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Brittany's Trance

By: amnimal
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Brittany's Trance

"But Mo-om!" complained Brittany. "I'm supposed to hang out with Ashley tonight!"

"For pete's sake Brit, you're eighteen years old. Stop acting like a child." said her mom, checking her purse to make sure she had everything she needed.

Brittany took a deep breath and calmed herself. Her body was fit from years' experience with the cheerleading squad, with long dark hair framing her pretty face and draping past her shoulders. Her large d-cup breasts strained against the fabric of her babydoll t-shirt, while the form of her long, sexy legs was accentuated by her tight flared jeans.

"It still isn't fair. We've been planning this all week." said Brittany. "Jake's a responsible kid, he can take care of himself."

"You have a future in comedy, Brit." replied her mom.

Jake, responsible? It WAS a pretty ludicrous thing to say. "The least you could have done was tell me in advance instead of waiting until five minutes before you leave." said Brittany, a tone of indignity in her voice.

"It was a last minute thing for me too, honey. Damon just called a half hour ago and asked if I wanted to get dinner. He's a spur of the moment kind of guy."

"He's a jerk." said Brittany. "I don't know why you're wasting your time with him."

Her mother didn't reply, except to say, "Do you have your emergency numbers?"

"Yes." Brittany grumpily answered.

"Then I'll see you around midnight probably. Make sure Jake stays out of trouble, and get him in bed on time. And DON'T let him go over to Daniel's. He's doing homework tonight, and don't let him forget it."

"I won't."

"Thanks sweetie. Sorry." said her mom, pecking her on the cheek and hurrying out the door.

'You better be sorry.' thought Brittany, after hearing her mother's car leave the driveway. Making sure her demonic 10 year old brother did his homework was not her idea of an enjoyable Friday night. After calling Ashley and breaking the news that she'd have to miss the movie, she glanced at kitchen clock.

It was only 4:30. God, babysitting made the time move slow. And the little brat wasn't even home yet! How would she survive?

Just as she was thinking this, he walked in the front door.

"Mom! I'm home!" he called.

"Mom isn't here." said Brittany. "She's with Damon. I'm watching you tonight."

"Oh." he said. "Are those new shoes? They look amazing."

"Not gonna work." said Brittany. "You're staying home. Mom wants you to do homework."

Jake looked disappointed. "Any chance of appealing to your sense of decency?"

"After I had to cancel with Ashley to look after you? Not a chance." she said coldly. "You're lucky I'm not making you do MY homework too."

"I could make a break for it." said Jake. "You'd never catch me."

She laughed. "You, who sits around playing video games all day, versus me, in peak physical condition from sports? You gotta be kidding me."

"What are you talking about?" asked Jake. "Cheerleading isn't a sport."

"You say something?" asked Brittany, in total destruction mode.

"Wh-who me? Never!" said Jake quickly. "I'm just gonna go do my homework now..." He slowly backed away to his room.

While this kept Jake out of her hair, the beauty soon found herself getting bored anyway as she flipped through the TV channels. Seconds before her brain melted due to inactivity, Jake entered the room holding his textbook.

"Um, Brittany?" he asked. "Can you help me with this problem? I don't get what I'm doing wrong."

Brittany almost told him to do it himself, but figured it was at the very least something to do, and agreed. He joined her on the couch with the book open in his lap and pointed out the problem he was having trouble with.

"Oh, okay." said Brittany. She leaned over to him, her breasts swaying as she pointed at the book and explained his errors.

"So it's like this?" asked Jake. He did the problem.

"Yup, you got it." said Brittany. "Were there any others?"

"No, that was the last one. Thanks, sis." said Jake.

"Don't get used to it." she sighed, flopping back down on the couch and flipping through the channels again. Back to boredomland.

"Uh, Brittany? I was wondering, if you're not doing anything..." said Jake, "Do you think you could help me with something?"

"Like what?"

"I borrowed a book on hypnotism from the library and I was wondering if I could try it on you." he said. "I'm not going to make you do anything, I just want to see if I can put you in a trance."

