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Synesthesia in Red

By: FaggotxxMostxxEsteemed
folder Fantasy & Science Fiction › General
Rating: Adult +
Chapters: 2
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Chiasmus







Alright.


 


Stop.


 


Breathe.


 


Take everything into account.


 


Are you breathing...?


 


--are you?


 


"...aaAAAH!"


 


Yes. Indeed, you are.


 


Excellent.


 


Let's continue down the check-list, shall we?


 


Any bodily damaged?


 


M..My arms aren't moving...I--I can't..BREATHE!


 


Ah, ah, ah. We've already been over that point: We've
established you can breathe.


 


Hmmm...Slightly impaired motor-skills...--Alright, well...Do
you know where you are?


 


..No...I'm freezing. It's dark, even though... My eyes
are open, I feel them. Then--...I can't..I can't see. I'm blind.


 


BRILLIANT deduction, oh smart-one. Care to enlighten me on
any other revelations?


 


There's someone here. I can hear breathing. There's
someone just to the left of me...Oh--Oh God. ...Move...Damn it, MOVE!


 


You can't just WILL yourself to move after---after all THAT!
Hah! What did you expect?


 


What's HAPPENED to me? After all WHAT? Where the HELL am
I?


 


Funny you should say hell...


 


It's moving! Something's moving clos--!!


 


"--GAHH!"


 


Ooh. That sounded awful.


 


CAN'T BREATHE!


 


Most people having the life choked out of them experience
the exact same phenomenon. Weird, huh?


 


NO! --!


 


Poor kid. Just stop struggling. It'll all be over soon.


 


There...ya' see?


 


Dying is only natural, after all.





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