Closer

Wow, friggin’ wow you guys. Thank you so, so much, Tirch, Gypsi, animegirl007, shaz, and Black Butterfli. Gypsi- absolutely. Whatever it takes!! [j/k, ok, not really]. I would have posted this sooner, but I was out of town. But here I am, and here it is. If any of you listen to Luther Vandross, I’d recommend listening to his “Wait for Love,” “Love Won’t Let Me Wait,” “The Other Side of the World,” or “If Only for One Night.” These songs were, after all, the inspiration for this scene, as you shall see…



Spying a box of Kleenex on the dresser, he grabbed two. With his back to her, he took off his shorts and shoes and began wiping the rest of the peach flavored gel off of himself. Tossing the tissue wads into the trash, he turned and faced her, loving the soft glow the candles put her in. She was quite the sight- long, soft, brown limbs. He looked at the delicate lace covering her chest, and knew more than wondered that she had matching panties underneath. With the grace of a lanky jungle cat, he got on the bed before her. Looking into her dark eyes, he grasped the waistband of her shorts and slowly pulled them down her legs. He was right- blue lace panties. They were much sexier than any thong he’d ever seen on some girl. But Rosalyn was classy after all.

“How long have you been planning this?” He asked, marveling at her body as he began caressing her- arms, shoulders, breasts, belly and outer thighs. She imperceptibly shivered underneath him.

“Ever since I knew I wanted it to be you.”

“And when was that?”

“I’m not sure. Why?”

“Just curious, that’s all.” He was driving her insane with his gentle touch. His fingers seemed to leave a trail of heat, burning her skin.

“The- they’re in my top dresser drawer.” She practically panted out.

“What? Oh…” He got up again and retrieved the new, large, unopened box of Trojans.

“Economy size?” Rosalyn could feel the blood rush to her face when he rhetorically asked that.

“It was cheaper that way, that’s all. My mom has a Sam’s card, and I thought-“

“No, it’s alright. I was just kidding with you anyway. Quite the challenge, though.” He murmured thoughtfully. He took one out and fingered it in his hand as he pondered something.

“Something’s missing… I know.” He turned and bent down towards her CD player. Turning it on, he simply pressed play. Luther Vandross’s “Wait for Love” began filtering out.

“Knowing love the way I do,
I can say for certain that it’s true.
There’s a chance for me and you.”

“Sean, how’d you-“

“I know you.”

“Honestly, you made me forget I even put a CD in there.” He gave her a slightly shy smile before joining her on the queen sized bed.

“And to start believing there could
One day be, be a chance. Whoa-
For me to get the love
[that I’ve been missing].
Some time’s love
[tales a long time].
But wait for love
[And you’re gonna get the]
Chance to love.
Wait for love; wait for love-
Oh, my…”

“I’m glad, you know. That you waited for me.” He said, pulling down the straps of her bra.

“Well, you waited for me too.” She whispered, lifting up slightly so that he could unclasp the lacey garment.

“It was well worth it.” He replied, tossing her bra to the floor. He kissed her hungrily, his eager hands pulling down her panties. She helped by toeing them off. Taking his erection in his hands, he began to rub his soft, sensitive tip slowly up and down her cleft. She gasped loudly at the smooth feeling sensation. He looked at her, the irises of her eyes dominating her dark brown pupils. He gently pushed two of his fingers inside of her insanely wet opening. She was more than ready. She nodded a yes to his unasked question.

Bringing the condom packet to his mouth, he tore it open. She watched as he rolled it on, wondering how much it would hurt on a scale of one through ten when was finally inside of her. He wasn’t humongous, but still much larger than average. He grabbed her right hand with his, stretching their arms above her head. She grasped his shoulder with her left. Positioning himself at her center, he thought if it would be better to go in all the way at once, or slowly inch by inch. He decided on the latter. He had never been with a virgin before, but thought that it would be best taking it nice and slow.

“I’m not going to lie to you. This is going to hurt a lot before it feels good. This might sound terribly sadistic, but try to feel the pleasure the pain. I’m not sure I said that exactly right, but…”

“No, I get it. Okay.” She said, bracing herself, her body tensing beneath him.

“No, baby. Relax.” He whispered before kissing her tenderly on the lips. Their faces were so close that their noses were touching. He gazed into her eyes as he pushed his head inside of her for a second before pulling back out. She gasped, her eyes slightly closing. Then he pushed in an extra inch, then another before pulling almost all the way out. A whimpered “mmph” was her response. With labored breath and mouth agape, he pushed all the way inside of her in one long, gently as possible, thrust. She cried out as he growled, their hands gripping each other tightly. Giving her several seconds to adjust, he slowly began thrusting inside of her.

“And I need your love so desperately.
And only you can set me free.”

‘Oh god. She’s so wet, and tight, and hot… So beautiful. I love her. Love her…’

“Rosalyn…” He moaned.

‘Love you, Rosalyn. Love you…”

“When I make love to you,
We’ll explode in ecstasy.”

“Uh- Sean…”

‘It hurts so much. Feel so… oh, god, yes. Him. I love- him. Love him. Love Sean so much… Oh.’

“Oh, baby; sweetheart. Shit, Rosalyn, I’m so-“His thrusts quickened. Her toes dug into the mattress, her body arching up and into him as her hips rocked back and forth with his. He rubbed her most sensitive spot in earnest, rolling into her harder and deeper. Her breathy pants surrounded him, bringing him even closer to the edge. She shivered, convulsed, and quaked on the inside, squeezing him.

“And I won’t take the blame
That love won’t let me wait.”

Rosalyn’s body tensed. She shut her eyes as she felt the most powerful, explosive orgasm ever in her life. A shocked sob escaped her lips.

“My temperature’s risin’. Ooh,
Love won’t let me wait;
Not another minute.”

Three hard, vigorous thrusts right after, Sean came with a roar- the most intense orgasm in his life. He didn’t think it possible to come that long or that much. Now he knew better.

“- in love with you. I love you, Rosalyn.” He said, his body nearly collapsing atop hers. He gently kissed her neck.

‘He loves me.’ Exhaling, she held him to her, a tears forming in her eyes. She blinked them away, feeling a few roll down her cheek. Cradling him between her legs and holding him close, she whispered to him, “I love you too. I love you so much Sean.”



A/N: So, what’d ya think? Too many lyrics? Not long enough? Missing anything? Cheesy on some parts? LET ME KNOW, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!