Whimpers
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Original - Misc › -Slash - Male/Male
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
3
Views:
4,544
Reviews:
13
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
Chapter Two
Disclaimer: *holding ice-pack to her head* Yeah, umm... still mine. *looks around warily*
Warnings: And here’s the naughty stuff! *bows to imaginary audience* Thank you, thank you! ^^ Alright, so it’s just sex and language, but at least it’s hot n’ steamy, right?
Reviews: Not required, but greatly appreciated and a good source of motivation, too. ^__~ Oh, and I don’t mind if you flame me, but if you do could you at least have the courtesy to leave an e-mail so that I can respond? After all, if you managed to read it all the way through, there must be some redeeming value somewhere, right? (Oh, and there are review responses at the end!!)
Please note: This part is from the pet’s point on view, which means that the pet has become “he” and “He” has become “Master”. It shouldn’t be too confusing... I hope......
That being said: on with the second (and last?) chapter of “Whimpers”...
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“What is it that you want, my precious little pet? Tell me what you want, Lovely, and I just might be willing to give it to you...”
The wave of desire that he felt as his master whispered those words into his ear stole his breath away. Quick to recover, he wrapped his arms around the Master’s neck and pressed a fleeting kiss on the lips he loved so dearly before lifting himself the couple of inches needed to give the Master an answer.
“I want you in me, Master.” He said sincerely, and then nibbled on the tempting earlobe next to his mouth before continuing. “Fuck me? Please?”
A desperate, lusty moan was all the warning he received before his master pressed him firmly against the bed and those wonderful, strong, teasing fingers were removed from where they had been playing just moments before. He whimpered at the loss, and the answering moan was accompanied by a thrust of powerful hips. A shiver of need wracked his body at the feel of the Master’s hard cock pressed against his thigh, and he purposefully rocked upwards and let loose a few more whimpers to let his master know just how much he wanted – needed – that particular organ to move elsewhere.
Oh, yes, he was well aware of just how much his whimpers affected the Master. It was rather ironic, actually, that something that was now so desirable had once been an expression of sorrow, pain, and hopelessness. As a matter of fact, the Master had spent a considerable amount of time and money during the first year and a half after he had been purchased in order to make him stop whimpering.
‘Maybe that is why Master enjoys my whimpers so much,’ he mused. ‘Now that Master knows that my whimpers are from pleasure instead of pain or humiliation, He enjoys making me whimper as often as possible...’
A warm tongue lapping at a nipple brought him out of his thoughts rather quickly. “M-master... nnn......”
“What were you thinking about, Pet?” The Master asked, and the rich voice was like a wave of soothing warmth that took the edge off of the almost painful desire that burned throughout his entire body. “I know it wasn’t about what we are about to,” the Master continued, “because if it had had anything to do with me thrusting into you, you wouldn’t have stopped moving...” And then the tongue was back, accompanied this time by a playful set of teeth, and that burning pleasure-pain came back ten-fold and the need was even stronger than before.
“I was... oh, gods! I was thinking abou—ahh!! Before, Master – please, don’t stop! – I was thinking about before, and ha!! ...how, how now is so different.” He managed to gasp out.
“Mmmm... is that all?” the Master asked, and moved from his abused nipples to the most sensitive part of his neck.
Pants and gasps and whimpers – those stupid, silly whimpers that his Master loves so-so-so much – and moans and oh! How good that felt, and he can’t think, and didn’t the Master just ask him something? Yes, yes... (YES!) ...his master HAD asked something, but what was the – oh, THERE! – the answer? And, and......
“Whimpers, Master!” He shouted. “WHIMPERS! I was think about whimpers, and how you like it when I whimper, and now I’m thinking about how much I like your cock, and DAMMIT, Master, stop teasing and fuck me already because I need you in me NOW!!!”
And THIS time the Master listened, because there was a muffled moan, and a sudden shift, and a growl, and the next thing he felt was that wonderful, glorious, amazing burn of penetration and FINALLY his master was in him and SURELY it couldn’t get better than this...
But then it DID get better, because then his master was MOVING, and GODS did that feel perfect – better than perfect – and the Master was on him and around him and IN him (and out, and in, and out, and IN again) and he could feel ever inch of the Master’s cock as it moved and filled him and made him feel whole, and that large, warm, firm hand was wrapped around his need, and then! Then there was nothing but a bright light and a wonderful sense of fulfillment.
When he opened his eyes – he couldn’t remember closing them, but that didn’t matter – the first thing he saw was the Master, and he felt so safe and loved that he was afraid his heart would burst. But then his master (and only his, and always his, forever and ever and ever) smiled, and whispered something in his ear, and he realized that it was okay if his heart burst, because the Master would be there to take care of him.
“I love you, too, Master.” He whispered, and then fell asleep in his master’s arms knowing that – for now, at least – all was right in the world.
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A/N: And there it is! I plan to leave this as it is (I think...), but as I said before, there IS an actual story here, so if I have enough positive feedback (and if RL gives me the opportunity) I plan to write that story, as well... perhaps as a sort of “companion fic”, if you will. Thanks for reading, everyone!!!
Review responses:
-- Red hematite: Thank you so much for being my first reviewer! *huggles and gives chocolates* I’m so glad you liked it – hope you enjoy this chapter just as much. Oh, and the exam went well, so thanks for wishing me good luck...it came in handy! ^__^
-- Shadow: It would appear that we think very much alike! I’m glad you enjoyed the fic, and luckily I’m on Christmas break right now and was able to finish this. Thanks for your review – hope you did (do?) well on your finals! (Oh, and I completely agree about the TV thing, lol!)
