The Guardian Chronicles: An Encounter
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Original - Misc › -Slash - Male/Male
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
2
Views:
1,096
Reviews:
4
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
Teaser - Part 2
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“You know,” the demon started almost conversationally, over-bright eyes and a too-calm voice the only betraying sign of his desire as he started to lazily thrust in and out of the trembling guardian, “you have no right to still be this tight.”
“I mean,” he sat back with a soft hiss, spreading pale legs to rest on either side of him as he pulled almost completely out, keeping the guardian’s arms locked behind him, bending forward to drop a soft, nipping kiss on a temptingly smooth thigh. “I did use four fingers on you. You would think you’d be looser after that, wouldn’t you?”
“But no.” Then he pulled the guardian down hard on his length at the same time that he thrusted upwards, sinking deeper into the tight passage and twisting his hips to dig in further, relishing the wide-eyed, jerking scream. “You’re still so – “ Not pulling out, but rocking his hips, rubbing against the guardian’s prostate “ – tight.”
Not giving any warning, he immediately started moving again, pounding against the guardian’s prostate with unerring accuracy, giving Thalis no further time to gather himself, to adjust to his size. His hands immediately moved up and behind Thalis, prodding hard at the sensitive nerves there once more, watching as the guardian lost all semblance of self-control, defeated and overwhelmed by the encompassing, violent tide of pleasure.
He drew the other close, not once stopping in his movements as he pushed harder and harder into Thalis’ shoulder blades and pounded into the guardian, hips jerking faster and faster with every passing moment, thinking that the sensations Thalis was experiencing must be beyond maddening right now, judging from the rising pitch of the screams.. Even if the rising pleasure that was engulfing him as well had distilled all that complex thought to an incomprehensible rush of desire and pride...
Mostly desire.
There was a small part him that wondered why that was a bad thing even as he gave himself over to sensation. He could feel boiling lust and desire rushing, pushing him far past what even he could endure.
The headboard of the bed banged repeatedly against the wall with the force of Tarryn’s thrusts, sending a white-hot explosion of pleasure inside Thalis that tore him apart and remade him in an agonizing burst of ecstasy, flooding his senses and overwhelming him to the point where he no longer knew what he was beyond a being of pure pleasure, subject only to the whims of delirious rapture as he came.
Only to jerk and writhe as something cinched around the base of his cock, keeping him from climax, driven higher by brutal, stabbing thrusts by a still hard shaft that pushed him to the pinnacle of orgasm yet had him dancing on the razor-thin edge between pain and pleasure. He sobbed in frustration as the demon’s hand wrapped around his length and began stroking, fisting him roughly.
“Oh gods Tarryn please, please I can’t take it it feels too good please please please let me – let me – ” He was begging and he knew it. It was a far cry from his insistent objections a while ago, an eternity ago, but right now he simply didn’t care. He didn’t even know what he was asking the demon to let him do, only dimly knew that he needed something, needed anything to satisfy the raging heat burning him from the inside out and didn’t know what. “I need – I need - ”
“You need what, Thalis?” He kept himself ruthlessly in check, growing unbelievably harder as he watched the guardian beg him, pale body writhing and pulling at the magical bindings keeping his arms pinned above his head. A long nail fingered the tip of the pulsing cock he held in his hand, and he smirked as the body underneath him grew rigid while a tortured cry of pleasure filled the air. “To come?”
“Tell me,” he hissed, nails scraping gently down the side of the other’s length, adding an edge of pain to the already heady mix of sensations. “Tell me,” he repeated with a particularly hard thrust that inspired another whimpering cry, “Beg me for what you need.”
“Please, gods please, Tarryn, let me come, please let me come, it’s too much and I can’t take it and please please please I’m begging you please – mmph!” The words were suddenly cut off as Tarryn roughly claimed that mouth, that oh so sweetly begging mouth that would be his undoing if he let it.
Tarryn pulled away, gritting his teeth. He was refusing to come by sheer will alone, determined to send Thalis spiralling into oblivion first.
“Thalis.” Was that raspy, animal-like sound really him? He leaned into the guardian, furiously thrusting into him as the hand wrapped around the bobbing length between them moved faster.
