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Wow... That was fucking amazing. I'm slightly disturbed which is rare since I had been confident that I had seen it all but looks like I was wrong... It was extremely graphic with the whole wing amputation thing. Really, really well written... I love blood and the lemon that went along with it was the icing on the cake! I so want to threaten you for a quick update!!! Write!!!! Type the story until your fingers bleed!!!! You're story kicks ass!!!! And Phoenix is so cute in Casimir's dress... LoL!

I'm also impressed by how you portrayed Phoenix and Aether's hate-love relationship (though neither has outwardly spoken the L-word to the other sincerely yet...^_^) It's the ultimate sado-masochistic pairing! Drawn to each other by what they both believe to be neednt ant and pure hatred. I love the plot! I love the characters! Hell, I love you for writing this for me to love!!!! Please please please update soon or I'll stab you with strawberry pocky!!!!

Let me tell you, I never review storys on this site, but I just had to, after reading this far. All I can say is,WOW!
I happened upon this by chance and I blanched slightly at the size of it, but I began reading and have been reading all day, stopping only din dinner, a shower and to fix the downstairs computer. Forgive me, I'm rambling.
I love it. I am a huge fan of obsession and irrational love and this story is full of both.. It had amusing and dramatic moments and I just had to keep reading. Please update this as soon as possible. I will keep my eye out for this and review the next chapter.

By the way, this has influenced me to go back to my story on the fanfiction net and get the damn thing completed. Thank you ever so much, and keep up the good work. This is excellent.

Luv Rie
xx

Really really well written. Its got everything. I am waiting for the next chapters with anticipation.

I have fallen in love with your story! It gives me such pleasure to read your work. It has such originality and storyline is so wonderfully steamy... Aether is hot!

Hi there!

Okay, after reading all 59 chapters I finally get to review but first I have a little question: WHEN DO YOU UPDATE...? yeah.
Okay since this is a really long story and so a review for it should also be of an appropriate lengh, but I 'm having that terrible head ache so I'll just leave a
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!.
I love the Aether/Phoenix-Scenes but I also can't get enough of Ari/Gryps (they're so funny)... Draco is cool, too and... oh, but my fav character is ARES!!! He reminds me of Oliver Wood though (Harry Potter). I like his fast babbling... it's like myself... ^^;;

Okay, I can't wait to read on... poor Phoenix, that's mean! I mean you could have gotten him some of Aether's clothes even IF they are to big for him but NO you had to torture him even further...

Bye! ^_^x
Horizont

You are such a evil author, poor Phoenix forced to parade around in a frilly little dress. Oh how you torture him so. (Smiles) This is a beautiful story, alas I have a sad feeling it will be ending soon.

You\'ve got me waiting on the very tip of my tip-toes.

I\'ve beeadinading this story for the longest. This...it\'s hard xplaxplain my views on this great fic cuz I got SO many! I guess I\'ll just leave it at- it\'s wonderful and please don\'t let up on this wonderful story.

Great story. Well written. You describled the characters\' behavior and charactistics very well. It contained sad, and happy plots in this story. It\'s a very well developed story that contain other aspects besides \'sex\' scenes. The descriptions of the locations or places or other aspects of the story are good too. I like it very much. Great Job!!

Gods sing your praise. Know that. I have spread this fic to eighteen people, so know that I am causing a renewed following.