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Soiled
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Category:
Erotica › General
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
5
Views:
10,396
Reviews:
20
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
Overture
“Sit.” It was a command, but spoken gently. She looked at him with tear-studded eyes, questioning. He only smiled to reassure her, sat upon the motel bed, and patted his knees. Wordlessly she sat down on his lap.
“A-are you…a-are you going to…?”
“Shh…bitch.” Her eyes widened in fear. She didn’t move, not even when his hands trailed to her loose blouse, unbuttoned, and slid it down her shoulders. His mouth found its way to her ear, nibbling softly. She shivered. “Let's spend a little...quality time together.”
Terrified. Taking advantage of her shock, he unclasped her bra and threw it aside. She must have felt his bulge press up against her cloth-clad ass, because she stiffened and shuffled uncomfortably. The man laughed. Hands found their way to her breasts, groping, fondling, squeezing the hardened nipples. Marking his territory.
“Please…please---ohhh…” She arched back as his fingers found their way to her crotch, kneading circles. It was hard to read her expression, one of mixed pleasure and heavy humiliation, but his cock hardened even more as her ass pushed up against it. “Don’t…” She grabbed his hands and tried to pull them away, but he only paused to hit her face. Defeated, she emitted broken sobs.
“You like it, slut…don’t you…”
Suddenly she shifted, but the man was in his prime and too quick for her. He slapped her hard, slamming her into the bed with his crushing weight. Her head hit the headboard with a dull thud but he didn't seem to care. His large palms brushed her face with such force that he sent her head reeling back. Again and again, until she was screaming, the taste of tears and filth lingering in her mouth as she sold herself with her words, that she'll do anything, she'll let him do this quietly, she'll be his slave, if he stopped...just stopped...But he just laughed and raised his hand again.
"Please...don't..."
Laughing, "And why not?" Hand raised in mid-air as if to strike her again.
She said something, but it was mingled with the tears in her mouth.
He flashed a smile of superiority that sent ripples through her flesh. "Get on your knees, baby. Now."
---
Um, yeah this is really short. I'm trying to get into the game again, so maybe my writing sucks right now. But anyways, tell me what you think, and if I should update...or just get the hell out of AFF.net. I do have a story ready for this and I WILL do more characterization later. This is, I guess...a trial run, and a prelude to upcoming smut.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me what you think though. It's important to me, in improving my writing and bringing future chapters to you all. I KNOW THIS IS SHORT though, trial-run. Trial-run trial-run trial-run. Sorry.
“A-are you…a-are you going to…?”
“Shh…bitch.” Her eyes widened in fear. She didn’t move, not even when his hands trailed to her loose blouse, unbuttoned, and slid it down her shoulders. His mouth found its way to her ear, nibbling softly. She shivered. “Let's spend a little...quality time together.”
Terrified. Taking advantage of her shock, he unclasped her bra and threw it aside. She must have felt his bulge press up against her cloth-clad ass, because she stiffened and shuffled uncomfortably. The man laughed. Hands found their way to her breasts, groping, fondling, squeezing the hardened nipples. Marking his territory.
“Please…please---ohhh…” She arched back as his fingers found their way to her crotch, kneading circles. It was hard to read her expression, one of mixed pleasure and heavy humiliation, but his cock hardened even more as her ass pushed up against it. “Don’t…” She grabbed his hands and tried to pull them away, but he only paused to hit her face. Defeated, she emitted broken sobs.
“You like it, slut…don’t you…”
Suddenly she shifted, but the man was in his prime and too quick for her. He slapped her hard, slamming her into the bed with his crushing weight. Her head hit the headboard with a dull thud but he didn't seem to care. His large palms brushed her face with such force that he sent her head reeling back. Again and again, until she was screaming, the taste of tears and filth lingering in her mouth as she sold herself with her words, that she'll do anything, she'll let him do this quietly, she'll be his slave, if he stopped...just stopped...But he just laughed and raised his hand again.
"Please...don't..."
Laughing, "And why not?" Hand raised in mid-air as if to strike her again.
She said something, but it was mingled with the tears in her mouth.
He flashed a smile of superiority that sent ripples through her flesh. "Get on your knees, baby. Now."
---
Um, yeah this is really short. I'm trying to get into the game again, so maybe my writing sucks right now. But anyways, tell me what you think, and if I should update...or just get the hell out of AFF.net. I do have a story ready for this and I WILL do more characterization later. This is, I guess...a trial run, and a prelude to upcoming smut.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me what you think though. It's important to me, in improving my writing and bringing future chapters to you all. I KNOW THIS IS SHORT though, trial-run. Trial-run trial-run trial-run. Sorry.