Brittany laughed. "You don't actually believe that stuff, do you? Hypnosis is about as real as the tooth fairy."

"I dunno, the book seems pretty convincing." said Jake. "Pleeeeaase?"

Brittany shrugged. What was the harm? At least it was something to do. "I guess, but you're gonna feel like an idiot when nothing happens."

Jake grinned. "Alright! Thanks, Brittany! Let's do it in my room."

Brittany nodded and got up from the couch, then followed her brother to his bedroom. Posters from kids shows and video games covered the walls. Pokemon and Yu-Gi-Oh cards were stacked in various places. Against one wall was a kid-sized bunk bed. A small TV with an Xbox 360 hooked up to it sat in the corner. Nerd city.

"Ugh, do we have to do it in here?" asked Brittany. "Let's go back out to the den."

"The book says to do it in a place where you're comfortable." explained Jake. "Now sit down."

"I'm not hypnotized yet, say 'please', runt." said Brittany with a grin. She loved messing with him.

"Pleeeease." begged Jake.

"Very nice." said Brittany. She sat down crosslegged on his carpeted floor. He sat the same way, facing her. "Now what?"

"I want you to close your eyes." said Jake. Brittany did it, rolling them as she shut them.

"Take deep breaths. Inhale." Brittany did it. "Now exhale."

Brittany opened her eyes. "This is stupid."

"It doesn't work if you talk." said Jake, his voice maintaining a steady, calming monotone. She was surprised to see that his eyes were shut tight. He was really into it.

She shrugged and closed her eyes again. "Okay, now what?"

"I want you to visualize that you're sinking into the ocean." said Jake. "However you feel no fear. You feel calm and at peace. As you sink I will count down from 10 to 1. With every number I say, you will sink deeper into the ocean, and deeper into my trance."

He began counting down. Brittany cleared her mind and did her best to focus on sinking in the ocean, but she just couldn't do it. She was too much of a skeptic at heart to buy any of this mumbo jumbo. However, the sound of her brother's voice, steady and serene, paired with the images she conjured in her mind, did soothe her, and she began to feel very relaxed.

"One." Jake finally said. "You are now completely under my trance. You can open your eyes now." Brittany did so. "Anything I tell you to do, you will do without hesitation. Do you understand?"

Brittany almost gloated about how it didn't work, but she decided there was no harm in humoring the kid. Plus anything was better than being on the couch, suffering through late afternoon TV.

"Yes." she replied, keeping her voice and face expressionless.

Jake looked at her closely and laughed. "Oh, please. You're faking."

Brittany nearly laughed but remained without emotion.

"No one's buying it, Brittany." said Jake. "Bark like a dog."

"Woof! Woof!" barked Brittany.

"You're not even trying. Seriously, no dogs actually sound like that." said Jake, bringing up an excellent point. "Say 'Brittany is a total doofus.'"

Brittany chuckled internally. A doofus? That was the best he could do? "Brittany is a total doofus." she said without hesitation.

"Stop faking." ordered Jake.

"I'm not faking." said Brittany, maintaining her monotone.

Jake stared at her for a minute or so, trying to decide whether or not he'd actually done it. The book HAD said it would work... Maybe he really did have his sister under his control.

"Stand up and balance this book on your head." he said, handing a dictionary to her. She did so. "I'm going over to Daniel's. You will continue to balance that book, and will not move from that spot, until I give you permission. Understand?"

"I understand." said Brittany. "I will obey."

"Cool." said Jake. Brittany caught the expression of excitement on his face. He totally bought it. "Back later."

He left the room. She waited until she heard his bike tires crunch on the gravel in the driveway before she got rid of the book and went back to her room.

'Well, that was pointless.' she thought to herself, as she sat down in her desk chair and booted up her computer. 'Oh well, it's been a long time since I played with him, and it wouldn't hurt me to be at least a LITTLE nice to him before I head off to college next year.'

