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Lovers

By: TimsStrawberry
folder Erotica › General
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 2
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Now it's my Turn!

Hey everyone! Thanks for the reviews! Let me start off by answering some of the reviewers. If you hate this part, then just skip down to the story!

justanoderwanabe: Thanks for being my very first reviewer! You rock! I’m glad you enjoy the story so far. Hopefully you’ll enjoy this chapter too. BTW, you really think he’s lucky huh? I’m afraid you’re wrong. I’m the lucky one! I’d be lost without my lover! ^_~

aquamum: Yes, I agree! It’s a wonderful thing to wake up to. Sorry about the whole one big block thing. I changed it though. Enjoy the story!

your puppy: awww thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it that much!!!! Sorry about the repetitiveness….*checks the word for any spelling mistake* oh well….I hope you enjoy this chapter!

Butt-Goblin: As I stated in the summary, there is absolutely no plot to this story. If I randomly decide to have a plot, I’ll make sure to put that at the beginning or ending of one of the chapters. I’m kinda writing as I go, so things will hopefully fall into place.

NOW THAT THAT’S OUT OF THE WAY…ON WITH THE STORY!!!!
***RECAP OF LAST TIME***
…He continued to lick at me, letting his tongue plunge inside of me every once in a while just so he could hear me scream. It was becoming harder and harder to concentrate on not overflowing until, finally, I came. His name passed my lips as he greedily lapped up my juices like a dog deprived of water. He gave a few more loving licks before I had regained enough strength to flip us over so I would be on top…Now…it’s my turn to have some fun!
***STORY BEGINS***
I hovered over him with a wicked grin. He reached up and gingerly touched my face. He slowly moved his fingertips across my cheek. My smile never faded. I pulled back after a moment then moved close to him, our lips so close they brushed against each other with every word I said: “No, no lover. I told you already. It’s my turn to have some fun. Just lay back and enjoy yourself. Let me show you how much I care, baby.”
With that said, I leaned down and our lips pressed together. My hands were on either side of his head to hold myself up. Both his hands were holding onto my waist. Our kiss was long and slow, sweet and passionate. His hand started sliding up my back with delicate grace, leading itself to my hair tie. With the utmost care, he pulled my black scrunchie off and tossed it aside.

Once the loss of oxygen became too much to bear, our lips parted and we instantly filled our lungs with air. I sat up and gazed down at my lover’s well-toned chest with admiration shining in my eyes. Using my nails I carefully began to trace the outline of his muscles. His eyes closed and his head tilted back ever-so slightly. I watched his face, carefully noting every facial expression that crossed it. I suddenly stopped and rose to stand at the end of the bed. His lower lip slid into a pout as he rested all his weight on his arms, trying to see why I hadn’t bothered to finish what I had started.
My waist length hair covered part of my face as I stared back at his wanting expression. Moving to my own rhythm, my hips began to sway back and forth. I let my hands roam over the curve of my waist, up my stomach, and over my breasts. With this, he sat up straight, taking in the show. Soft moans escaped me as my fingertips ran over some sensitive spots on my body. Because he was sitting up, I had a clear view of his erection.

He made a move to touch himself, in order to alleviate some of his sexual tension, but I stopped him. “No baby,” I said, “you must sit there and watch. No touching allowed. I already told you, it’s my turn now!” He reluctantly pulled his hand away, whimpering slightly from the loss. I smirked in satisfaction. He couldn’t resist me! What a wonderful feeling!

Small whimpering sounds and moans floated to my ears. I began to move again. Swaying my hips and pleasuring myself was too much for him to bear. He lunged at me, immediately claiming my lips with his own while letting his hands explore my body. I let him have a bit of fun before pushing him back onto the bed. He growled from deep within his chest, something he just recently figured out. Returning my own growl, I went back to slowly torturing him.

