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a teenagers life
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Category:
Erotica › General
Rating:
Adult
Chapters:
3
Views:
3,482
Reviews:
0
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
a teenagers life
I own these characters. These characters are fictional and are in no way real. However I do not own the songs in this story.
The basic plot of the story is this guy (DJ) and his band are trying to get famous, along the way DJ gets into different relationships and ultimately who he wants to be with.
These are the main characters in the story:
DJ: 16 year old guy just trying to get through high school and become famous with his band. He is the lead singer for his band. About 6 feet tall, a little muscular, takes different kung fu styles and has dirty blonde hair and blue eyes.
Micah: 18 year old guy who just graduated high school. Is the bass guitarist for the band. 6 foot 2 inches tall, brown hair, brown eyes and has a six pack.
Nathan: 17 year old guy. Has been DJ’s best friend since he was 6. He is the electric guitarist and co-vocalist. 6 foot 1 inch tall, pretty slim, brown hair, blue eyes and goes insane during concerts.
Aaron: 16 year old guy. Is the younger brother of Micah and the drummer for the band. 6 feet tall, muscular, black hair, brown eyes and very quiet.
Local System Failure (LSF): the band, they aren’t very good at writing songs so they mostly play some of their favorite songs from System of a Down and Avenged Sevenfold.
Chrissy: 16 years old the hottest girl in school. Has been friends with DJ since he was 8. 5 foot 10 inches tall, slim, long blonde hair, beautiful blue eyes and B size breast.
Ashley: 16 year old babe, who likes to tease guys by rubbing against them and getting them hard. 5 foot 11 inches, pretty slim, short brunette hair, gorgeous brown eyes and B size breast.
Katie: 17 years old very hot and is Nathan’s cousin. Has been friends with DJ since he was 7. 5 foot 12 inches, pretty skinny, short red hair, green eyes and just barely a C size breast.
Evan: 16 years old, the starter quarterback and best basketball player for our school. 6 foot 5 inches, dirty blonde hair, brown eyes and very muscular.
Max: 33 year old woman, my neighbor. 5 feet 11 inches, average weight, black hair, brown eyes and C breast.
The Bounce: the only local club that lets teenagers 16 and older get in.
The story:
Chapter 1: my life
__Hello and my name is DJ and I’m about to tell you a story… my story. It’s a story of love, music, sorrow and raging teen hormones. I know you won’t want to know my background, too bad it ties into the story later. My dad was a wanted criminal when I was a baby, so my mom told him to leave him and never come back, and he did that. When I was 12 my mom married this guy, Mark. That’s it no more back ground on me, I’ll continue the story now__
I was laying on the couch in the living room watching tv, “man it’s 11:30 already. Mom and Mark should have been home by now” phone rings “hello” “hello sir this is the censored city hospital we regret to inform you that a Mr. And Mrs. censored have been involved in a car wreck” “is it serious?” I asked the person worried about my mother “I’m afraid it is” I hung up the phone and got my car keys and rushed over to the hospital.
(about 20 minutes later at the hospital)
“Hello I’m looking for Mr. And Mrs. censored?” I asked nervously, slamming my hands on the desk. “are you a relation?” the lady asked me, obviously angry that I slammed the desk. “hold on… can you please wait in the waiting room while I get Dr. censored.” I walked into the waiting room and sat on one of the nice leather chairs. A few minutes later the doctor entered the room. “are you my parents doctor?” “yes I am.” the doctor answered with a sigh of grief. “son I am very sorry but… your step-father died.” “what about my mom?!” I asked him demandingly. “she… didn’t make it.” I sat there, with a blank stare thinking, ‘why did this happen to me? Why? Why?!’. “son do you have any relatives that I can call or anybody you can stay with?” “I suppose I can stay with one of my friends.” I answered with grief and sadness in my voice. “do you want to call them or should I?” “I’ll call them.” I went to the payphone and put in a quarter. The first person I called was my best friend Nathan. “hey what’s up” “hey man it’s DJ.” “hey man what’s up.” “I’m at the censored city hospital and… my mom and mark are dead. And I was wondering if I could stay at your house for a little while, until I get a court order to get an apartment.” “sure man I’ll be there in a sec.”
(about 2 weeks later)
“I hear by Give DJ censored by the right invested in me, in a court of law of the state of Kansas, the right to his own residence.” the judge stated. I got my stuff packed and found a nice apartment in the outskirts of KCK. I moved into my new apartment with the help of my friends. I could now do whatever I wanted, I even have sound proof walls so that I can be as loud as I want.