Once her computer started, she began searching the net for pictures of hot guys. Finding some, she slid a hand into her low riding jeans to fondle her soft pussy mound. Despite her jawdropping looks, she hadn't found the right guy and was still a virgin. However, she often fantasized about sex, like she was doing now as she fingered herself. She moaned out loud as she pictured these boys slamming into her virginal twat with their big cocks, her delicate fingers working magic on her moistening folds.

She was seconds away from coming when she heard her brother's bike outside. He was home already?! Did he forget something? She glanced at her computer clock. It was already 10:30! Apparently she'd gotten completely carried away with her masturbation and had lost track of time.

Brittany quickly shut down her computer and rushed back to Jake's room. She grabbed the book and placed it back on her head, resuming her standing position in the middle of the floor. Over three hours of slow burn fingering had left her horny beyond belief, and she cursed as she felt her hot, sticky juices drip down her leg under her jeans.

"Brittany? I'm home!" came her brother's voice.

She didn't say anything, and held her position. She heard his footsteps as he walked down the hallway towards the room. Only one pair, he was alone. "BRITTANY!" he called again.

"Weird, I wonder where she is?" she heard him mutter to himself, as he opened his bedroom door.

For a second he looked surprised to see her there, then a look of amazement crossed his face. "Oh yeah! I forgot! Awesome!"

He sat down on his bed and looked at her. "I guess it really did work. You can take that book off your head now." She did so, and dropped it on the floor.

"Now lets see, what should I make you do?" he wondered aloud.

'How about sending me back to my room so I can finish up?' thought Brittany impatiently.

"Clean my room." ordered Jake. "And do a really good job."

She winced. Clean his room?! That was too much to ask. She almost dropped the charade, but then reconsidered. His room wasn't really that dirty, and doing one little favor for him wouldn't kill her. "Okay." she said.

Brittany began to tidy up her little brother's room, putting books on shelves and stacking games and toys neatly in his closet. As she was wiping some dust off his computer monitor, she noticed something out of the corner of her eye. Jake was watching her a little too closely.

She was suddenly aware of all the tight clothing she was wearing. Was her little brother checking her out? Gross! But at the same time she was somewhat flattered, as far as she knew he wasn't really interested in girls yet, and she knew she'd have to be pretty hot for him to take interest in his own sister of all people.

"Okay, you can stop." he told her. "Come over here."

She obeyed and walked over to her little brother, standing before him impatiently. NOW could she go back to her room?! Her pussy was burning with desire for the touch of her hand, and she didn't know how much longer she could wait.

"Take off your shirt." he told her.

Brittany couldn't stop her jaw from dropping. The little pervert! That was it, it was over.

But she couldn't deny, as horniness clouded her judgement, that she was becoming aroused at the thought of letting her brother have a peek. That's all it would be, a peek, it's not like she was signing a contract to have sex with him or anything.

Blushing and not saying a word, she pulled the shirt over her head, revealing her white lacey bra to the room.

"Ah... cool." said Jake. He stepped forward and placed his hands softly on her ample chest. He squeezed them lightly and experimentally. "Wow, they're so soft..."

Brittany gasped. She knew she should have stopped him, but it just felt too good, and she couldn't bring herself to do it. She let out a moan of pleasure and her little brother abruptly stopped.

"What is it?" he asked her. "Does that hurt?"

"No... it feels good." she replied. Her head was swimming with lust, she couldn't believe how fiercely his touch had electrified her. She had to get out of here before she did something she'd regret. "Can I go back to my room now?"

"Not yet." he said. "Take off that thing first." He pointed at her bra.

Brittany felt conflicted. She knew she should have just told him it was all a joke and left before things got too serious. But deep down she truly wanted to flaunt her adult body for her scrawny little brother.

She reached for the clip on her back, and nervously undid it. This would be the first time anyone other than herself had seen her bare breasts. Butterflies fluttered in her stomach as she slipped the bra off and gently let it drop to the floor, exposing her large, beautifully round tits to the room.

"Wow, so that's what they look like." said Jake. He stepped forward, as though he was going to feel them again, but paused abruptly and glanced down at his crotch. "Wh-what?!"