I could feel the head steadily growing in between my legs until, finally, one of my fingers plunged deep inside of me. My mouth opened in a silent scream. I took note that he was gripping extremely tightly onto our red, silk sheets. My poor lover was trying very hard not to do anything. After a few more moments of watching him twist and turn on the bed, I moved closer to him. I turned so my back was to him and gently sat on his lap. I began to move back and forth, rubbing up against his hardened member. He heaved a heavy sigh of relief and slid his hands onto my thighs.

A moan escaped me the moment the warmth he emitted was felt. We continued to move in a slow paced rhythm until I turned around, wanting to feel him inside of me. My lover moved back to give me room to put my legs on either side of him. From there, I carefully lifted up and back down again, letting his long, hard cock enter me. We both moaned in unison from the action. Both of my darling’s hands were on my waist, encouraging me to continue by pressing on the small of my back. Together, we moved in sync. He buried his face into the nape of my neck and huskily called out my name.

Before long, I pushed him back so that he could relax on the bed. My right hand lay upon his gorgeous chest while my other hand rested right below his belly button. With me straddling his waist, I had complete control. My lover was still deep inside of me, pressing against a sensitive spot. I began to rock back and forth on my lover, pleasuring us both at the same time. He closed his eyes almost immediately after I started moving. His grip on my waist tightened as he big his lip, trying to keep silent. But I couldn't have that now could I? Simply unacceptable!

I stopped all movement and leaned close to his ear. My heated tongue slid out of my mouth and ran over his ear, making my darling lover tremble with delight. "Moan for me, darling, or I will get off. Just as you wanted to hear me, I desire to hear your sweet moans." He did the only thing he could in his current state of mind...he nodded his head. I couldn't help myself, I had to giggle. He was just so cute.

I started to move again. He held onto my waist tightly, helping me move on top of him. His breath quickened along with his heart rate. My sensitive nose detected how his natural scent spiked to new heights. Simply orgasmic! We continued to move together until my love moaned out "I'm about to cum..." I quickly stopped rocking and moved so he would slip out of me. He whimpered, whined, and once again wore that adorable pout on his lips. I had stopped just in time. My love as slightly hurt by me suddenly stopping. I had to make it up to him. “I’m sorry lover, please do not be mad. I just want to have more fun with you before you cum. Do forgive me..."

I stopped there so I could kiss along his neck. It seemed to lift his mood. He wasn't mad at me anymore. Now that he had calmed down a bit, I could continue with the sweet pleasure of torturing him. I moved from his neck down to his gorgeous chest. Oh how I loved his chest. So strong and well-toned; smooth, but defined. The sight of it practically made me drool. After leaving a few red marks on his chest, I began kissing my way down again. When I reached his pant-line, I stopped and hovered over him a bit. From here, I let my tongue do all the work. It slowly moved from one side of his waist to the other, causing mi amor to squirm in pleasure underneath me. Then I let it wander to his belly-button.

My tongue swirled around it in a way I knew he'd enjoy. He moaned loudly, letting me know he was enjoying the torture. In the middle of all my licking, his hand found its way, once again, to my hair. He gave a nice, confident tug. My love always knew what to do to turn me on in seconds. Once he pulled on my hair, I moved down further on him so I could be face to cock with him. I gave the very head of his hardened dick a slow lick then kissed it quickly. He sucked in a deep breath and let it out in a shuddered moan.


Author Note: hey everyone...um...this isn't all of chapter 2 as I'm sure you have already guessed. Some things are going on right now that's preventing me from finishing the chapter. Someone very special to me is currently extremely sick...I'd say, near the brink of death...and it's because of that reason that I must say it will be extremely hard for me to finish this chapter, let alone the story. This is as much as I had written up until now. I'll keep coming back on with "edits" and add on more whenever I have the time. I wasn't entirely sure when I'd get time to do anything so I figured I'd give you what I had now so I wouldn't have to make everyone wait for it. Please forgive me for leaving you at a cliff-hanger. I promise to try my best in finishing this chapter. Thank you. Read and Review please. Oh yeah, and sorry for any mistakes in this one...I didn't take time to try and edit anything...too much on my mind right now...

~*TimsStrawberry*~
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