An Eternity of Love
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Category:
Romance › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
2
Views:
1,086
Reviews:
1
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
This is a work of fiction. Any resemblance of characters to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. The Author holds exclusive rights to this work. Unauthorized duplication is prohibited.
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A/N: Okay people. This is an individual piece done by my girl friend and I. Yes...I may be a girl myself but she and I both appreciate the beauty and sinfulness of the act of flesh between any genders imaginable. We have yet to indulge in such an act and I doubt that we ever will together, being that we are of such a young age and are still in search of the one to satisfy us most. Nonetheless, this an individual work done by the two of us. It is, and has by no means any association to do with any of Anne Rice's work. My girlfriend is quite partial to the name of Louis, and despite the fact that Anne Rice has a character by that name does not mean that she owns it, there fore with the use of the name Louis in this story it is by no means of plagiary.
Okay then, this is my first vampire story and, I know such a thing may be considered a sin to some devoted Anne Rice fans, but I have yet to read her vampire series, and I have only recently seen the movies 'Interview With A Vampire' and 'Queen of the Damned'. Of course I watch Buffy the Vampire Slayer and have recently begun to watch Angel (but only because of Spike) and I know the whole jest of vampires and such.
The way this story has been written may be considered a little odd to some but I have been doing it since the ninth grade (eleventh grader now ^-^). My girlfriend and I each take turns writing a chapter then switch off. She wrote chapter 1, I wrote chapter 2, she wrote chapter 3 and so on and so forth. We each thought up a character and some how wrote them to be acquaintances in the story and later lovers. Just to get everyone's opinion I will post up two chapters at a time, my girlfriend's and mine, and I would like everyone's opinion on whose they like the best and on what we should both improve on.
Okay, that was probably one of the longest author's notes that I have ever written but if people don't end up reading it I'll be angry and won't post. I'll give fare warning again to read this at the end of the chapter so to those of you who actually read this long ass thing, thank you and enjoy the story.
Title: An Eternity of Love
Rating: NC-17
Author: yaoi_luver _16 & her girlfriend ^-^
Content: Slash! This means guy/guy sex people homosexuality! You have been forewarned.
Disclaimer: Okay people this story is MINE! My girlfriend Ind I made it up and if anyone decides to take our idea I will hunt you down and sue for plagiarism. Drake, Louis, Cyric, Lady Emily, all of them are my girlfriend's and mine so this is fare warning and don't thing I won't sue, 'cause you can damn well bet your ass that I will!
Chapter I
London, England 1866
The smell of blood was getting stronger. Human blood. The crimson liquid that he thrived for each night. The fluid he stole right from their soft bodies.
He took a step forward, yellow eyes with a vertical slit down in the center, ran over the people in the busy night street. He continue to make his way down the pavement, mortals passing him left and right.
He turned his head slightly to the right, ack tck tendril of his hair fell over his brow and he lifted a pale hand to tuck it back behind his ear again.
A woman, young and fresh, was looking at a stand with many beautifully glittering jewelry. The vampire's eyes ran down the waist of her dress, and took in the silky fabric of her attire. She must have been worth a lot, for she was dressed properly, the simple gestures she made with her delicate hands as she bargained with the merchant, even the way she smelled told that she was of wealth.
Would she do for his feast tonight?
He looked her over once more, then turned away. Perhaps not. It was the blood of the evildoer he wanted this night. The thief, murder, conman, the abuser... All of those were his definition of an evildoer. They tasted better. The blood that was pumped from an evil heart. His favorite.
He turned off onto an interesting street, his hand clasped together behind his back.
The street seemed to be an alley. Fat, gray rats ran across his path some, it seemed, had red eyes. Dirty rodents. He could smell the stench of human vomit and urination. The odor overpowered his senses. This place must be home for the poor or homeless.
His black leather shoes echoed off of the stone pavement.
He suddenly felt as if he was not alone. And he was right.
The vampire turned around, meeting eye-to-eye with a man waving a knife at him. The man had a thick beard and mustache growing upon his face. His thick curls atop his head were unattached to, and his clothes were merely rags.
The vampire more or less pitied the man. He lurched at the vampire, but he was not quick enough. The slender, pale hand from the vampire held him a good two feet from the ground. The man shouted his curses, and he was suddenly pressed between a hard body and the wall of a brick building.
His eyes widened as he saw the man that pinned him lean towards his neck.
Oh, he was so sweet. An arm curled around the man's neck and his cold fingers pressed against his jaw, pulling his head to the side to expose the warm flesh of his neck. The vampire leaned in, pressing his tiny fangs into the vein, letting the blood spill onto his welcoming lips.
He saw into the man's heart as he drank. The faces of his victims, the terror that they went through until he put them to death; most women, raped, beat, tortured. 'What did he get out of it?' Thought the vampire.
The heart of the man was weak, near stopping, so he slipped from Louis' arms, landing at his feet.
The warm, living blood traveled through his hungry veins, soaking into his preternatural flesh, making his skin warmer, more human looking. His tongue slithered from his lips and licked off the remaining droplets of blood before he walked out of the alleyway and back into the company oe moe mortals.
