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No Greater Price
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Category:
Erotica › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
5
Views:
12,009
Reviews:
17
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
No Greater Price
"Hey, Maya," Lizzy greeted her friend at the bar.
"Lizzy, you made it," Maya exclaimed. Three men were hanging over her, listening to her tell them a story, but when she turned away from them they seemed to understand they should drift away.
"Well, it's only the first time you ever asked me to do something with you; of course I came," Lizzy said, and then immediately blushed.
Maya was one of the really popular girls at her college. While Lizzy was pretty shy, she did have a few friends, though no one she was really close to. But Maya was always the center of a crowd, with boys hanging on to her every word, other girls imitating the way she dressed and asking her her opinion on everything you might imagine.
Maya had all the best clothes, the best jewelry, and just seemed like someone Lizzy really wanted to *be*, not just someone she wanted to get to know.
"Well, I'm really glad you came," Maya said with a wink. She leaned closer to Lizzy so she could be heard over the din of the bar, and Lizzy could see the flash of her lacy red bra. Lizzy blushed again, and immediately looked away.
"Should I get a drink or something?" Lizzy asked. She glanced at the bar, wondering if she should try to order something that had alcohol in it. Seeing as how she was only eighteen and didn't really look much older, it seemed a little dicey. But somehow she didn't think the bartender would card her if Maya ordered the drink.
"Nah. This place is dead," Maya said with a dismissive wave of her hand.
Lizzy blinked. It seemed packed, and pretty lively to her, and she recognized some of the cooler and more attractive students from school around the room. But Maya definitely knew what was what, so she would trust her read on the situation.
"We really should go to the club I was telling you about," Maya said in a confidential tone. "The one that's totally killer. It's tough to get in even if you *are* willing to pay the crazy cover price. But I know someone, and if you want, I'll get you in for free."
"Really?" Lizzy reached back automatically to smooth her hair. "That'd be so cool -- I'd love it!"
* * *
Half an hour later, they were at the door to the club.
"I didn't realize it was all the way across town," Lizzy said. "Kind of...deserted out here, too, except for the people trying to get in."
Sure enough, there was a line of people, some of them shoving, some of them bargaining with the people ahead of them, lots of them trying to tell the bouncer they knew someone so that they could get past the velvet rope.
"It's the old warehouse district," Maya explained. "They have to have a big place, you know?"
"Right, right," Lizzy said quickly. She pulled her coat tighter around her, feeling a little self-conscious in her mini skirt and revealing top. She didn't usually dress like this, but she didn't want to look like a loser when she was hanging out with Maya.
"Bruno, baby," Maya cooed at the bouncer.
"Maya, hey gorgeous," the man shouted. He picked Maya up and twirled her around. Maya just laughed and hit at his shoulder in a flirtatious way.
"Who's the new hottie?" he asked next, giving Lizzy a grin.
"This is Lizzie," Maya told him. "Isn't she great?"
Bruno looked Lizzie up and down, and whistled. "I'll say. Boss'll love her."
Lizzie bit her lip, not knowing what to say.
"Well, we should go in," Maya told him.
"Awww, always leave too soon," Bruno grumbled. He hugged Maya, and Lizzie noticed when they pulled apart that Bruno was caressing Maya's breast through her shirt. She swallowed and pretended to be examining the metal door to the club.
"So? Let's go in," Maya said with a laugh. She pulled Lizzie's hand into hers, and guided her inside.
**** End Part 1 ****
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"Lizzy, you made it," Maya exclaimed. Three men were hanging over her, listening to her tell them a story, but when she turned away from them they seemed to understand they should drift away.
"Well, it's only the first time you ever asked me to do something with you; of course I came," Lizzy said, and then immediately blushed.
Maya was one of the really popular girls at her college. While Lizzy was pretty shy, she did have a few friends, though no one she was really close to. But Maya was always the center of a crowd, with boys hanging on to her every word, other girls imitating the way she dressed and asking her her opinion on everything you might imagine.
Maya had all the best clothes, the best jewelry, and just seemed like someone Lizzy really wanted to *be*, not just someone she wanted to get to know.
"Well, I'm really glad you came," Maya said with a wink. She leaned closer to Lizzy so she could be heard over the din of the bar, and Lizzy could see the flash of her lacy red bra. Lizzy blushed again, and immediately looked away.
"Should I get a drink or something?" Lizzy asked. She glanced at the bar, wondering if she should try to order something that had alcohol in it. Seeing as how she was only eighteen and didn't really look much older, it seemed a little dicey. But somehow she didn't think the bartender would card her if Maya ordered the drink.
"Nah. This place is dead," Maya said with a dismissive wave of her hand.
Lizzy blinked. It seemed packed, and pretty lively to her, and she recognized some of the cooler and more attractive students from school around the room. But Maya definitely knew what was what, so she would trust her read on the situation.
"We really should go to the club I was telling you about," Maya said in a confidential tone. "The one that's totally killer. It's tough to get in even if you *are* willing to pay the crazy cover price. But I know someone, and if you want, I'll get you in for free."
"Really?" Lizzy reached back automatically to smooth her hair. "That'd be so cool -- I'd love it!"
* * *
Half an hour later, they were at the door to the club.
"I didn't realize it was all the way across town," Lizzy said. "Kind of...deserted out here, too, except for the people trying to get in."
Sure enough, there was a line of people, some of them shoving, some of them bargaining with the people ahead of them, lots of them trying to tell the bouncer they knew someone so that they could get past the velvet rope.
"It's the old warehouse district," Maya explained. "They have to have a big place, you know?"
"Right, right," Lizzy said quickly. She pulled her coat tighter around her, feeling a little self-conscious in her mini skirt and revealing top. She didn't usually dress like this, but she didn't want to look like a loser when she was hanging out with Maya.
"Bruno, baby," Maya cooed at the bouncer.
"Maya, hey gorgeous," the man shouted. He picked Maya up and twirled her around. Maya just laughed and hit at his shoulder in a flirtatious way.
"Who's the new hottie?" he asked next, giving Lizzy a grin.
"This is Lizzie," Maya told him. "Isn't she great?"
Bruno looked Lizzie up and down, and whistled. "I'll say. Boss'll love her."
Lizzie bit her lip, not knowing what to say.
"Well, we should go in," Maya told him.
"Awww, always leave too soon," Bruno grumbled. He hugged Maya, and Lizzie noticed when they pulled apart that Bruno was caressing Maya's breast through her shirt. She swallowed and pretended to be examining the metal door to the club.
"So? Let's go in," Maya said with a laugh. She pulled Lizzie's hand into hers, and guided her inside.
**** End Part 1 ****
Let me know what you think so far!!