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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so glad you updated! i had decided that this was one of those stories i'd never get to see the end to. thanks for proving me wrong by the way. can't wait for the new chapter and the new site looks really awesome too!
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finey uypdated!!! I have bin waiting fore AGES! i belived that you would never continiu the story!!! I'm graitfull you did thougt! ^^ Thank you soo mutch!
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLLY GEEZES>2 years!where ya been...paradise island, didnt want to leave eh?...BUT THANK PHOENIX GOD YOUR BACK ON THE STORY!IT RULES!
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
alright. ive red the entiere thing!!!! it tock me like 3 Weeks! wich is a lot fore me. and i wanna now what's gonna happen!!!! pleas oh pleas wright moor PLEAS!
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one word. wow! this amazing, this is the first fiction that has made me cringe (when aether see\'s ash kissing phoenix) and cry (various parts lol) poor Aether :(, I also somehow managed to fall in love with gryps ^_^. i visited your website too,keep up the good work
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon
amazing fic
Silver
amazing fic
Silver
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January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is an awesome fic... expecially since it\'s an orignal... it\'s triple the awesomeness.... it\'s really col how yo\'ve figured out the personalities and the plot line... i like reading about when they were in the present htough...
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
***Happy Dance*** You updated!! Yay! It\'s been awhile though, so I kind of forgot what happened in the earlier chapters... Whoops... That\'s ok, I\'ll spend my tine re-reading cause the fic is just that good! I\'ve noticed that there is a really dramatic change when it comes to the tone of the story. There is far less humour than from the earlier chapters. Everything is just so angsty now. I just have this continual feeling of sorrow for Phoenix. Aether\'s such a jerk to him, the sadistic bastard!!! (But still really hot... but so irresponsible!! And just as equally angsty as Phoenix...)
Sniffles... I need some silly, stupid fluff to cheer me up... I think I\'ll read the earlier chapters now... Where everyone was naive and happy!!!! Wahhh... Poor Phoenix!!!! I keep forgetting that this is a flashback and that, in reality, Phoenix and Aether are still in that underground area and its Christmas and there\'s a newborn horse. Cute!! Anyway, thanks for the update, I should stop this review before it gets way too long. But I can\'t help it! Your story is just THIS good!!!! May the Muses bless you with inspiration for the next chapter!
Sniffles... I need some silly, stupid fluff to cheer me up... I think I\'ll read the earlier chapters now... Where everyone was naive and happy!!!! Wahhh... Poor Phoenix!!!! I keep forgetting that this is a flashback and that, in reality, Phoenix and Aether are still in that underground area and its Christmas and there\'s a newborn horse. Cute!! Anyway, thanks for the update, I should stop this review before it gets way too long. But I can\'t help it! Your story is just THIS good!!!! May the Muses bless you with inspiration for the next chapter!
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!
Great chapter!!
lol conspiracy against Aether, he deserves to mope for awhile.
I think past Draco is much colder than present Draco...
Please write more soon... I love this story!!!
By the way, Do you have a place to review at your website? because that\'s where i read the chapters and everything.
Great chapter!!
lol conspiracy against Aether, he deserves to mope for awhile.
I think past Draco is much colder than present Draco...
Please write more soon... I love this story!!!
By the way, Do you have a place to review at your website? because that\'s where i read the chapters and everything.
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September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Just Lovely.