“Come for me.” He bit harshly into Thalis’ shoulder, drawing blood, though the slight pain never registered as the guardian’s body tightened, arching, bending backwards almost in two as it contorted harshly in climax that wrung every single drop of energy from Thalis’ limbs even as it flooded them in ecstasy. The warm wash of liquid inside him told him that Tarryn climaxed as well, and, limbs trembling, he gladly, gratefully relaxed back into the bed.
The last thing he saw before he was dragged down to the depths of unconsciousness was a confusing mix of pure self-satisfaction and tenderness in emerald eyes, and a loving smile.
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AN: I've just realized that despite all my good intentions, I haven't updated any of my stories - even my planned ones - in over a month (or two). *sheepish grin* So here is where I offer all my heartfelt apologies to any who have yet to give up on my work... Along with the final part of this teaser for those who might have been just a tad frustrated by the abrupt ending in the first chapter... *cough Yami Akurei coughcough*
I must admit, though, that writing lemon scenes isn't exactly my area of expertise (which is why I hadn't posted the second part right away), so if this second part is lacking or disappointing in any way, well.. I tried. ^^;; I am, of course, open to any suggestions to better this scene (because it's both embarrassing and difficult to write these parts in a story, however necessary they might be).. And if it is truly beyond redemption, then.. Don't hate it too much, is all I can ask.
In response to another review.. I'm afraid that for the moment, the somewhat ambiguous nature of a Guardian will be determined on another time. I hadn't quite gotten the response I'd hoped when I posted the teaser, and so I have temporarily left The Guardian universe and started planning on a new story. A crossover, this time, instead of original work. It will involve the BtVS and The Mummy universes, for the most part, and the main pairing will be Xander/Imhotep, with other pairings cropping up as I go along. I will continue working on The MoS, however, though at the moment I've hit a rather nasty writer's block, and may actually restructure that story.
As a peace offering, if any readers would like to immediately know when I update any story (or post a new one), simply e-mail me at jaded_apathetic@yahoo.com to tell me. I will then contact you once I do update.
Cheers,
Jade Ai
“You know,” the demon started almost conversationally, over-bright eyes and a too-calm voice the only betraying sign of his desire as he started to lazily thrust in and out of the trembling guardian, “you have no right to still be this tight.”
“I mean,” he sat back with a soft hiss, spreading pale legs to rest on either side of him as he pulled almost completely out, keeping the guardian’s arms locked behind him, bending forward to drop a soft, nipping kiss on a temptingly smooth thigh. “I did use four fingers on you. You would think you’d be looser after that, wouldn’t you?”
“But no.” Then he pulled the guardian down hard on his length at the same time that he thrusted upwards, sinking deeper into the tight passage and twisting his hips to dig in further, relishing the wide-eyed, jerking scream. “You’re still so – “ Not pulling out, but rocking his hips, rubbing against the guardian’s prostate “ – tight.”
Not giving any warning, he immediately started moving again, pounding against the guardian’s prostate with unerring accuracy, giving Thalis no further time to gather himself, to adjust to his size. His hands immediately moved up and behind Thalis, prodding hard at the sensitive nerves there once more, watching as the guardian lost all semblance of self-control, defeated and overwhelmed by the encompassing, violent tide of pleasure.
He drew the other close, not once stopping in his movements as he pushed harder and harder into Thalis’ shoulder blades and pounded into the guardian, hips jerking faster and faster with every passing moment, thinking that the sensations Thalis was experiencing must be beyond maddening right now, judging from the rising pitch of the screams.. Even if the rising pleasure that was engulfing him as well had distilled all that complex thought to an incomprehensible rush of desire and pride...
Mostly desire.
There was a small part him that wondered why that was a bad thing even as he gave himself over to sensation. He could feel boiling lust and desire rushing, pushing him far past what even he could endure.
The headboard of the bed banged repeatedly against the wall with the force of Tarryn’s thrusts, sending a white-hot explosion of pleasure inside Thalis that tore him apart and remade him in an agonizing burst of ecstasy, flooding his senses and overwhelming him to the point where he no longer knew what he was beyond a being of pure pleasure, subject only to the whims of delirious rapture as he came.