He nervously unzipped his fly and fished his penis out of his boxers. It was probably about four inches in length, and stiff as a board. Brittany's eyes widened. It was the first penis she'd ever seen in real life.

"It's... it's hard!" exclaimed Jake. "Wh-what's happening? Is this because I'm looking at boobs?"

He tentatively wrapped his right hand around it. "It's warm too... this is weird."

He looked at his older sister for a second, then a grin crossed his face. "I'm going to make you do something really gross! I want you to lick my wee wee!"

Time seemed to stop as the weight of this statement hit her. Was this little boy, who didn't even know what an erection was until a few seconds ago, seriously asking her to give him a blowjob? No, she realized, he had no idea of the deed's sexual connotations, he just wanted her to do something humiliating, no different from when he told her to bark like a dog earlier that day. Granted, this was a little more extreme, and he knew that, but it was the same basic principle.

Plus, he wasn't asking her to do anything, he was TELLING her, and she was ashamed to admit that being ordered around was turning her on greatly. So greatly that she decided, against all her common sense, to do it.

"Okay, Jake." she said, getting on her knees in front of him.

"Hmm." said Jake. "And call me master."

"Yes... master." said Brittany, feeling her panties moisten again as the word left her lips.

She slowly began to lick his cock, starting at the head and working her way down his shaft to the base. She couldn't believe what she was doing. Here she was, a straight A high school senior, one of the stars of the cheerleading squad, who sported one of the sexiest, most desirable bodies in school, and she was on her knees fellating her nerdy elementary school brother while she called him her master. As these thoughts rushed through her head, she only found herself getting more turned on. Her pussy ached for contact, but she resisted the urge to pleasure herself lest Jake discover she was faking.

"Wha-?! It feels good!" exclaimed Jake. "Brittany, don't stop! Ah! Ahhh!"

Though it was obviously her first time giving head, she quickly got the hang of it, eventually taking his entire shaft into her mouth and sucking firmly while pleasuring him with her tongue.

"Oh my God! Sis! Your mouth feels amazing!" cried Jake. "I don't get it, why does it feel so good? Aaah! AH! What's happening?"

Brittany knew her little brother was about to cum, but she was too deep into it to back out now. Her desire had completely taken over her body now, and the older girl knew she wouldn't, COULDN'T stop until she was somehow satisfied.

"Aaah! Something's... something's happening! Wait! Aah! AAAAAAHHH!" he cried, as a huge burst of boiling hot cum jetted into his sisters mouth. She instinctively swallowed the first couple loads, but more and more of it kept coming and it wasn't long before she had to spit his cock out and take the rest on her face and tits. More cum came out of Jake's little cock than she ever thought was possible, and by the time he was done she was drenched in thick, warm ropes of brotherly seed.

"Oh man! That... I don't know what just happened but it was amazing!" said Jake excitedly. "Uh, what is that stuff anyway?"

Brittany's mind was in a haze of lust. She couldn't believe she'd just given her kid brother his first orgasm, or that his steaming hot seed was splattered all over her adult face and big, firm tits. Though she wasn't really under hypnosis, she might as well have been, for she knew that at this point there was no turning back until she was satisfied.

"Um, take off your pants too." commanded Jake. She could tell he was confused but exhilarated, and eager to explore her body some more. She quickly did as he ordered, removing her panties as well, hot and sticky with her juices, without being prompted. She was now completely naked to her brother's curious eyes, and shivered as she felt his cum begin to cool while still on her body.

"What? You don't have a dick?" wondered Jake. Brittany resisted laughing. He didn't even know about THAT?

"Girls don't have dicks, they have vaginas." Brittany explained.

"Ohhh." said Jake, in a way that indicated he still didn't understand. He got on his knees in front of her and inspected her parts. Brittany could feel her heart pounding. This was by far the closest a boy had ever been to her private area. It didn't matter that it was her brother, the close proximity of another person seemed to make her pussy cry out for contact.

"So it's just a slit?" he asked.