A/N: okay that was chapter one. My girlfriend wrote that on so tell me what you think and weather you would like me to relay any messages to her. If I get one flame review about using the name Louis I will be incredibly pissed because that only means that you did not read my author's note at the beginning or this one either so just always read my author's notes so you don't get me mad. This story will end up being a slash story incase you didn't read the description to the story either, fare warning. Please review!^-^
Okay then, this is my first vampire story and, I know such a thing may be considered a sin to some devoted Anne Rice fans, but I have yet to read her vampire series, and I have only recently seen the movies 'Interview With A Vampire' and 'Queen of the Damned'. Of course I watch Buffy the Vampire Slayer and have recently begun to watch Angel (but only because of Spike) and I know the whole jest of vampires and such.
The way this story has been written may be considered a little odd to some but I have been doing it since the ninth grade (eleventh grader now ^-^). My girlfriend and I each take turns writing a chapter then switch off. She wrote chapter 1, I wrote chapter 2, she wrote chapter 3 and so on and so forth. We each thought up a character and some how wrote them to be acquaintances in the story and later lovers. Just to get everyone's opinion I will post up two chapters at a time, my girlfriend's and mine, and I would like everyone's opinion on whose they like the best and on what we should both improve on.
Okay, that was probably one of the longest author's notes that I have ever written but if people don't end up reading it I'll be angry and won't post. I'll give fare warning again to read this at the end of the chapter so to those of you who actually read this long ass thing, thank you and enjoy the story.
Title: An Eternity of Love
Rating: NC-17
Author: yaoi_luver _16 & her girlfriend ^-^
Content: Slash! This means guy/guy sex people homosexuality! You have been forewarned.
Disclaimer: Okay people this story is MINE! My girlfriend Ind I made it up and if anyone decides to take our idea I will hunt you down and sue for plagiarism. Drake, Louis, Cyric, Lady Emily, all of them are my girlfriend's and mine so this is fare warning and don't thing I won't sue, 'cause you can damn well bet your ass that I will!
Chapter I
London, England 1866
The smell of blood was getting stronger. Human blood. The crimson liquid that he thrived for each night. The fluid he stole right from their soft bodies.
He took a step forward, yellow eyes with a vertical slit down in the center, ran over the people in the busy night street. He continue to make his way down the pavement, mortals passing him left and right.
He turned his head slightly to the right, ack tck tendril of his hair fell over his brow and he lifted a pale hand to tuck it back behind his ear again.
A woman, young and fresh, was looking at a stand with many beautifully glittering jewelry. The vampire's eyes ran down the waist of her dress, and took in the silky fabric of her attire. She must have been worth a lot, for she was dressed properly, the simple gestures she made with her delicate hands as she bargained with the merchant, even the way she smelled told that she was of wealth.
Would she do for his feast tonight?
He looked her over once more, then turned away. Perhaps not. It was the blood of the evildoer he wanted this night. The thief, murder, conman, the abuser... All of those were his definition of an evildoer. They tasted better. The blood that was pumped from an evil heart. His favorite.
He turned off onto an interesting street, his hand clasped together behind his back.
The street seemed to be an alley. Fat, gray rats ran across his path some, it seemed, had red eyes. Dirty rodents. He could smell the stench of human vomit and urination. The odor overpowered his senses. This place must be home for the poor or homeless.
His black leather shoes echoed off of the stone pavement.
He suddenly felt as if he was not alone. And he was right.
The vampire turned around, meeting eye-to-eye with a man waving a knife at him. The man had a thick beard and mustache growing upon his face. His thick curls atop his head were unattached to, and his clothes were merely rags.
The vampire more or less pitied the man. He lurched at the vampire, but he was not quick enough. The slender, pale hand from the vampire held him a good two feet from the ground. The man shouted his curses, and he was suddenly pressed between a hard body and the wall of a brick building.
His eyes widened as he saw the man that pinned him lean towards his neck.
Oh, he was so sweet. An arm curled around the man's neck and his cold fingers pressed against his jaw, pulling his head to the side to expose the warm flesh of his neck. The vampire leaned in, pressing his tiny fangs into the vein, letting the blood spill onto his welcoming lips.
He saw into the man's heart as he drank. The faces of his victims, the terror that they went through until he put them to death; most women, raped, beat, tortured. 'What did he get out of it?' Thought the vampire.
The heart of the man was weak, near stopping, so he slipped from Louis' arms, landing at his feet.
The warm, living blood traveled through his hungry veins, soaking into his preternatural flesh, making his skin warmer, more human looking. His tongue slithered from his lips and licked off the remaining droplets of blood before he walked out of the alleyway and back into the company oe moe mortals.
A/N: okay that was chapter one. My girlfriend wrote that on so tell me what you think and weather you would like me to relay any messages to her. If I get one flame review about using the name Louis I will be incredibly pissed because that only means that you did not read my author's note at the beginning or this one either so just always read my author's notes so you don't get me mad. This story will end up being a slash story incase you didn't read the description to the story either, fare warning. Please review!^-^