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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't remember if I got to review this before my computer freaked out btu that was HOT!!! VERY well done I loved it!
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...I\'ve never read something like that, but very well done
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. Dressing up for peaches, who\'d uv thunk it? I never could quite understand food sex. But you seemed to make it so so foody!
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January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shocking in the end but yet it was funny and a great use of words.
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December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
add more, ADD MORE PLEASE!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my freakin god this was like the best original story i have ever read. It was so perfectly detailed and you can just see \"vivian\'s\" face as she thinks about the peach in her........lmao it was great *huggles* best best............i\'m obnoxious.....*blink* i just cant get over it!!!! thank you
-Kaiik
-Kaiik
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October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow!
i loved your story, it flowed so smoothly and was very imaginitive. i would never have thought of using peaches, but you pulled it off successfully. Keep up the good work! hope to read some more of your work soon. Your very skilled. ^_^
i loved your story, it flowed so smoothly and was very imaginitive. i would never have thought of using peaches, but you pulled it off successfully. Keep up the good work! hope to read some more of your work soon. Your very skilled. ^_^
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September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Simply Peachy!! ...Sorry, couldn\'t resist the cheesy joke. ^__^
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August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely must commend you on your creativity as well as your descriptive powers. This is my first time here and I must say that there isn\'t a story would have rather read first.
I really like your thinking and must commend you on you brilliance. I\'m not sure that what you proposed is physically possible but if it is then wow. It must feel great. I won\'t be so insensitive as to ask you if you have ever tried something like this. Instead I\'ll just use my imagination.
Not many would have thought up something so erotic or slightly humorous. I know that it wasn\'t really all that humourous but I found that the irony tickled my funny bone. I liked your twist at the end. Now that was sheer brilliance. I thought is was a nice way to wrap up the story and you didn\'t leave anything unanswered.
I liked how you were descriptive but not overly so. It shows that you don\'t want to bore your readers. You kept the reader on the edge of their seats and interested. I for one loved it. I must say that I was more than a little excited by your writing. I can\'t wait to read your next story. I hope that you can enthrall me with this next one like you did with the first one.
I hope your creative guiniess continues...
I really like your thinking and must commend you on you brilliance. I\'m not sure that what you proposed is physically possible but if it is then wow. It must feel great. I won\'t be so insensitive as to ask you if you have ever tried something like this. Instead I\'ll just use my imagination.
Not many would have thought up something so erotic or slightly humorous. I know that it wasn\'t really all that humourous but I found that the irony tickled my funny bone. I liked your twist at the end. Now that was sheer brilliance. I thought is was a nice way to wrap up the story and you didn\'t leave anything unanswered.
I liked how you were descriptive but not overly so. It shows that you don\'t want to bore your readers. You kept the reader on the edge of their seats and interested. I for one loved it. I must say that I was more than a little excited by your writing. I can\'t wait to read your next story. I hope that you can enthrall me with this next one like you did with the first one.
I hope your creative guiniess continues...