"There's a little more than that." Brittany said. She reached a hand down and parted her pussy lips with two fingers, giving her brother a clear view of every inch of her beautiful dripping pink twat.

"Oh wow..." said Jake. He reached out a hand and gently caressed her snatch, gasping with surprise at how hot it was to the touch. "What's it for?"

"Well, when a boy and a girl like each other, and his dick gets hard, he sticks it in this hole here." said Brittany, pointing at the entrance to her tight love canal. "That's sex."

"Oh, so that's what sex is..." said Jake, blushing slightly. He noticed his cock was still erect, and gave it a couple experimental strokes. "L-lie down on your back so I can try it."

Brittany found it difficult to contain her eagerness as she laid down on her back and spread her legs. "O-of course, master!" She was about to lose her virginity! It didn't matter that she was going to lose it to her 10 year old brother, who she normally wouldn't have touched even if he was her age and unrelated. All her thoughts of saving herself for the perfect guy were thrown out the window as she anticipated the ravaging of her body by her scrawny brother.

Jake climbed on top of her, slowly and awkwardly leading his little prick to her sexy, inviting entrance. Brittany tilted her head back and moaned as she felt him slowly enter her, hardly able to believe what was happening as she felt her kid brother push through her hymen and make her into a woman.

"Oh wow... Oh sis... It feels really good..." moaned Jake. "It's so hot and tight and wet... I've never felt anything like this before! D-does it feel good for girls too?"

"It... feels really good for girls." said Brittany dreamily, lost in a haze. Her brothers cock was smaller than she'd have liked but it still filled her virgin pussy more than adequately, her walls stretching to accommodate it. So this was what sex felt like...

"Alright." she said, once she somewhat regained her senses. "Now all you do is..." But it seemed her brother instinctively knew what to do, some kind of primal urge taking over him as he began to move his cock in and out of her, slowly at first but soon picking up speed.

"Oh sis... sis... Brit, you're so tight..." he moaned. "Sex is sooo good... Ahh... Ahhh..."

Can't argue with that, thought Brittany, savoring the feeling of the young boy's cock thrusting in and out of her. "Harder, faster... Fuck me harder, little bro... Fuck your sexy big sister!"

She doubted he knew what the word fuck meant, but he seemed to get the gist of her message, increasing the power and speed of his thrusts until he was pounding her like a jackhammer.

"Ah ah ah ah AHHHH!" she cried, as waves of pleasure crashed over her. She knew it'd be good, but she'd never imagined this... Never in a million years.

Jake, noticing her huge, bouncing tits at eye level in front of his face for the first time, reached up and started squeezing and groping them, one in each hand.

"OH!" she cried out. "Oh yes, more! Play with my big tits!"

Not slowing his thrusts at all, Jake pushed his head to the left one, licking and kissing it all over before suckling the nipple. Brittany cried out in ecstasy. It felt so amazing. She couldn't believe the amount of pleasure her adult body was receiving from this elementary school boy, how enticingly his lips and fingers teased her, how ferociously and satisfyingly his young rod pounded her. She didn't want this feeling to ever end.

"S-sis... I think I'm gonna... I'm gonna do that again!" moaned Jake, lifting his head up from her luscious boobs.

Brittany's back was arched, and her eyes were squeezed shut from pleasure. She clenched the shag carpet beneath her in fistfuls. "Do it, master!" she cried. "Shoot all your hot little boy cum inside, mmmm... deep inside your sister's snatch!"

"Ohhhh! OHHHHH!" shouted Jake, burying his hard tool all the way inside the beautiful older girl. Shot after shot of incestuous jizz filled her, flooding into her womb, so hot it nearly scalded the flesh which, until now, had remained untouched for 18 years.

This new sensation was enough to finally push Brittany over the edge. She didn't so much as reach orgasm as she collided with it; the sudden shock was akin to being hit with a wrecking ball.

"AAAHHHHHHHH!" she cried out, ecstasy taking her. Her pussy clenched around Jake's erupting cock, as though trying to squeeze out every drop of his delicious sperm.