Only to jerk and writhe as something cinched around the base of his cock, keeping him from climax, driven higher by brutal, stabbing thrusts by a still hard shaft that pushed him to the pinnacle of orgasm yet had him dancing on the razor-thin edge between pain and pleasure. He sobbed in frustration as the demon’s hand wrapped around his length and began stroking, fisting him roughly.
“Oh gods Tarryn please, please I can’t take it it feels too good please please please let me – let me – ” He was begging and he knew it. It was a far cry from his insistent objections a while ago, an eternity ago, but right now he simply didn’t care. He didn’t even know what he was asking the demon to let him do, only dimly knew that he needed something, needed anything to satisfy the raging heat burning him from the inside out and didn’t know what. “I need – I need - ”
“You need what, Thalis?” He kept himself ruthlessly in check, growing unbelievably harder as he watched the guardian beg him, pale body writhing and pulling at the magical bindings keeping his arms pinned above his head. A long nail fingered the tip of the pulsing cock he held in his hand, and he smirked as the body underneath him grew rigid while a tortured cry of pleasure filled the air. “To come?”
“Tell me,” he hissed, nails scraping gently down the side of the other’s length, adding an edge of pain to the already heady mix of sensations. “Tell me,” he repeated with a particularly hard thrust that inspired another whimpering cry, “Beg me for what you need.”
“Please, gods please, Tarryn, let me come, please let me come, it’s too much and I can’t take it and please please please I’m begging you please – mmph!” The words were suddenly cut off as Tarryn roughly claimed that mouth, that oh so sweetly begging mouth that would be his undoing if he let it.
Tarryn pulled away, gritting his teeth. He was refusing to come by sheer will alone, determined to send Thalis spiralling into oblivion first.
“Thalis.” Was that raspy, animal-like sound really him? He leaned into the guardian, furiously thrusting into him as the hand wrapped around the bobbing length between them moved faster.
“Come for me.” He bit harshly into Thalis’ shoulder, drawing blood, though the slight pain never registered as the guardian’s body tightened, arching, bending backwards almost in two as it contorted harshly in climax that wrung every single drop of energy from Thalis’ limbs even as it flooded them in ecstasy. The warm wash of liquid inside him told him that Tarryn climaxed as well, and, limbs trembling, he gladly, gratefully relaxed back into the bed.
The last thing he saw before he was dragged down to the depths of unconsciousness was a confusing mix of pure self-satisfaction and tenderness in emerald eyes, and a loving smile.
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AN: I've just realized that despite all my good intentions, I haven't updated any of my stories - even my planned ones - in over a month (or two). *sheepish grin* So here is where I offer all my heartfelt apologies to any who have yet to give up on my work... Along with the final part of this teaser for those who might have been just a tad frustrated by the abrupt ending in the first chapter... *cough Yami Akurei coughcough*
I must admit, though, that writing lemon scenes isn't exactly my area of expertise (which is why I hadn't posted the second part right away), so if this second part is lacking or disappointing in any way, well.. I tried. ^^;; I am, of course, open to any suggestions to better this scene (because it's both embarrassing and difficult to write these parts in a story, however necessary they might be).. And if it is truly beyond redemption, then.. Don't hate it too much, is all I can ask.
In response to another review.. I'm afraid that for the moment, the somewhat ambiguous nature of a Guardian will be determined on another time. I hadn't quite gotten the response I'd hoped when I posted the teaser, and so I have temporarily left The Guardian universe and started planning on a new story. A crossover, this time, instead of original work. It will involve the BtVS and The Mummy universes, for the most part, and the main pairing will be Xander/Imhotep, with other pairings cropping up as I go along. I will continue working on The MoS, however, though at the moment I've hit a rather nasty writer's block, and may actually restructure that story.
As a peace offering, if any readers would like to immediately know when I update any story (or post a new one), simply e-mail me at jaded_apathetic@yahoo.com to tell me. I will then contact you once I do update.
Cheers,
Jade Ai