Please read and review. Also please give me comments and ideas on what I can do to improve my writing and suggestions for the story. I should have a new chapter in two or three weeks and I promise this one will have sex in it.
The basic plot of the story is this guy (DJ) and his band are trying to get famous, along the way DJ gets into different relationships and ultimately who he wants to be with.
These are the main characters in the story:
DJ: 16 year old guy just trying to get through high school and become famous with his band. He is the lead singer for his band. About 6 feet tall, a little muscular, takes different kung fu styles and has dirty blonde hair and blue eyes.
Micah: 18 year old guy who just graduated high school. Is the bass guitarist for the band. 6 foot 2 inches tall, brown hair, brown eyes and has a six pack.
Nathan: 17 year old guy. Has been DJ’s best friend since he was 6. He is the electric guitarist and co-vocalist. 6 foot 1 inch tall, pretty slim, brown hair, blue eyes and goes insane during concerts.
Aaron: 16 year old guy. Is the younger brother of Micah and the drummer for the band. 6 feet tall, muscular, black hair, brown eyes and very quiet.
Local System Failure (LSF): the band, they aren’t very good at writing songs so they mostly play some of their favorite songs from System of a Down and Avenged Sevenfold.
Chrissy: 16 years old the hottest girl in school. Has been friends with DJ since he was 8. 5 foot 10 inches tall, slim, long blonde hair, beautiful blue eyes and B size breast.
Ashley: 16 year old babe, who likes to tease guys by rubbing against them and getting them hard. 5 foot 11 inches, pretty slim, short brunette hair, gorgeous brown eyes and B size breast.
Katie: 17 years old very hot and is Nathan’s cousin. Has been friends with DJ since he was 7. 5 foot 12 inches, pretty skinny, short red hair, green eyes and just barely a C size breast.
Evan: 16 years old, the starter quarterback and best basketball player for our school. 6 foot 5 inches, dirty blonde hair, brown eyes and very muscular.
Max: 33 year old woman, my neighbor. 5 feet 11 inches, average weight, black hair, brown eyes and C breast.
The Bounce: the only local club that lets teenagers 16 and older get in.
The story:
Chapter 1: my life
__Hello and my name is DJ and I’m about to tell you a story… my story. It’s a story of love, music, sorrow and raging teen hormones. I know you won’t want to know my background, too bad it ties into the story later. My dad was a wanted criminal when I was a baby, so my mom told him to leave him and never come back, and he did that. When I was 12 my mom married this guy, Mark. That’s it no more back ground on me, I’ll continue the story now__
I was laying on the couch in the living room watching tv, “man it’s 11:30 already. Mom and Mark should have been home by now” phone rings “hello” “hello sir this is the censored city hospital we regret to inform you that a Mr. And Mrs. censored have been involved in a car wreck” “is it serious?” I asked the person worried about my mother “I’m afraid it is” I hung up the phone and got my car keys and rushed over to the hospital.
(about 20 minutes later at the hospital)
“Hello I’m looking for Mr. And Mrs. censored?” I asked nervously, slamming my hands on the desk. “are you a relation?” the lady asked me, obviously angry that I slammed the desk. “hold on… can you please wait in the waiting room while I get Dr. censored.” I walked into the waiting room and sat on one of the nice leather chairs. A few minutes later the doctor entered the room. “are you my parents doctor?” “yes I am.” the doctor answered with a sigh of grief. “son I am very sorry but… your step-father died.” “what about my mom?!” I asked him demandingly. “she… didn’t make it.” I sat there, with a blank stare thinking, ‘why did this happen to me? Why? Why?!’. “son do you have any relatives that I can call or anybody you can stay with?” “I suppose I can stay with one of my friends.” I answered with grief and sadness in my voice. “do you want to call them or should I?” “I’ll call them.” I went to the payphone and put in a quarter. The first person I called was my best friend Nathan. “hey what’s up” “hey man it’s DJ.” “hey man what’s up.” “I’m at the censored city hospital and… my mom and mark are dead. And I was wondering if I could stay at your house for a little while, until I get a court order to get an apartment.” “sure man I’ll be there in a sec.”
(about 2 weeks later)
“I hear by Give DJ censored by the right invested in me, in a court of law of the state of Kansas, the right to his own residence.” the judge stated. I got my stuff packed and found a nice apartment in the outskirts of KCK. I moved into my new apartment with the help of my friends. I could now do whatever I wanted, I even have sound proof walls so that I can be as loud as I want.
Please read and review. Also please give me comments and ideas on what I can do to improve my writing and suggestions for the story. I should have a new chapter in two or three weeks and I promise this one will have sex in it.