When it was over, Brittany collapsed back down the floor. She panted heavily. That was incredible. So much more so than she'd ever, in all her wildest fantasies, imagined.

Jake pulled out of her, also breathing hard. She expected the boy to go soft after coming for the second time, but to her complete amazement, he did not.

'I guess it's to be expected, it's his first time, after all.' thought Brittany. After all, she didn't feel completely satisfied yet either.

She started to sit up, thinking he wanted another blowjob, but Jake stopped her. "No, sis. Stay laying down."

Brittany was confused, but did as he said. "Yes, master." she said, laying back down.

Jake got down on his hands and knees between her legs. He looked at her pussy closely.

'Ah, I guess he wants to fulfill his curiosity... I am the first naked girl he's ever seen, after all.' thought Brittany.

In an instant, Jake moved his face closer to her, extended his tongue, and gave her slit a long lick, from the bottom to the top.

"Aaaah!" cried Brittany.

"Wow, it's sweet." said Jake. He looked at her. "Did that feel good?"

"Y-yes..." said Brittany. She wanted more, and decided to risk revealing her free will by making a request. "C-can you do it some more?"

To her utmost satisfaction, Jake obliged. "From now on, don't talk unless I address you." he said, before returning to his work. He licked around her outer lips some more, then inside, even dipping the tip of his tongue into her freshly fucked tunnel.

It felt fantastic. This was obviously her first time being eaten out, but to her it felt like her little brother was a master of the art, his tongue playing her sweet box like a piano. He found her clitoris and slid his tongue across it. Before she knew what was happening, she was nearing her second orgasm.

However, just before she came, Jake got bored of pleasuring her and stopped. She could say nothing, but inside she felt frustrated. 'Make me come!' her mind screamed. 'Don't stop, please!'

Jake moved forward, so his prick was level with her entrance. 'Yes! Please! Fuck me!' she thought.

But he didn't. He simply rested the underside of his member on her sticky pink twat, and began to slowly hump against it. It felt good for Brittany, but there was no way she'd ever be able to cum from it.

"Ah..." he said lightly. "This feels good too..." In short order, though, he was ready to move on. Brittany felt like she was going insane as his cock left her once again. She needed to be satisfied! Badly!

Jake straddled her stomach, and pushed his cock, still wet from Brittany's own pussy juices, up against her right tit.

"Oh wow... So soft..." said Jake. He ground his dick into the soft flesh a little harder. "Your boobs felt good in my hands, but on my dick they're even better." He began humping the soft, perfect orb with a firm, determined rhythm. After a few minutes, he switched breasts and carried on with her left one. They were still slippery from the sperm he'd shot there earlier, which made his work easier.

'He's just using my body like an object...' thought Brittany regretfully. 'He doesn't care about satisfying me, I'm just a tool to him... A masturbation aid.' She expected herself to feel angry by these thoughts, but instead she felt... very aroused. It turned her on to think that these breasts, widely coveted and leered-at by her peers, not to mention considered two of the seven wonders of her high school, were being carelessly ravaged by a small boy too young to fully appreciate their beauty.

Jake's movements became quicker, more erratic. "Aaah! Aaah!" he groaned.

'No!' thought Brittany. 'Don't do finish again! Do it inside me!'

But Jake wasn't psychic, and he heard none of these pleas as he pinned a final thrust against her, his young member blasting a third series of thick, stringy loads all over the high school senior's soft, ample chest.

"Oh man." gasped Jake, once he was done. He pulled away from her. A thin line of semen stretched from the tip of his cock to Brittany's left nipple until it finally snapped. He sat down, leaning against his dresser, taking a moment to catch his breath.

Brittany turned her head to look at him. To her extreme sorrow, his cock was finally beginning to go soft.

"Huh? It's not hard anymore." observed Jake, confused.

"It's because you came so much." said Brittany, unable to keep her tone from sounding let down. She felt so unsatisfied.

"Aw, but I wanted to have sex with you again..." said Jake sadly.

