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Angel or Demon

By: ViridianLibrarian
folder Original - Misc › General
Rating: Adult +
Chapters: 14
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Disclaimer: This is an original story, set in a setting all of my own. This story belongs to me. All contents and characters are entirely fictional, and any resemblance to person(s) living or dead is purely coincidental.
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Part 1: Introductions

So a friend challenged me to write a choose-your-own. I'd never done that before and said no way, but then I started writing anyway, because I'm crazy and like to torture myself, I guess. To start out, it was supposed to be Mass Effect, because of course it was, with every choice being a paragon/renegade option. But then the characters of Angela and Demona appeared, and, well - things changed. I hope you like it, and would be delighted if you'd like to tell me what path you took and what you thought of it in a review. 
PS: I had no idea what I was doing most of the time. Especially while writing the angel parts. Ugh. What is this "nice" stuff anyway? *shifty eyes* And if you like to avoid the bdsm, er, go all angel and then skip the last part. Yeah. 

 

Part 1: Introductions

Oh, hello there! You must be the new pilot, right? Delighted to meet you. I hope you’re ready to get started right away? Good! Well, I suppose some introductions are in order. Me? Oh, no, don’t mind me; I’ll leave shortly. But I assume you would like a good look at your charge? Well, her name is Raine, and... oh, we should  find a mirror! Ah, yes, here we are. A beauty, isn’t she? Yes, she does dye her hair, but it goes so well with those sparkling eyes of hers, and takes attention away from her nose. Yes, well, can’t have everything, right? Her body quite makes up for any minor faults with her face, anyway. Oh, but don’t let the curves and the softness fool you; she works out and has stamina enough for... well, I’m sure you’ll find out all about that. Anyway!

Oh, is this the new pilot? Are you doing introductions? Will you introduce me, next?

You! Who cares about you! Introduce me; I’m the important one!

Ladies, ladies, please... I’ll introduce both of you. Pilot, these are your co-workers, Angela and Demona. Yes, everyone has their own set – some are more creatively named, I’ll admit – and yes, they all look like good and bad representations of their charge, though you shouldn’t let that fool you! Angela’s advice isn’t always good, and Demona’s advice isn’t always bad, just... different. They both know Raine quite well, though, and want to do what’s best for her. As I’m sure you do as well? Well, of course you do. You’re probably eager to get started, too? That’s good, because I believe we have a situation building up... Well, I’m sure it’s nothing you three can’t handle! I’ll be on my merry way, then. The stage is yours...

~*~

“Honey, I’m home!”

Raine slammed the door behind her and stopped by the mirror on her way to the living room, leaving her clothes in a haphazard mess on the floor. She’d tidy up later; right now she just really wanted to see her girlfriend. Commuting one hour each way every day was going to kill her sooner or later.

Shia didn’t answer her call, though, at least not with anything more than a noncommittal grunt. She was leaning over her desk, biting on a pencil, while another pencil rested behind her ear and a third held up her long hair in a messy bun.  The desk was strewn with papers. Raine sighed inwardly; pulling Shia away from her work was sometimes an almost herculean task. But she really wanted to do something with her! She’d missed her a lot today, and had been thinking about her a lot, and, well, eventually her thoughts had taken a naughty turn and now... well, she was just really horny! But how to make Shia understand that...?

Oh, I can do that! I’ve got an idea for a romantic scene she won’t be able to turn down. She’ll be so relaxed and happy and grateful, they’ll both have the time of their lives!

Ugh, no. I know what your ideas are like, and it’s going to take forever! Poor Raine shouldn’t have to wait so long... not when I know how to get what we want right away.

(If you want to listen to Angela, go to part 2b. If you want to listen to Demona, go to part 2a.)

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