenny’s eyes were piss yellow in color with red slit shaped pupils and his teeth now had fangs nearly half an inch long each.

“An incubus? That’s unusual for a child his age…” said Jerek. Kenny flapped his massive wings and landed on the marble before all of his new appendages vanished. His wings transformed into blood and were absorbed into his body like he was a sponge for blood, his armor on his arms and legs did the same while his nails returned to normal. His eyes changed back to their human like state and his fangs returned to normal length. His tail also melted and was absorbed just like his wings.

When he looked like his human state again, Kenny finally regained his composure and passed out due to the light headedness he was feeling.

Jerek chuckled a bit as he stepped closer to Kenny. “It seems that the boy was hiding a few inner secrets if he were to become an Incubus.” said Jerek. “Jagger! Take Kenny to the recovery room… I would have Jessica do it, but I think it would be safer to keep him away from females until he knows what exactly he became.” said Jerek.

Jagger frowned and kicked at the marble slightly. “Why do I have to do it, Master?” he whined as his claws made a slight scratch on the marble.

“An Incubus is like the opposite of a Succubus you idiot, we’re lucky if he doesn’t go raping every woman he sees…” said Jessica.

“Don’t call me an idiot!” shouted Jagger raising a fist to punch the female vampire in anger, but as he did so, Jerek moved quickly in between them and looked Jagger right in the eyes.

“She’s right Jagger… Incubus and Succubus are sexually driven vampires, they need sexual activity almost as much as they need blood. I think it’s safe not to leave him alone with Jessica or any of the other females at the moment.” said Lord Jerek. Jagger grunted as he stepped forward and picked Kenny up one handed , dropping him over his shoulder and leaving the room following the other people who had come in.

“And as for you Jessica….” said Jerek turning to the girl as they were the only ones left in the pit room, “I wouldn’t be calling Jagger an idiot. Remember, he became a ghoul from the ceremony because of an inner desire for eating constantly. Because we vampires can only feed on blood, his transformation pushed his appetite higher than blood to complete cannibalism. Don’t piss him off if you don’t want to end up as a meal…” said Jerek with a frown as he patted Jessica on the shoulder.

“I have don’t think that even I could restrain him if he got hungry and turned his sights on you.” he added as they turned to leave the room.


Jagger carried Kenny to a room where he could recover, it was a seemingly medical room with bright lighting and having coffins instead of metical beds. Each coffin had a blood IV strapped to it to pump blood into vampires too weak to feed on their own while they healed.

Jagger quickly placed him into a coffin and attached the IV to him as he let the blood pump in then turned and left the room with Kenny still laying naked in the coffin.


A few minutes later, after Jagger returned to his room to continue eating, Lord Jerek had rounded up the females of the group. There was of course Jessica, but then there were two of the three extra people who had come to the ritual.

One was an older girl who was probably around Jerek’s age. She had long blond hair reaching to her shoulders and a rather athletic build like a swimmer or track runner. Her strange green eyes seemed to glow whenever she turned her head a certain way in the light up room. She was wearing a black turtle neck sweater with some black jeans and knee high boots. This was Rosa, she was Jerek’s first turned Vampire and also lover. She was a succubus, the female version for what Kenny had become.

The other girl was in between Rosa and Jessica’s age. She had flowing red hair that reached down to her knees almost like silk, her pale white skin and deep blue eyes gave her an almost innocent looking appearance. She was wearing a blue wind breaker with a yellow tank top under it, she also wore some blue parachute material pants and yellow flip flops giving her the appearance of a kung fu fighter in terms of dress. She was Jerek’s second female vampire, being turned shortly after Jagger. Her name was Emily and she was a half vampire. Her ritual only went through 50% of the change before she climbed out of the pit.

“Ladies, I’m sure you are all aware that our newest member Kenny has passed the ceremony and has become an incubus.” said Jerek as he sat on his throne with the three females before him.

“I shouldn’t have to explain what complications this may have… especially to you Rosa.” he continued as all four of them remembered when they first met Rosa and how she tried to seduce and/or rape any of the male vampires she met or any male at all!

“I don’t want a repeated incident from Rosa being done on the females, Jagger still won’t quit laughing about because of his vampire breed being genderless.” said Jerek. Rosa growled at this as she remembered the great lengths she went to in order to get the ghoul naked and alone, only to find out she couldn’t have any fun with him.

“So for the first few nights, I want you girls to stay clear away from Kenny until he learns to control his lust on an at least humane level. This won’t be easy, fresh turned incubus and succubus are always flat out rapists, but it can be controlled like Rosa if given time.” said Jerek. “Dismissed!” he finished.

At those words, Emily and Jessica vanished in a blur of wind, but Rosa simply turned and walked away seductively swaying her hips as she did so. She tried to put as much effort into it as she could before being startled by her master’s shout.

“No, Rosa. You can not seduce me into giving you special permission!” shouted Jerek. At this, Rosa jumped a bit in surprise but finally stamped her foot down and vanished in a blur of wind like the other two.


Meanwhile….

Kenny moaned as he opened his eyes and sat up to a sharp pain in his left arm. Looking over, he saw the IV plugged into him and he gently removed it as the wound quickly healed over to his surprise. As he looked around the medical room, one thought came to his mind as he voiced it out.

“Fuck…. I’m horny!”
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