'He's so innocent.' thought Brittany, as she watched his disappointed expression. 'He has no clue just how seriously wrong what we just did was... It's just a game to him.'

"If you wait a while you'll be ready again." said Brittany hopefully.

But those hopes were dashed by a flash of moving headlights outside the window, followed by the sound of car wheels in the driveway.

Brittany instantly looked at the clock. Ten after 12! Had they really been going at it for so long?

"Mom's home!" said Jake, shocked. He looked around his room hurriedly, then tossed Brittany a box of tissues. "Clean yourself off and get dressed, quick!" She was already doing it before he gave the order.

'If mom was here five minutes earlier, would we have heard her while we were doing it? What if we were CAUGHT doing this?' thought Brittany nervously, as tissue after tissue was thrown in Jake's wastepaper basket. The thought was too terrifying to bear. She'd go to prison. For a long time. Her plans for the future would be gone. Her life would be over. There was a creak from downstairs as the front door opened. "Brit! I'm home!" called her mom.

"Hurry, sis!" urged Jake, scared.

Brittany was going as fast as she could, but the danger was giving her an adrenaline rush, making her hands shake and scattering her concentration. She no longer felt arousal, just fear and guilt, as her common sense was quickly restored with each pound of her heart. Jake helped her with the tissues, wiping his white spunk off her skin in huge globs.

When she was satisfactorily dry, Brittany threw on her clothes as fast as she ever had before in her life. She was about to get up and dash back to her room when she heard Jake's voice.

"Okay, now look at me." he said, trying to keep his voice calm. He was using the same tone as he had when he first 'hypnotized' her. She looked at him.

"When I snap my fingers, you will go into your room and lie down on your bed. Once you do, the trance will be broken. You will remember none of what has happened here, and will believe you've just woken up from a long nap." said Jake. "And from now on, whenever you hear a certain trigger word, you will be under my control once again. And that word is..."

Jake quickly glanced around his room for inspiration. They could hear their mom's footsteps on the stairs. 'Hurry up, Jake!' thought Brittany desperately.

"Brittany? Jake? Are you okay?" asked their mom's voice.

She sounded close. Really close. 'Hurry up, Jake!' thought Brittany urgently.

Jake's eyes fell on his stack of Pokemon cards. "...Nidoking!" he blurted hurriedly. "The word's Nidoking, got it? Now quick, get outta here!" He snapped his fingers.

Brittany instantly dashed out of his room. When she was in the hallway, she looked around. No mom, yet. Too shocked to feel relief, the teen hurried along to her room, her mind racing.

On the way, she passed the staircase. Her mom was just reaching the top.

"Oh, hey mom." said Brittany, trying to keep her voice calm. "How was the date?"

Her mom looked suspicious. "I've been shouting all over the house, why didn't you reply?"

Brittany gulped. "Uh, well, I..."

"You're out of breath." noted her mom. "What, did you just climb in the window or something? You went out with Ashley after all, didn't you? I trust you with one responsibility-"

"N-no, I-" Brittany's fingers touched something in her pocket. 'Thank god.' She pulled out her MP3 player and showed it to her mother. "I was just working out with my earbuds in."

"Ah." said her mom. She smiled, relieved. "Well, hate to disappoint you, but I get the shower first. Is Jake in bed?"

"Yeah." answered Brittany. She led her mom back to Jake's room and creaked open the door. The lights were off and Jake was in bed, pretending to sleep.

"And he did his homework?"

"Yup."

"Looks like he cleaned his room, too."

"Uh... yeah. I helped him a little." said Brittany awkwardly. They closed the door and walked down the hall together.

"I'm impressed, sweetheart. Sounds like you got him to be a little angel. Maybe I can have you give me some lessons." said her mom, giving Brittany's cheek a little pinch. When she took her fingers away, she looked a little befuddled. "Maybe I'll let you have the shower first. Your workout left you all sticky."

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Well, that's the end of chapter one. I plan to continue this story, which is good for Brittany I suppose, I kind of left her hanging there. :p
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