Start of a Fallen Love
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Original - Misc › -FemSlash - Female/Female
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
9
Views:
3,374
Reviews:
4
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Currently Reading:
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
Start of a Fallen Love
This is my first story, and my first attempt at a f/f story...so please...be fairly nice, but all input is wanted...no flames. Any ideas you have are welcome, though may only be used if need them. Please be patient with me, I am writing a lot...but it does take time. All input is wanted...please let me know what you think about it and any criticism is accepted. Thank you...and enjoy!
Purely fiction...a story from my imagination...
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Chapter 1
It was a calm dark night; the stars were out in the sky, the moon shining on her face as she reached up and screamed at the top of her lungs out in the middle of nowhere…feeling that relief fall on her. Only one person to watch her and scream with her…and this is where the story ends…but let me start from the beginning…for your sake.
Never in my life had I ever met such a sexy and beautiful woman before in my life…so carefree and loving. Those brown eyes that haunted me in my dreams and chased me around during the day, although you wouldn’t consider her to be normally beautiful like any other women…no…she was different. Different in the way her body was built, different in the way that she never ever received what she deserved as far as relationships and love went. She was beautiful to me though, always smiling, always supporting someone when she couldn’t even support herself sometimes. Though she seemed like she was really happy to everybody else…something was different about her to me, and I had to find out…not knowing where it would lead when I did. Finding out that in my second semester, she was to be my roommate, but was already my best friend.
“Hey Loki, how was your Christmas break??” I asked her as we unpacked our things in our room.
“Pretty good Kira, how about you?? Good I hope?” She said as she smiled that beautiful smile of hers, reaching up into her eyes to make them light up like heaven.
“As good as can be I guess…boring for the most part…but no art or homework…haha…missed ya though…” I said as I walked over to my close friend and gave her a big hug. “Yeah? Missed ya too…” She smiled again and hugged me back. “Watch any new anime over break??” I looked up at her and smiled…feeling so relaxed around her, like I always did. “Na…spent time with the family…and my useless boyfriend…I dumped him for good this time ya know?? We’re through…I couldn’t stand it anymore…” I said with disgust on my face. “Aw…it wasn’t that bad Kira…You do deserve much better though…you’re too fun loving and kind to be bogged down by a loser that won’t do anything for you…” She said as she sat down on my bed. “Maybe so…but what can you do?” I said as I smiled at her and sat down next to her. “Any cute guys on your list for this semester?” Loki asked with a smile on her face.
“Ha-ha…no…don’t think so…” I said though I knew there weren’t any guys…only her…it was just that I was always too afraid to tell her. She had always had that effect on me…like nobody else could…but she was my best friend and that changed everything.
As I finished unpacking my stuff and setting everything up…I had to get out of the room to walk and get my thoughts all straightened out. “Hey…I’m going for a walk…I’ll be back soon…” I said giving her a hug from behind and smiling. “Okay…I’ll still be here when you get back…” She said as I left out the door, taking my coat with me.
Switch POV
As I sat down next to her, her body tensed up a little bit…the scent of vanilla wafting off her, drawing me in closer to her as I asked her about any specific guys she was interested in. She stood up at this question and continued to unpack everything as she told me no. I knew she was hiding something then, because of her evasiveness…but I wasn’t quite sure what it was. I’d find out soon enough though…She would tell me when she was ready to. She then told me she had to go out on a walk, and I told her I’d still be here when she came back…laying down, and thinking if she was straight, bi, or gay…and I was leaning towards Bi…I soon fell asleep as I pondered it in my mind.
Switch POV
What was I going to do? I wouldn’t be able to control myself if she always teased me like that, but that was always her, that was Loki…she did it to everybody with no meaning behind it. I knew for sure that she was straight and that she’d never feel that way about me, but I was greatly attracted to her…she was sexy and beautiful. Heck…I had loved her since the day I met her…but now I was supposed to keep control..I wasn’t sure if I could…but somehow, I knew I would. School work would keep me busy, I knew that much to be true, and I knew I had to tell her sooner or later…not right now though…maybe later on in the year. After I had some time to think, I headed back to the dorm…only to find loki asleep on her bed with a confused look on her face…not the normal peaceful look I would expect.
Deciding to leave her to her dreams, I went over to my computer and plugged in my music and started to work on my story, not daring to wake her up. My story was getting very detailed at this point and I was really absorbed into typing it that I had not noticed anything that was going on around me. Loki had woken up and now stood looking over my shoulder reading my story as I typed it…that was, until she touched me. My body freezing and muscles tightened, breathing sped up, and I jumped all at the same time when I realized what she was doing. I quickly took my headphones off and turned to measure her expression which seemed pleased and surprised at the same time.
“Your story Kira, it’s very good…I like it…” She said as she continued to read it and smile. “Thank you…” I said kind of tired, quickly turning my computer off before she could read anymore, I got up and laid down in my bed, intending to sleep for the night.
Switch POV
Waking up, I noticed that Kira was back and plugged in, typing away on her computer…assuming she was working on her story at the speed she was going. I slowly sneaked behind her to read the story over her shoulder, going unnoticed till I accidentally touched her. Her body froze and her muscles tensed, and she jumped all at the same time. It was kind of a funny scene; she then backed up to measure my reaction to what I had read. I was surprised…her story was very intimate and well written…it intrigued me, but so did she. She then shut her computer down before I could read any more of the story and laid down in her bed, intending to go to sleep for the night, I could tell by the way she was lying. After about 20 minutes of watching her sleep, her face turned peaceful and she mumbled something in her sleep, though I couldn’t make out what it was that she said. She was beautiful in my eyes and I wondered why guys had to be such idiots to overlook her. There was so much to love, so much about her…Her smile, her personality, her looks…everything…she was an all around a caring and beautiful woman. This was the last thought in my head as I drifted off to sleep with a contented smile on my face.
