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i ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

you're definately right about the phoneix sleeping with someone else thing. sometimes i forget they're gods with major issues. been reading too much angsty slash apparently. though whether there is a too much is debatable. i think this might be my favorite chapter. happy!phoneix (or at least as happy as he can get) is very much fun. sometimes i wonder why i keep reading this. usually i don't go for the sadism/masochism stuff and too much angst makes me feel angsty myself, but this is different. i think it must be your characterizations and writing style (which is love, by the way) and the suspense that i always feel with this story. if you ever publish something, let me know. i'll totally buy it and praise you forever. talk to you next update i suppose. at least this wasn't a cliffhanger. those evil things really make me feel the two weeks. ;)

Wow, that was fluffy indeed! :D I don't think those two have had anything liek this in all 72 previous chapters, so cute and cuddly. I mean, they were having sex and there was no blood! XD They so deserved this, after all you put them through. :P They're still screwed up (don't worry, one chapter won't make anyone believe thay're hit a sudden point of sanity), but... this was nice. Really, really nice. :) Makes me smile and I can't stop.

Aether will stop blanking Phoenix like that as soon as his pretty bird starts to enjoy his new freedom. Or that is what I think anyway. Thx for another great chapter! :D

poor phoneix! i think aether may have been worse in this chapter than in the last. aether's signals are very mixed, i think that maybe he just doesn't know what to do with phoneix now and decided to go with that old fallback of hurting him. i don't know, aether is always confusing to me, i can't imagine what it must be like for phoneix. i understand the not writing from aether's point of view, but you have to admit it would be extremely interesting. i'd like to know how he feels about his state of half-soul, though i suppose there's a good chance he doesn't feel anything either way. he's too wrapped up in phoneix to care. it would be amusing to see the next chapter with phoneix trying to make aether jealous, though i can't imagine with who since he hates everyone. of course, that might make it funnier, but with this being the angst-fest it is at the moment i suppose i should expect another heavy chapter. it was a good chapter by the way. seeing phoneix jealous is priceless! those two have such a horribly long way to go. at least that means more story for me. yay!

i like lucky breaks. they happen to me all the time too. and thank you for not leaving us with too bad of a cliffhanger, though the fact that i have to wait two weeks for the next chapter is just wrong. this chapter was so sad. i feel so badly for phoneix all of the time. makes me teary sometimes. i'd like to see an internal monologue from aether right now. that twisted little mind of his must be spinning. if only he could understand. oh well these two will probably never get any semblance of a happy ending, definitly not any time soon anyway. but that phoneix got denied even that little bit of caring that aether usually gives him is heartbreaking, especially after such a brutal beating. poor thing's so fucked in the head he can hardly see straight. i really ought to be used to this by now. 'til next chapter then!

You made perfect sense! It's not your arguments that were messed up, it's those boys' relationship. XD It doesn't work when judged with our usual "reality" in mind. XD

"I beg you". *sigh* *is delighted* I died a little when he said that, breathtaking! I totally love that scene and read it several times. And it's so like Aether to leave Phoenix like that after he begged.
Those two can't be helped.

that was just evil. i hate cliffhangers so bad!!!!! good chapter though. i really love ari, bastard that he is. them being reborn as twins was his dream come true apparently. too bad for gryps though. but maybe he secrectly likes it? i don't know. i have a soft spot for the twincest thing. i like being able to see into his thoughts a little more. this being his home and knowing what went on there clears things up quite a bit. i love psychology and learning about multiple personalities is one of my favorite things. turns out that a lot of people with the disorder exhibit great artistic talent in one way or another. did you already know that, or is gryps the artist by accident? lucky break if it wasn't on purpose, and if it was intentional it just makes me love you that much more. authors who actually do research to back up their stories rock! of course i already knew you were a competent writer. i suppose i can excuse the evilness of that horrible cliffhager since you do such a good job and all. this time. talk to you next update then! ;)

...you're doing this on purpose, aren't you? *stares at mysterious box*
But I don't hate Aether! I mean, from time to time I want to beat some sense into him, but he and Phoenix are so... well I guess I can say they're perfect together while Phoenis is in chains. XD

I really, really loved this story. I stumbled over it on Friday…I am at chapter 55 now, joined you mailing list and checked out your artwork…its awesome. I love obsessive relationships like ´Bronze -Zetsuai since 1989` or ´Mirage of Blaze` and I think you fic is just as professional as these two Anime/Manga. I cant wait for the next Present Arc…but right now I really have to continue reading so I have to stop my review here…

You are simply awesome

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