The End of Summer
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Category:
Erotica › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
2
Views:
1,362
Reviews:
0
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
Meet Suzie
Another plot one. You can see how Suzie is at home. The first one was sort of David’s background and now it’s Suzie’s.
Suzie’s POV
I couldn’t believe David is asking me out. I remember him from before, but he must have changed a lot. Why would David ask me out? I’ve seen some of my friends he’s dated. They were a lot better looking than me. Even they said that they were the bottom of his food chain. I can only see him through the descriptions my friends gave me. He’s tall, lots of muscles, and is one of those guys who play football. He has black hair that covers his eyes sometimes and he has a firm ass.
“Mom?”
“In here Suzie.” Mommy was in the dining room sewing a shirt together that I ripped.
“Hey mom? I can go out right?”
“You asked me yesterday and I said yes.”
“Yeah, but just checking if I still can.”
“Suzie, who is the boy again?”
“David. You remember him from a long time ago.”
“Oh, that boy? Suzie, you haven’t seen him in a long time.”
“Mommy, we’ve been through this discussion already.”
“I still don’t think you should be going on a date with boys yet.”
“I’m 17!”
“Not 18 though.”
“Mom, I’ll be okay.”
“When are you coming back?”
“I don’t know. Probably around 12:00.”
“That’s awfully late.”
“I’m going to college next year. It’s time for me to control myself.”
“Don’t do anything bad.”
“Mommy, did I ever give you any reason that I would?”
“No, I guess not.”
Mom is such a bitch sometimes. She is always guiding me like a young child. She can’t grasp the fact that her daughter is going out on a date. Still, David does seem a little shady. He’s changed a lot from his past years. He use to be short, flabby, and really naïve, but I guess time changes a lot of things. I ran upstairs to wear my make-up and perfume. It was around 7:15 by the time I was finished and I sat down on the couch. David walked into the room and I couldn’t believe what I was seeing.
“Wow. You look absolutely beautiful.”
“Thanks. You look great too.”
“Ready to go then?” I was just staring at him. The hair was split apart so you could see his eyes. Dark and deep. He was around 5’ 11” and I could see the muscles coming out of him. The clean example of the perfect body. He could be one of those Greek gods if he wasn’t Korean. His voice was deep and enticing.
“Yes.” I walked down to his car and turned around to say goodbye. When I reached his car, it was fitting his image. It was a white convertible with huge rims. It was a blue neon glow at the bottom of it. I suddenly felt inadequate compared to the other girls he’s gone out with. We went out for dinner and a cute movie. I could tell he was hating every minute of it, but I looked at him and saw that he wasn’t paying attention to the movie, but to me.
“David, what are you doing?”
“Looking at how lucky I got. You’re the most beautiful girl I’ve ever seen.” I looked down and blushed. He’s too good for me. I looked up and he smiled at me.
“I’m sorry, am I not good enough?” I was shocked. I thought I wasn’t good enough, but he thinks he isn’t?
“No, David. It’s just that I never thought it would be this way.”
“I hoped it would. You’re exactly the person I’ve been looking for.” I laid my head down on his shoulder and smiled. He wrapped his arm around me and kissed my forehead. I looked up and he stared into my eyes. He smirked and kissed my lips. It was the best thing that ever happened to me. I wanted to stay there forever. Having his arms around me and adoring me as I adored him. Finally, the movie ended and we walked back to his car. He kissed me as we were walking out.
“Suzie, I’ve been waiting to do that in a long time.” He was not as bad as I would have thought. I thought he would show up half-drunk and carry a box of condoms. He’s exactly the opposite. He’s nice, respectful, and smooth. I love him so much and that rock hard body makes it twice as good. I looked up at him again and he had a twinkle in his eye.
“Are you ready for that surprise?”
Suzie’s POV
I couldn’t believe David is asking me out. I remember him from before, but he must have changed a lot. Why would David ask me out? I’ve seen some of my friends he’s dated. They were a lot better looking than me. Even they said that they were the bottom of his food chain. I can only see him through the descriptions my friends gave me. He’s tall, lots of muscles, and is one of those guys who play football. He has black hair that covers his eyes sometimes and he has a firm ass.
“Mom?”
“In here Suzie.” Mommy was in the dining room sewing a shirt together that I ripped.
“Hey mom? I can go out right?”
“You asked me yesterday and I said yes.”
“Yeah, but just checking if I still can.”
“Suzie, who is the boy again?”
“David. You remember him from a long time ago.”
“Oh, that boy? Suzie, you haven’t seen him in a long time.”
“Mommy, we’ve been through this discussion already.”
“I still don’t think you should be going on a date with boys yet.”
“I’m 17!”
“Not 18 though.”
“Mom, I’ll be okay.”
“When are you coming back?”
“I don’t know. Probably around 12:00.”
“That’s awfully late.”
“I’m going to college next year. It’s time for me to control myself.”
“Don’t do anything bad.”
“Mommy, did I ever give you any reason that I would?”
“No, I guess not.”
Mom is such a bitch sometimes. She is always guiding me like a young child. She can’t grasp the fact that her daughter is going out on a date. Still, David does seem a little shady. He’s changed a lot from his past years. He use to be short, flabby, and really naïve, but I guess time changes a lot of things. I ran upstairs to wear my make-up and perfume. It was around 7:15 by the time I was finished and I sat down on the couch. David walked into the room and I couldn’t believe what I was seeing.
“Wow. You look absolutely beautiful.”
“Thanks. You look great too.”
“Ready to go then?” I was just staring at him. The hair was split apart so you could see his eyes. Dark and deep. He was around 5’ 11” and I could see the muscles coming out of him. The clean example of the perfect body. He could be one of those Greek gods if he wasn’t Korean. His voice was deep and enticing.
“Yes.” I walked down to his car and turned around to say goodbye. When I reached his car, it was fitting his image. It was a white convertible with huge rims. It was a blue neon glow at the bottom of it. I suddenly felt inadequate compared to the other girls he’s gone out with. We went out for dinner and a cute movie. I could tell he was hating every minute of it, but I looked at him and saw that he wasn’t paying attention to the movie, but to me.
“David, what are you doing?”
“Looking at how lucky I got. You’re the most beautiful girl I’ve ever seen.” I looked down and blushed. He’s too good for me. I looked up and he smiled at me.
“I’m sorry, am I not good enough?” I was shocked. I thought I wasn’t good enough, but he thinks he isn’t?
“No, David. It’s just that I never thought it would be this way.”
“I hoped it would. You’re exactly the person I’ve been looking for.” I laid my head down on his shoulder and smiled. He wrapped his arm around me and kissed my forehead. I looked up and he stared into my eyes. He smirked and kissed my lips. It was the best thing that ever happened to me. I wanted to stay there forever. Having his arms around me and adoring me as I adored him. Finally, the movie ended and we walked back to his car. He kissed me as we were walking out.
“Suzie, I’ve been waiting to do that in a long time.” He was not as bad as I would have thought. I thought he would show up half-drunk and carry a box of condoms. He’s exactly the opposite. He’s nice, respectful, and smooth. I love him so much and that rock hard body makes it twice as good. I looked up at him again and he had a twinkle in his eye.
“Are you ready for that surprise?”