-- Enigmaticpassions: Here’s more: hope you like! Oh, and you have a great name, btw! ^^
-- Anon: To whoever you are... thank you, and here’s more that’s even hotter! ^__~
Warnings: And here’s the naughty stuff! *bows to imaginary audience* Thank you, thank you! ^^ Alright, so it’s just sex and language, but at least it’s hot n’ steamy, right?
Reviews: Not required, but greatly appreciated and a good source of motivation, too. ^__~ Oh, and I don’t mind if you flame me, but if you do could you at least have the courtesy to leave an e-mail so that I can respond? After all, if you managed to read it all the way through, there must be some redeeming value somewhere, right? (Oh, and there are review responses at the end!!)
Please note: This part is from the pet’s point on view, which means that the pet has become “he” and “He” has become “Master”. It shouldn’t be too confusing... I hope......
That being said: on with the second (and last?) chapter of “Whimpers”...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
“What is it that you want, my precious little pet? Tell me what you want, Lovely, and I just might be willing to give it to you...”
The wave of desire that he felt as his master whispered those words into his ear stole his breath away. Quick to recover, he wrapped his arms around the Master’s neck and pressed a fleeting kiss on the lips he loved so dearly before lifting himself the couple of inches needed to give the Master an answer.
“I want you in me, Master.” He said sincerely, and then nibbled on the tempting earlobe next to his mouth before continuing. “Fuck me? Please?”
A desperate, lusty moan was all the warning he received before his master pressed him firmly against the bed and those wonderful, strong, teasing fingers were removed from where they had been playing just moments before. He whimpered at the loss, and the answering moan was accompanied by a thrust of powerful hips. A shiver of need wracked his body at the feel of the Master’s hard cock pressed against his thigh, and he purposefully rocked upwards and let loose a few more whimpers to let his master know just how much he wanted – needed – that particular organ to move elsewhere.
Oh, yes, he was well aware of just how much his whimpers affected the Master. It was rather ironic, actually, that something that was now so desirable had once been an expression of sorrow, pain, and hopelessness. As a matter of fact, the Master had spent a considerable amount of time and money during the first year and a half after he had been purchased in order to make him stop whimpering.
‘Maybe that is why Master enjoys my whimpers so much,’ he mused. ‘Now that Master knows that my whimpers are from pleasure instead of pain or humiliation, He enjoys making me whimper as often as possible...’
A warm tongue lapping at a nipple brought him out of his thoughts rather quickly. “M-master... nnn......”
“What were you thinking about, Pet?” The Master asked, and the rich voice was like a wave of soothing warmth that took the edge off of the almost painful desire that burned throughout his entire body. “I know it wasn’t about what we are about to,” the Master continued, “because if it had had anything to do with me thrusting into you, you wouldn’t have stopped moving...” And then the tongue was back, accompanied this time by a playful set of teeth, and that burning pleasure-pain came back ten-fold and the need was even stronger than before.
“I was... oh, gods! I was thinking abou—ahh!! Before, Master – please, don’t stop! – I was thinking about before, and ha!! ...how, how now is so different.” He managed to gasp out.
“Mmmm... is that all?” the Master asked, and moved from his abused nipples to the most sensitive part of his neck.
Pants and gasps and whimpers – those stupid, silly whimpers that his Master loves so-so-so much – and moans and oh! How good that felt, and he can’t think, and didn’t the Master just ask him something? Yes, yes... (YES!) ...his master HAD asked something, but what was the – oh, THERE! – the answer? And, and......
“Whimpers, Master!” He shouted. “WHIMPERS! I was think about whimpers, and how you like it when I whimper, and now I’m thinking about how much I like your cock, and DAMMIT, Master, stop teasing and fuck me already because I need you in me NOW!!!”
And THIS time the Master listened, because there was a muffled moan, and a sudden shift, and a growl, and the next thing he felt was that wonderful, glorious, amazing burn of penetration and FINALLY his master was in him and SURELY it couldn’t get better than this...
But then it DID get better, because then his master was MOVING, and GODS did that feel perfect – better than perfect – and the Master was on him and around him and IN him (and out, and in, and out, and IN again) and he could feel ever inch of the Master’s cock as it moved and filled him and made him feel whole, and that large, warm, firm hand was wrapped around his need, and then! Then there was nothing but a bright light and a wonderful sense of fulfillment.
When he opened his eyes – he couldn’t remember closing them, but that didn’t matter – the first thing he saw was the Master, and he felt so safe and loved that he was afraid his heart would burst. But then his master (and only his, and always his, forever and ever and ever) smiled, and whispered something in his ear, and he realized that it was okay if his heart burst, because the Master would be there to take care of him.
“I love you, too, Master.” He whispered, and then fell asleep in his master’s arms knowing that – for now, at least – all was right in the world.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
A/N: And there it is! I plan to leave this as it is (I think...), but as I said before, there IS an actual story here, so if I have enough positive feedback (and if RL gives me the opportunity) I plan to write that story, as well... perhaps as a sort of “companion fic”, if you will. Thanks for reading, everyone!!!
Review responses:
-- Red hematite: Thank you so much for being my first reviewer! *huggles and gives chocolates* I’m so glad you liked it – hope you enjoy this chapter just as much. Oh, and the exam went well, so thanks for wishing me good luck...it came in handy! ^__^
-- Shadow: It would appear that we think very much alike! I’m glad you enjoyed the fic, and luckily I’m on Christmas break right now and was able to finish this. Thanks for your review – hope you did (do?) well on your finals! (Oh, and I completely agree about the TV thing, lol!)
-- Enigmaticpassions: Here’s more: hope you like! Oh, and you have a great name, btw! ^^
-- Anon: To whoever you are... thank you, and here’s more that’s even hotter! ^__~