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I hope you enjoyed...please review and leave any ideas you may have for me...thank you...I'm working hard on it...so please be patient...Thank You...
Purely fiction...a story from my imagination...
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Chapter 1
It was a calm dark night; the stars were out in the sky, the moon shining on her face as she reached up and screamed at the top of her lungs out in the middle of nowhere…feeling that relief fall on her. Only one person to watch her and scream with her…and this is where the story ends…but let me start from the beginning…for your sake.
Never in my life had I ever met such a sexy and beautiful woman before in my life…so carefree and loving. Those brown eyes that haunted me in my dreams and chased me around during the day, although you wouldn’t consider her to be normally beautiful like any other women…no…she was different. Different in the way her body was built, different in the way that she never ever received what she deserved as far as relationships and love went. She was beautiful to me though, always smiling, always supporting someone when she couldn’t even support herself sometimes. Though she seemed like she was really happy to everybody else…something was different about her to me, and I had to find out…not knowing where it would lead when I did. Finding out that in my second semester, she was to be my roommate, but was already my best friend.
“Hey Loki, how was your Christmas break??” I asked her as we unpacked our things in our room.
“Pretty good Kira, how about you?? Good I hope?” She said as she smiled that beautiful smile of hers, reaching up into her eyes to make them light up like heaven.
“As good as can be I guess…boring for the most part…but no art or homework…haha…missed ya though…” I said as I walked over to my close friend and gave her a big hug. “Yeah? Missed ya too…” She smiled again and hugged me back. “Watch any new anime over break??” I looked up at her and smiled…feeling so relaxed around her, like I always did. “Na…spent time with the family…and my useless boyfriend…I dumped him for good this time ya know?? We’re through…I couldn’t stand it anymore…” I said with disgust on my face. “Aw…it wasn’t that bad Kira…You do deserve much better though…you’re too fun loving and kind to be bogged down by a loser that won’t do anything for you…” She said as she sat down on my bed. “Maybe so…but what can you do?” I said as I smiled at her and sat down next to her. “Any cute guys on your list for this semester?” Loki asked with a smile on her face.
“Ha-ha…no…don’t think so…” I said though I knew there weren’t any guys…only her…it was just that I was always too afraid to tell her. She had always had that effect on me…like nobody else could…but she was my best friend and that changed everything.
As I finished unpacking my stuff and setting everything up…I had to get out of the room to walk and get my thoughts all straightened out. “Hey…I’m going for a walk…I’ll be back soon…” I said giving her a hug from behind and smiling. “Okay…I’ll still be here when you get back…” She said as I left out the door, taking my coat with me.
Switch POV
As I sat down next to her, her body tensed up a little bit…the scent of vanilla wafting off her, drawing me in closer to her as I asked her about any specific guys she was interested in. She stood up at this question and continued to unpack everything as she told me no. I knew she was hiding something then, because of her evasiveness…but I wasn’t quite sure what it was. I’d find out soon enough though…She would tell me when she was ready to. She then told me she had to go out on a walk, and I told her I’d still be here when she came back…laying down, and thinking if she was straight, bi, or gay…and I was leaning towards Bi…I soon fell asleep as I pondered it in my mind.
Switch POV
What was I going to do? I wouldn’t be able to control myself if she always teased me like that, but that was always her, that was Loki…she did it to everybody with no meaning behind it. I knew for sure that she was straight and that she’d never feel that way about me, but I was greatly attracted to her…she was sexy and beautiful. Heck…I had loved her since the day I met her…but now I was supposed to keep control..I wasn’t sure if I could…but somehow, I knew I would. School work would keep me busy, I knew that much to be true, and I knew I had to tell her sooner or later…not right now though…maybe later on in the year. After I had some time to think, I headed back to the dorm…only to find loki asleep on her bed with a confused look on her face…not the normal peaceful look I would expect.
Deciding to leave her to her dreams, I went over to my computer and plugged in my music and started to work on my story, not daring to wake her up. My story was getting very detailed at this point and I was really absorbed into typing it that I had not noticed anything that was going on around me. Loki had woken up and now stood looking over my shoulder reading my story as I typed it…that was, until she touched me. My body freezing and muscles tightened, breathing sped up, and I jumped all at the same time when I realized what she was doing. I quickly took my headphones off and turned to measure her expression which seemed pleased and surprised at the same time.
“Your story Kira, it’s very good…I like it…” She said as she continued to read it and smile. “Thank you…” I said kind of tired, quickly turning my computer off before she could read anymore, I got up and laid down in my bed, intending to sleep for the night.
Switch POV
Waking up, I noticed that Kira was back and plugged in, typing away on her computer…assuming she was working on her story at the speed she was going. I slowly sneaked behind her to read the story over her shoulder, going unnoticed till I accidentally touched her. Her body froze and her muscles tensed, and she jumped all at the same time. It was kind of a funny scene; she then backed up to measure my reaction to what I had read. I was surprised…her story was very intimate and well written…it intrigued me, but so did she. She then shut her computer down before I could read any more of the story and laid down in her bed, intending to go to sleep for the night, I could tell by the way she was lying. After about 20 minutes of watching her sleep, her face turned peaceful and she mumbled something in her sleep, though I couldn’t make out what it was that she said. She was beautiful in my eyes and I wondered why guys had to be such idiots to overlook her. There was so much to love, so much about her…Her smile, her personality, her looks…everything…she was an all around a caring and beautiful woman. This was the last thought in my head as I drifted off to sleep with a contented smile on my face.
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I hope you enjoyed...please review and leave any ideas you may have for me...thank you...I'm working hard on it...so please be patient...Thank You...