Zemnas: Hero or not?!

It was an ordinary day in the large town where people were living peacefully and happily but with a problem in the east. A problem that could end up in a war between the two towns, but the people in king Oberon's town were not troubled. The king's righthand men and general of his troups was Frederick Hintfore; he was a nice, kind and understanding man. Frederick had won many people's hearts in the town for the king and Oberon was pleased to have Frederick at his side.

The town was of a ordinay kind with a blacksmith, bagery and such things. All the people in the town felt that they had all that they wanted in the town, with dogs and children running around in the streets and the adults watching all with much love and devotion in their eyes.

This day the king had got an letter from the town in the east that said that the people there had no place to go to, there were no room for them in their own town but the king and Frederick knew better. They knew that the town in the east did have room for their people and was using that excuse for getting their spies inside Oberons town. They had to prevent that form happening at all costs no matter what they had to do.

"Frederick, what would I have done if I hadn't thou? Had I been as good and mercyful king as I am today?"

Frederick nodded "It is in your highness' nature to be a good and mercyful man and therefor a good and mercyful king. And I'm sure that you will have done as well even if I weren't here."

"You're too king to me Frederick but now there is time for you to go home to your family and spend some time with them. I will see you tomorrow, at noon. Goodnight."

"As you wish my king. Goodnight."

Frederick was glad that he had gotten some sparetime to spend with his family and now when his son was growning up, soon to be a man himself. When Frederick got closer to his home he saw that his son was outside playing with some of the other kids in the town.

"Zemnas! How are you my son? How has your day been so far?" Frederick said, as he was just a few feet away from his son.

"Hi father. I'm fine and how are you?"

"I'm fine son."

"The day has been fine too. And how has your day been father?"

"It has been tiring but I will be okay. I have got the rest of the day off so i thought that we could do something."

Zemnas was filled with joy with the thought that he would spend the rest of the day with his loved father.

"That would be great father. I'm so happy that you are home so early that we have time to do things together."

Zemnas had hardly seen his father for weeks but now he had the whole day to be with him. But only to be taken away from him by his mother. His mother had a split personality; one day she was the happy, singing mother he knew but the other day she could be the angry and abusing mother that had made many of his bruises and broken bones. Zemnas didn't know if his father knew that his mother had this split personality and that she was the reason that he was bruised and at times must have a healer look at his broken bones. When he was asked about his injuries he just said that he had fallen at home and that he was okay. No one knew that his mother was the source to all his injuries. Not even his best friend Nathaniel. They all believed him when he told them that he had fallen, but he longed for someone he could tell the truth to. But he hadn't found anyone he could trust enough to tell.

Frederick walked in the front door and called out "Lilith are you there?"

"I am. How was your day, darling"

"It has been a day with much to do, but the king gave me the rest of the day off. He and I thought that we as a family could do something."




this isn't the end of the first chapter but I/we can't write anymore at this time.
Until next time, see yah.

cookies to the readers. flamers are allowed. :P

/Kach and Koof